The Legend of Yiren: City of Desire

The poison test is over∽ This article really scared me. The author was too bold to write this article. He also used the first person and I was exhausted. To be honest, I have never been in contact with the medical and health system. I didn't expect that there are so many twists and turns. I feel that I will never be able to look directly at the hospital... There is a slight flaw in the article. The exclamation points are used too frequently. I will try Several of Poison's novels have this problem. Did you learn it at New Oriental? ╮(╯＿╰)╭ Secondly, the character of the protagonist feels a bit too naive. In the chapters I saw, as soon as a girl is involved, the protagonist immediately cleans himself up, which is a poisonous point. Also, I don't know if it's because I haven't seen it yet, but the plot in the book is a bit inconsistent with the mainstream aesthetics. Well... I think it should reflect reality, but always keeping it in a depressing atmosphere may make readers "break their strings." Finally, the title of the book should really be changed. This title gave me a feeling of "Pure Heart·Chasing Dream Showbiz" (ಡωಡ) Why didn't I invest? Because I was afraid that when I woke up... Well, why did the article I invested in disappear from the world? !

If you go back to Dongya Fuyi! Thank you for the great review! Thank you for giving me a lot of valuable advice and making me realize my shortcomings in writing. In response to the key points mentioned, I will give the following answers: 1. Disclaimer: The fictional works written do not involve any real people, events, etc. Please do not link the fictional works with reality. 2. This article is about reality. If you are not bold, you can only write fairy tales. 3. This novel is expected to have more than a thousand chapters, spoilers below. The first half of the plot will definitely be very depressing because it is too realistic. In the second half of the plot, I will be very positive and change the status quo through the perspective of the protagonist. Including hospital reform, drug pricing reform! 4. The writing is bold, but many things are realistic. It can be said that the hospitals involved in medical rebates are 100%, and only individual doctors are different. 5. It would be a pity if this book was banned, because everyone has not understood this book and has not seen the contribution this book has made. Yu Guan: This book points out many problems and is more comprehensive than the leadership message board. Yu Min: It is like a little life tip that helps everyone avoid being deceived and identify authenticity. For example, if the doctor asks us to go to an outside pharmacy to buy medicine, my way to deal with it is not to go. I will ask for medicine from the hospital. 6. The situations mentioned in the article in hospitals, clinics, clinics, and pharmacies are very common. With a responsible writing attitude, I spent four years investigating and summarizing it and writing it into a paper. I don't seek to become a whistleblower, but it can be regarded as my modest contribution to society. 7. The identity setting of the male protagonist. For the male protagonist, this is a growth process. Only when he has seen many problems and experienced major right and wrong, will he know how to change the status quo and do something big that benefits the country and the people, just like the "social responsibility of gratitude and giving back" mentioned in the article! Why set him to be rich and powerful, because then he has the ability to change the status quo. For example, if he were a garbage picker, he wouldn't know so much. Even if he knew it, he would still have to succeed in counterattack to change it. That would not be writing about reality or a fairy tale, but a myth! Thank you for the above!

The writing is clear and smooth, but the number of words is still short, so keep up the good work.

Dear partners! Boss! Thank you all for supporting my book these days! Because I have to deal with some things recently, so I will update one chapter every day, which will be done step by step. But please rest assured that there are more than sixty chapters in the manuscript. And I continue to create every day. Thank you for trying the drug, and please feel free to invest. This novel took me four years to collect the plot. In the spirit of impartiality to some matters, we have also made careful investigations. I hope that people who read my book can summary something about some events and use it for their own purposes. It can help everyone and bring you a pleasant reading experience! That's what I want to see most! 🙂🙂🙂

666, Not signing this kind of book is simply a waste of money. Come on and create!

Thanks to Brother No. 2 Shudongren, Miss Bai Yin, The Book of Night, Eastern Smile, Ning Er, Yaoxian HT, for their long-term support and encouragement! Special thanks to Brother No. 2 Shudong Man for his valuable opinions on my creation! Thank you also for your continued votes of recommendation for me! At the same time, thank you all book friends for your collection! There are also enthusiastic friends in the comment area! Thank you! ❤️❤️❤️

The author stepped on the blockade and tried wildly

Okay, I've seen it, let's make progress together 🤝

Received, please come on ヾ(◍°∇°◍)ﾉﾞ

I just finished reading it and I think the best part of the article is the psychological description of the characters. Whether it's the change in "my" view of Mr. Liu or the negotiations in the sauna room, the author is expert at controlling each character. Using the first person has advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that it is easy to feel the sense of substitution, but the disadvantage is that it is easy to be verbose. The author could also work on the details. Not bad, come on, keep following up! Look forward to visiting again and leaving comments.

After reading it, the writing is pretty good! I am just worried that the author will be beaten by a doctor in the future! 😁😁😁

1. At the beginning of the book, it is said that Qing'er called "me", which seems wrong at first glance. As for why it is wrong, I won't say much. 2. "I" don't know other people's psychology, I can only guess. 3. It's best not to use the first person in urban writing. Really, it will get awkward later in the writing. (Please improve or provide management)

School has started, so I can only vote for you on the weekend.

I have long felt that if Lu Xun lived in contemporary times, he would have to keep writing. I love reading what you write! 😊

Ahem, I don't know if the author has extensive experience in this area, or if he is a member of the system. As a freshman in college, I have not yet been exposed to society. To be honest, writing this kind of subject is still in the first person, and the author is still worthy of admiration. In terms of writing style, because it is in the first person, it focuses more on realism. The writing style of a novice is enough, but the literary style is very fake. This has advantages and disadvantages. If it is a literary novel that looks a bit fake, it can be regarded as an imaginary world, and no one will criticize it. The writing style is slightly realistic, and it may not be liked by the editor when it involves this kind of subject matter. In terms of the plot, there is a lot of stuff at the beginning, which is very attractive to those of us who don't know much about it. The character creation is also very real. Everyone has his own helplessness. The author makes the character "I" flesh and blood, which is in line with the moral concepts of ordinary people. Overall, aside from the first-person persuasion and the harsh subject matter, it is totally worth watching. I hope you can persevere, come on＾0＾~ There are still very few books of this realistic type

Why are you so full of ink? And my stomach is empty! The author has such great writing skills. It's really interesting. If the writing is too realistic, Qidian will not be happy with it.

Comment each other, cheers (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's well written, deeply rooted in reality, and very touching. And the characters are written in a very three-dimensional way, as if there really are such people. The name is just so-so, there is nothing interesting about it. But let me be honest, it is probably difficult to sign a contract with the subject you started with. . . . No matter how good your writing is. . . Recent review has been a bit strict. . . You touched on a sensitive subject But this is just my opinion, maybe the editor is very optimistic about it! Come on Duck!

The character creation is relatively rich, and the article feels natural when reading. Sometimes the protagonist's adaptability makes people feel that this is a matter of course. As a student party member, I have heard of some things in society, or often read about them in books, but I may be avoiding them and not wanting to believe them. I may not meet students who work as bartenders, but I don't want to meet them either. I heard that the protagonist will work hard to change some situations, I'm really looking forward to it

Already received, mutual receipt is too much. If the contract is signed, is it okay for mutual receipt?

The writing is very realistic, I hope it can be completed 👍👍

Realistic novels are difficult to write because we all live in reality. You write well. Come on, keep updated!

Come on! Looking forward to your second part!

It's finally finished, looking forward to the next one