Pet Apricot

A few sentences at the beginning of the novel create a bustling and lively world, and the descriptions of the environment in the middle or interspersed with the text are also quite interesting. Lanterns, boats, tulle, and heaters - a series of representative images with outstanding and unified characteristics highlight the contemporary nature of the scene. In addition, the simple and elegant writing style also fits with the historical and geographical dimensions of the novel, laying the foundation for the reader's sense of immersion. Adhering to the dual principles of there must be an eye-catching event at the beginning and that you must cross the water if you fall into the water, when Chu Jiaoxing traveled through time, the original nun who was not like a nun had just been fished out of the river by the powerful and unfathomable alluring Prince Qi. He took the opportunity to point out his identity before the time travel and the origin of the unexpected incident, and at the same time controlled the reader's reading rhythm with a compact plot. In the three golden chapters, in addition to the introduction of the setting, the author skillfully uses the accidental incident of a singer to throw herself into the arms of a wrongdoer. He describes straight to the point the character of the male protagonist who seems to be unruly but actually has a mental mysophobia. He also conducts research on each other from the perspective of the male and female protagonists. The combination of concrete descriptions and a trio of lively male supporting characters who are essential to making the novel laughable gave the novel's character portraits an initial sense of reality and appeal. At the same time, it also buried the suspicion that "the male protagonist is so handsome but the female protagonist actually shaved her hair to escape from marriage", which made the novel more sticky, and the overall performance is good. The original owner was born in the Chu family, an imperial businessman who was in decline. Due to his mother's early death, his stepmother's flattery, his sisters' frame-up, and his birth with different eyes, he was regarded as a stupid evil star from the sky. After Chu Jiaoxing traveled through time, he planned to deal with his scumbag father and vicious stepmother, and set a flag - to make the male protagonist Beigong Qianqiu turn around and marry her on time. From the perspective of the plot direction, it is a model that has a wider audience and is more commonly used. However, under the same general trend, to attract readers depends on whether the rhythm and details are well grasped, whether it is exciting enough, and whether the emotional drama is sweet enough. Currently, it seems that the plots are intertwined, the rhythm is compact and solid, and the heroine's quarrel is acceptable. The interaction between Beigong Qianqiu and Chu Jiaoxing also portrays the sweet feeling of pseudo-marriage first, love later, which heralds the arrival of the law of true fragrance. After so much praise, in fact, this book also has room for improvement. For example, the plot of the house fight can be polished to be more natural, and the plot of the heroine using her talents to defeat others can have more layers and reversals, so as to maximize the emotional value of the plot. Furthermore, the author can be bolder and the writing style can be lighter to achieve a dazzling effect. Overall, the book is very interesting, good luck to the author~🙌🏻

She traveled through thousands of years and came here with the family heirloom pearl. She woke up from a dream on the deck of the boat and was shocked at the sight. He has a distinguished status, carries a peerless Mingzhu, and sits leisurely in the small pavilion of the painted boat, with an astonishing appearance. ​She has a pair of extremely shocking peach blossom eyes, but the color of her pupils is extremely rare: the left eye is hazelnut color, and the right eye is amber, crystal clear, like a finely carved jade gem. ​As the eldest son of King Qi, he has a beautiful appearance that captivates the country and the whole country, and his voice is elegant and noble. However, such a person actually has two eyes of different colors: amber pupil on the left and hazelnut pupil on the right, exactly symmetrical with her. When they first met, she consciously released her "poisonous gas" in her sleep, but it left a deep impression in front of him; and he told her, I am your fiancé, and deliberately flirted with her. When she let down her guard against him, became dependent on him, and regarded him as her salvation, he firmly said that he would break off the engagement. The two broke up on bad terms, but they were not simple at the same time. She had hidden conflicts at home, and he had disputes with strange circumstances. She is Chu Jiaoxing, and he is Beigong Qianqiu. They have a pair of Xuanming orbs and two pairs of peerless eyes. Let's see how the situation develops. Qianqiu's doting on apricot is all in "Being apricot".

