I’ve Got a Bone to Pick with the Champion

Once upon a time, there was an author whose book received poor grades because he was slow and infrequent in his updates. You know what I mean😁😁

Because this is my first novel, there are many shortcomings. I changed a lot of things, but I found that the client was not synchronized, which affected everyone's reading quality. I'm sorry, you can save it again and watch it.

I want to add table tennis, tennis, equestrian and many other sports to it. Can you help me think about it? What kind of sports should I add? Forget about football and basketball. . There are too many, so I just want to write about the niche 😁😁😁

This is the first time I read a competitive sports article on a male channel, and I thought the story was quite novel. Since it is a sports article, it may be more professional and contain more professional terms. The story frame is good, but some of the language needs to be reconsidered. Words like "fuck" should be used as little as possible 🤭. Come on^0^~!

This is the first time I read a sports article, so I can't make random comments, so I can only speak from my own perspective. The concept of the article is very good, and the imagination is very big. However, after reading the first few chapters, I felt that it was all dialogue. In fact, more descriptions of environmental actions can be added to highlight the characters. Come on, author!

1. Why do SLR cameras need to be redeemed with points, not RMB? 2. Athletes have very strict dietary standards and cannot eat indiscriminately.

The summer solstice coincides with a solar eclipse. On this longest day, I wish author Ha Pang that his good mood will turn into good words, and good words will lead to good results!

The first one? It feels much better than what many newcomers can handle, and it looks very comfortable, not the kind of long sections that make your eyes sore. Although it is a sports article, it is quite funny and the protagonist is very trendy.

After reading this book, I realized that table tennis is not only national-level but also world-level. This is the first time I heard about it.

Not bad! Collected! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!