Douluo of the East Emperor Douluo

The sentences don't make sense, the logic doesn't flow, the writing is poor, or I can't understand what you're writing.

And this work is to test the waters. I originally considered writing Kamen Rider, but Kamen Rider is a bit complicated, so I wrote Douluo, and I have to review Kamen Rider, which is a bit annoying. But if this work does well, I will write Kamen Rider. It is annoying, I like it, and thank you for your support.

The paragraphs should be divided into more paragraphs, so that it can be read easily and not feel depressing.

I strongly request that the paragraphs be divided into more paragraphs, instead of one long paragraph after another, it looks very messy.

Let Bibi Dong be the heroine. Bibi Dong is not bad at this period, and she is also so beautiful. Isn't she delicious?

Don't worry, I won't enter the palace. This is the promise between you and me. Now that I have entered the society, I don't have time to think about the same as before. I have been looking for a job in the past few months, so I'm sorry!

Hold your son's hand and grow old together, this is what a mother said to her son.

Please support me, I finally found a book that can save me and form a CP with Bibi Dong! 🤓

If you can't see it, just stay. If you can't see it, just go. The world is so big without you, and the earth will still turn. Author: Don't leave such useless nonsense. The more you say this and that, the more enthusiastic they become. Just use more code words. Go your own way and leave those sunspots with nowhere to go.

Damn it, this is the point of poison. Where did Qian Renxue come from, if he wasn't the Qian Family's angel martial spirit? A child's martial spiritinherits the martial spirit of his parents! The protagonist doesn't have an angel spirit

If the protagonist is Qianxunji, then he won't like Bibi Dong, right?

You can say that I have a bad temper, but don't say it so harshly or harshly. You can scold me, but don't scold my family and book friends. Really, keep a line in your life so that we can meet each other easily in the future.

I read the comments you wrote. Some brothers said that I am watery. I felt the same when I wrote it, but I will change it in the next chapter.

I think my writing skills are good, but I need to practice them again. I will publish new books at a later date, which will be announced separately. They will be about Ultraman and Kamen Rider.

Bibi Dong's martial spirit is a spider. And there are two spiders.

If you can't see it, just stay. If you can't see it, just go. The world is so big without you, and the earth will still turn. Author: Don't leave such useless nonsense. The more you say this and that, the more enthusiastic they become. Just use more code words. Go your own way and leave those sunspots with nowhere to go.

I updated too late last night and didn't get enough sleep, so I'll update tomorrow. I'm really sorry!

I'm not feeling well, so I'll write again tomorrow. We apologize for any inconvenience.

Sorry for the delay in updating this week, but I promise I will post this chapter in the morning

Well, as you can see, I delayed the update again and was too sleepy.

Damn it, the author probably hasn't studied Douluo very much.

Brother, this looks good, why call me a bastard?

Brothers, I'm a little panicked now. I feel like I'm a loser. What do you think?

Will update again tomorrow! I feel a little unwell

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Author, please give me some suggestions. The pace is too fast. The plot jumps too fast, like running water. Just think of the two soul rings of your Donghuang Bell, which are basically mentioned in one stroke. It's painful to watch. For example, you have to express what you want to do. Passed by in one stroke. I don't know what to think. Hope it can be improved. You also said it was a test of the waters!

The seeds are different, Qian Ren is gone, right?

The reason I haven't updated in the past few days is because I'm stuck. When I was about to update, I was informed that I had to go for a military physical examination, so I'll update tomorrow.

Is it okay for a level 37 person who knows the fourth soul skill to explain, and a level 37 and level 50 soul power to explain it?