When I first started reading the story, the heroine farted when she came, haha. An ancient saying about time travel, turned out to be just a fart, made Beigong Lingyun fall in love with her, and Beigong Qianqiu wanted to break off the engagement to her. But when I thought the bald Myolie was actually broken off by Beigong Qianqiu, aha, there was another twist. It turned out that Beigong Qianqiu was interested in her. If you're interested, Ping'er is here to make trouble again. But fortunately, there is also a concubine, Li'er, who can be considered comforting. Ling Yun teased her, and the interaction between her and Qian Qiu was quite fun. I just like the way I like it but can't get it. Still looking forward to what will happen next. Traveling can be both bitter and sweet. Very good. The image of a female man is too vivid. In fact, I thought she just liked Beigong Qianqiu, but it turned out that she shaved her beloved's hair again. It's really a turn of events. The only thing I want to say is, there are all beautiful men inside, please give me a dozen.

Short review: This is a truly sweet book. Author: Qingdenghuashang The old book "My Phoenix is a Thousand Years Old" has been completed) He is her fiancé, the famous eldest son of Prince Qi, who is extremely talented and unparalleled. When they first met, she was dressed like Brother Yixiu and farted in front of him. He just smiled softly and took her to break off the engagement. Unwilling to be humiliated, she sneaked into his mansion and was determined to get back everything she lost. However, she was framed by the sister's brother and sold herself into slavery to work for him for free for four million and forty years! After that, she devoted herself to practicing the art of deception, cheating his father, his uncle, and his brother. One day, she would definitely finish all the money to pay off the debt! Book review: When I saw the title of this book, my first feeling was sweetness. Perhaps this is the sixth sense and deepest expectation of all female compatriots! This book feels more exciting than the first one, especially the introduction, which made me feel full of eroticism. However, I think if it is to be more cute, it is best to express it through dialogue. If it is just one paragraph, it will feel complicated at first glance. In terms of content, it is really exciting. There is nothing picky about it. Especially the scene of waking up is too strong. This setting is the most interesting setting I have ever seen - pigs fart, and one fart determines the world! What makes people even more surprised is that the two people are still engaged. Could it be that this is how a thousand-mile marriage is connected. Anyway, if you don't fight, you won't get to know each other, and if you don't get a diamond, this porcelain job is not that easy to get. I think the author can work more on the expressions and language of the two people, so that the expressions are richer. The clothing and movements have been well described. If this aspect is strengthened, it will be more interesting. General comments: The overall setting is very good. Slow work will bring out fine work. The author must finish it seriously, otherwise the blade will be given away to you!

Chu Jiaoxing's appearance was so different, she farted, it was fresh and refined, haha

The main plot line is good, the language is delicate, and the writing style is relaxed It is considered to be quite good among the ancient Chinese novels I have seen There may be some flaws in the setting in the book I don't know if it is the ancient Chinese that I understand It does not mean that ancient Chinese novels must correct the characters' language But it is undeniable that as a modern person, there may still be some barriers when communicating with ancient people Many modern words, except for the hours and seconds that appeared in the previous chapters, the author came up with them But there are many words that should be quite difficult to understand from the perspective of ancient people, and the prince was not puzzled. .

The heroine of this book, Chu Jiaoxing, comes across as a fresh and refined woman. I believe that all my friends will feel the same when I say this. After all, whose heroine will fart loudly in front of everyone (even though there are only four outsiders) as soon as she appears? I have to say that although this way of appearing is a little tasteless, it does leave a deep impression on people. The heroine's future brother-in-law, Beigong Lingyun, was deeply impressed by Chu Jiaoxing just because of this fart. Besides, Chu Jiaoxing's character reflected in the subsequent plot is also very lovable, straightforward and clear in hatred. Her joy and anger when she is with Beigong Lingyun are also very real and not artificial at all. It's great that Deng Deng can write such a heroine~ I'm really looking forward to the plot~ I hope Deng Deng will continue to work hard hehehe!

This male protagonist really satisfies the fantasy needs of many girls! In the entertainment scene, he appears cynical, but in reality he is an arrogant and tidy man with a first-rate ability to identify bitches, and he is also merciless when dealing with green tea monsters. In front of people, she has a vicious tongue, but she has a beautiful face that makes people hate her. In the back, she is a handsome young man who is burdened with secrets. What independent and self-reliant outstanding woman will not be aroused to protect her? In short, Beigong Qianqiu is a fairy with thousands of faces. Aside from the author's writing style, the biggest highlight in the novel is the interaction between the male and female protagonists. The vicious green tea sister sent her fiancée home to punish the heroine. After discovering that the heroine's personality changed drastically, she no longer regretted the heroine's previous actions and started the flirting mode... The heroine followed closely and embarked on the road of false love and conquering the boss. This kind of plot can never be tired of watching. I rub my hands and look forward to the high-energy moment when the male protagonist shows his strength and protects his wife.

