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Ennn, what can I say, this book is okay, but I think the biggest poisonous point is to change the world. It is impossible that even if you change a little bit, you will still go back to the way you did not change at the beginning. The world is like this, and the entertainment industry is not as beautiful as you think. It is the same everywhere, and I also said that gangsters are not in China, OK? (Personal🤫)

Author, do you know that there is a new author who is slow to update, and his book crashes? Do you understand what I mean?

The heroine is Ju Jingyi! I'll go for it, brothers!

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Opinions of an old bookworm: Let me tell you my views on longing-themed novels. How should I put it? I have read more than a dozen longing-themed novels, but not many of them remain on my bookshelf. This is the second one for you. First, regarding the setting of the work, I have read more than a dozen novels with yearning themes. Many of them have poor work settings. It feels like in the entire novel, except for the protagonist, who is a normal person, everyone else is an idiot. The protagonist seems to know everything. There is nothing he doesn't know. He is always better at cooking than Huang, has the best acting skills in the world, and has a higher emotional intelligence than anyone else. I didn't say it, but with the character of this and that protagonist, let alone time travel and rebirth, with the system close to him, even the Tathagata Buddha would not survive three episodes in real life. But those authors write so well. How could the heroine fall in love with the hero at first sight? I'm really a loser. The other heroines are at least celebrities. How can a handsome man like you fall in love with a young man like you who you haven't seen before? (I haven't seen such a situation in the book "Maojiu You" so far. Even if the cooking skills are about the same as Huang's, he didn't try to steal Huang Lei's job. This is indeed well written.) Secondly, the heroine, I read the novel "Yang". Out of ten, three are Reba and seven are sisters. The key is to write more about them. So awesome, so fake (I hope you don't write about the two of them in this book, the heroine really sucks) Third, cheating, all the longing novels I have seen so far are about time travel, rebirth, systems and the like, and this book by you, Zhuojiu, is no exception, with time travel and golden fingers. But what I want to say is that it doesn't matter if you cheat, but don't go too far. If you go too far, it will really become a mindless novel. The protagonist always has some incredible skills, which is really hard to watch. Fourth, the writing style. I don't know why. Many novel authors nowadays are not very good at writing, but they have many fans. Last time I commented, "Is there something wrong with the writing here?", And many people criticized me for saying ****, just don't want to read it. Don't read anything like that, I'm really uncomfortable. (Zhuojiu, you've done a good job in this aspect. Although your writing skills are average, but because you are willing to accept the suggestions given by readers, I will continue to follow this book. It shows that your three views are not bad. Generally speaking, people with good three views will not be able to write novels. How bad is it?) Fifth, update, many short descriptions are obviously not very good, but because the author updates quickly, there are also many readers (in this aspect, you really should learn a lot about turbid wine, just one update these days, just one update, forget it, you are still arrogant, this is also The reason why I gave you four stars for this book, the update is too slow) I will just say these few points. I hope you can stick to Zhuojiu. There are not many longing-themed novels that I like so much. Of course, these comments only represent my personal opinions. I hope everyone doesn't like it and don't criticize it.

I suggest that you become a star as soon as possible, and you can be proficient in language, acting and various skills. But when you write about Douluo Dalu, what the hell is the fight that breaks the sky? I want everything. Is that your thing? I don't know what will happen next, but I feel upset when I see this. I especially recommend that you don't copy songs later. The characters in your world may be shocked when the protagonist sings, but from the reader's point of view, they are just smug clowns! Isn't this enough for a star with top-notch acting skills and proficiency in various skills? Bit off more than you can chew,

To be honest, I have read a lot of works by fans of Longing, all of which are masters of cooking and other all-round skills. In fact, there is no need to be so comprehensive. It is better to specialize in career, otherwise it will be unreal and there will be no point in watching it. Moreover, everyone in Longing has their own position. If you, a person with better cooking skills than Huang, appear in the show, your positioning will be repeated. Will Huang Lei support himself in the show in the future?

My feelings about Ju Jingyi are not very good. I saw a video some time ago. Ju Jingyi came out of a room and many fans gathered around to take pictures. However, Ju Jingyi blocked her face. Her assistant scolded the fans like she was scolding a dog, but she had no reaction.

What are you writing about? The protagonist pays money to build roads in the village, and then the village rents the protagonist's house to others without the protagonist's consent! It's really haha! ! !

I don't feel like my sister will be the heroine, but I still hope to write more about her, I really like her!

Do you know the author? Your current behavior is very easy to get a razor blade.

Great author, you might as well not write about Nie Yufei. Although you can't write about the main task of "changing the world" without writing about her, I feel uncomfortable when you write people to death.

Life is hard enough. I read novels to relax. If I don't like tragedy, sweet, refreshing or funny ones are all fine. Just don't want tragedy. Goodbye may not be suitable for me.

There's something wrong with this introduction. Aren't you a legend when you shoot stars at the beginning? If you really shot a star, your card position would be higher than anything else, right?

I don't dare to click on a book that is updated randomly. Fear of explosion

A good plot must be fed with shit, so forget it, it's not a one-time thing, it's awesome! You are great!

I didn't expect this dead eunuch to be alive. It's so rare.

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