My Bug Is Women's Clothing

Reminds me of the Three Great Demonic Books, which were written many years ago and were even rated as the Three Great Demonic Books. Let's talk about my thoughts after reading it. The writing is good, the sense of involvement is good, the storyline is a bit thin, and the characters could be enriched. When writing a book about cross-dressing, you must first grasp the reader's mind. The point of introduction to this kind of person is definitely not how beautiful you are. Rather, the embarrassment of cross-dressing, the excitement after cross-dressing, and the stimulation of pairwise comparison are difficult to grasp. If you are not careful, the entire book will be banned. In the past, there were two popular routines on female channels, transsexuality and remarriage, that is, a man traveled through time and became a woman, but still lived the same life as a man and flirted with girls at the same time. The other kind is that a man turns into a woman and ends up getting married, writing about life after marriage, all kinds of things, but men know men best, so they usually write very gay. That's about it. I suggest you to enrich the scenes and characters, especially the first few chapters, which are a bit flat. The opening scene should be fuller.

Hey, why doesn't the author post anymore? I remember that the author would post some posts every time. Today, I feel a little uncomfortable every time I post 🤓🤓

Let me make a suggestion. The author you are writing about women's clothing, so I suggest you, the author, get to know the brand and culture of women's clothing. You don't need to understand everything, just a little understanding is fine. For example, the protagonist's first women's lo skirt can be divided into sweet, cla, goth, etc. If you don't know, describe the brand classification less and just talk about how beautiful the clothes are. Come on

Personally, I think the highlight of this book is its subject matter. If it is well written, it has great potential. Talk more about the system settings and character psychology, and the character relationships should be more complicated. The most important thing is don't give up and keep writing. You can consider filling in the loopholes in the previous chapters. After all, the first impression is very important. In fact, there is a book with a similar theme next door. I won't name it, but it is for reference.

The writing is quite good, but the writing pace is too fast. If it were two or three chapters written by another author, it would definitely be eight or nine chapters.

Why is it so similar to the women's clothing Shenhao system?

After reading so many articles on women's clothing, 👴 I concluded one thing: Wearing women's clothing can get powerful tile throwing

I hope to follow more and I will order them all once they are available.

If my bug was women's clothing Would you choose women's clothing?

It's noon, please update soon. (Good afternoon)

I haven't read it yet. How many words does the author expect to write in this book?😏

Come on! 😁😁

I can't understand some kaomoji (ノ๑`ȏ´๑)ノ⌨ (I don't even need the keyboard anymore)

I didn't expect that the author would still remember my post.

There will always be a few copies thrown away. Fortunately, you have survived it!

It feels like the protagonist really thinks of herself as a woman...