(First of all, I won't comment. It's all based on my mood.) I won't comment on the book title copy. It is very ancient and has a charming writing style. The wording is very gorgeous, and it can be seen that the author has a lot of background, and some parts are beautifully written. Although I write about ancient Chinese proverbs, I really don't read online articles, so I can't comment objectively. The writing style and so on vary from person to person, so I can't say it's perfect. Write carefully. The plot is quite smooth and sweet, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very cute. Heterochromatic pupils, heterochromatic pupils! I must say heterochromatic eyes! I'm so cute about this. Okay, I'll stop here with my comments. I won't say too much, but let's encourage each other.

It's very funny and special to start with a 'fart'! The personality traits of each character are reflected in the detailed description when they first appear, which shows that the author has a great writing style. Looking further, the origin of the heroine and her relationship with the hero are revealed. It is a very interesting setting, with the same but opposite eyes. Is this a destined marriage? The character's personality has also been further portrayed. The author said that these three golden chapters are very valuable. I must study hard! So I fell into the trap and decided to fatten up and watch it slowly! Big cheers for the author! Come on! Come on!

，， The male protagonist and her were born to be happy enemies, and the news of breaking off the engagement was heartbreaking. It's too easy to get, and he won't cherish it after all, so... Let him not get it, tossing and turning, scratching his head and scratching his head, thinking about it day and night.          ，，……！ If you hit it wrong, there will be fierce sparks, and the hero will vomit three liters of blood to atone for his sin!

First of all, congratulations to the author for opening a new book. After reading the beginning, it seems that I have seen the favorite routines used by female video authors. Green Tea Stepmother, White Lotus's younger sister, a profit-seeking father and a domineering CEO-like husband. The novel follows the formula of time travel and rebirth. It is undeniable that the female version of Yixiu and Yidu are indeed eye-catching. However, the novel then enters the rhythm of the stepmother acting as a monster and killing her own mother, and the younger sister fighting for her husband and killing the host. So when the heroine is reborn, she not only needs to be slapped hard in the face, but more importantly, she must avenge her mother and herself, and she must also live out her own style and make the male protagonist fall in love with her. The father's partiality cannot stop the heroine from being radiant. The key is whether she will repent or be crushed together with her stepmother, it all depends on the author's mood. Everyone is very familiar with the routine, so it is a test of the writing style and the grasp of the plot. The author has just started the book and still has time to lay out the layout. I hope the writing will become more exciting, come on＾0＾~

[Book Review] Love begins with attention The latest chapter is still a familiar routine. There is no unexpected development, but it is still very interesting through the author's skillful writing style. The jokes are not afraid of cliches. I think there must be a reason why a joke can be used for thousands of years without losing its luster. In fact, I have been looking forward to it and wondering whether the heroine will have new plug-ins and other abilities. What will the combination of the beads bring to the heroine? Could it be space? Still won't be there. Okay, the engagement has been broken off, and we are just waiting for the scene of chasing my wife in the crematorium 😍. What women love to watch most is to torture the male protagonist. Kyoko's method is to torture him to death 😆

Title of the book: Favor, oh no, it's "Pampering Apricots". Why should we pamper apricots? Is it because they are sour and sweet (drooling), then read on. Introduction: It is a simple narration of the story of this book. The word "fart" successfully attracted me. On the whole, it may be that the plot of not knowing each other before fighting, falling in love and killing each other is joyful and interesting, and it should be quite easy to read. Text: The writing is good, and the scenes and dialogues between the characters are quite graphic. The heroine's original name is Chu Jiaoxing. Um, I'm sorry, I almost ate the heroine when I read the title. After the heroine traveled through time, she turned into a bald little "nun". What's more terrible is that she farted in front of everyone. It was really smelly and strange, (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia. After that, there are the Green Tea stepmother, younger sister, father and other family members. The author should be able to write it with ease. How to write more interestingly, capture the readers' excitement, and stand out from the crowd of slap-in-the-face rebirth stories depends on the author's writing skills. From the current point of view, the number of words is still small, and the big picture has not yet been unfolded. Just wait for the male and female protagonists to fall in love and kill each other sweetly. Big cheers for the author!

Prince Qi is a bit scary. One look can scare people to the point of peeing.

Read a few chapters carefully, and the story is quite interesting. Because the heroine traveled from modern times, although she does not know martial arts, she is good at fighting. He also has a cheerful personality, is open-minded, and has interesting conversations with the male protagonist. It's just that the male protagonist found that she was different from what he knew before, so he didn't want to marry her hastily... The female protagonist learned a lot about the original owner in her own way, and found that the original owner also had people she liked, and the conflicts between various characters gradually emerged. Overall it's good. I think the advantage of the novel is the scene description, but the disadvantage is the detailed depiction of the characters' demeanor. It uses a little more adjectives. If there are more dynamic details, the sense of substitution will be stronger! 🌹

Jiao Xing loves beauty, but her bald head is really bothering her now, and she's also a bit narcissistic. It's funny to see her look in her eyes expecting Prince Jin to praise her.

As the saying goes, curiosity killed the cat. Jiao Xing was too curious, so she traveled through time.

It turns out that Jiao Xing is Beigong Qianqiu's fiancée. This status is not bad. After all, she is handsome and pleasing to the eye.

Beigong Qianqiu must be a bit vindictive. Because Jiao Xing escaped from marriage, he was so rude to her and threw her on the ground.

Why did Jiao Xing's original body escape from marriage? Have you seen through the world of mortals? Or was she abducted by some doggy man?

Those two beads were actually given to Jiao Xing by Beigong Qianqiu. It seems that Beigong Qianqiu has a lot of good things.

Prince Jin is a very interesting person. If you ignore the fact that he is always looking for flowers and willows, it will be very interesting to live with him. After all, he often makes surprising remarks and makes people laugh.

Jiao Xing and Qi Shizi must have an indescribable fate. You can tell just by looking at their eyes. They are simply wonders of the world.

Qi Shizi's words about Miss Chu prove that Jiao Xing's identity is extraordinary, so why did she become a nun? He also fell into the water. Was he harmed?

Little cuties who like to pet apricots are welcome to join the book club group to play~ Reader group 555392137

Let me explain some of the issues: ①The description of the scene in the writing style is my fantasy and love for the beautiful ancient scenes, not the number of words. Please don't treat the writing style that I advocate and study as nonsense. Thank you; ②The overlap between the last paragraph and the first paragraph of the next chapter is my habit of having a background summary. After deducting the paragraph, it will still be no less than 2,000 words. The charge for 2,000 words and 2,100 words will be the same after being put on the shelf, so it will not take advantage of readers. ; ③The plot is a slow growth type. I like to fight monsters first to level up and then duel with big characters to have a sense of accomplishment. It's not that I only know how to write weak chickens; ④The characters' words and deeds are exaggerated because this is a comedy. I did it on purpose. It's not that I can't write traditional ancient dramas. I originally wrote traditional ancient dramas and I just wanted to change the genre. Furthermore, what can a modern person who has just traveled to ancient times say something like Wen Zou Zou? If you treat this kind of humorous comedy as a serious drama, you are on the wrong set and it has nothing to do with me; ⑤ I have spent half a year refining the so-called golden three chapters. I have revised the plot twice, three times, eight times, nine times, and ten times. If you think it is ordinary, dull and unremarkable, it is because there is a problem with my ability. I tried my best. I am sorry that I am only at this level. Thank you. Thank you for your understanding and tolerance🌹

Although the article has been checked two or three times before being published, sometimes there are some typos that I didn't notice. You are welcome to correct the typos in the article and mark them in the article. I will revise them in time when I see them. Thank you all 🌹 (ps: After the revision, for the convenience of subsequent readers, I will delete the paragraph comment~Thank you again for correcting the mistakes, I love you~)

This article is a sweet article for girls. The writing style is light and funny. The author is 20 years old, ignorant, simple and silly. I don't know whether it is big or small, but she is still a girl. You should know that the heroine is fourteen years old, and she will not be a high-IQ and high-age writer. I am fourteen years old and in the second grade of junior high school, and I am still a middle school girl. This article is not a drama, it is a comedy, so I don't like to enter with caution.

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