Good Luck Little Farm Girl

Good looking, but not enough to watch every day

I gave up after reading the first 30 chapters, I was too tired.

I read Chapter 30 and 95% of it is just nonsense. The heroine didn't even have 5% of the scenes. It's very tiring.

I've read a few chapters, but they're all verbose and have no focus.

There are too many chores. You can consider incorporating the background story into the future behavior and story of the heroine, and write it slowly. For example, at the beginning, directly write about the heroine returning home after fishing, and then slowly write about her family after arriving home. If you unfold it in this way, it will feel like an old lady's foot bindings, smelly and long.

It's pretty good, but can that fish withstand a village of people fishing like this every day?

It is still relatively ancient, and I always feel that Zhao Yu suffered a loss 😢

Luo Liba is too sloppy. Useless sentences and words are added one after another. It's very tiring to read.

Yeah, it's pretty well written. It's just that the basic processing of some food is flawed. If you want to dry fish, you must break the belly and remove the internal organs. If you don't dry it too much, it will only rot and not become dried fish. The fish balls are beaten, not cut and chopped, and there is no need to add potato starch. Otherwise, they will be inelastic and will jam the teeth. Of course, the frozen bags of meatballs bought in supermarkets basically add potato starch, but fresh fish balls do not add anything.

The female protagonist has too few roles. And there are more than 100 chapters where the heroine is still a child? How many words do you want to write?

It took 23 chapters to eat fish head and tofu soup.

It's boring. It was obviously the heroine's idea that Li's craftsmanship led to the development of the whole family. She should have a higher status in the family, but Li didn't tell the old man clearly, and she also hid it from other people. Then the old man actually yelled at Mr. Li A few peasants spoke like Zou Zou... The fourth child himself was not even admitted to be a scholar, and he still had to open a school. The old man actually supported it, saying that no one could stop the decision made by the fourth child. If you don't give me the money, I'm blocking it. It's purely because my family has money, so I can spend it myself. And if you give the fourth child a lot of money, then you should at least give the others similar amounts, right? The old man also said that most of the property should be given to the eldest son, what the hell is a farmer giving to his eldest son? The distribution is uneven, and the brainless people have the right to speak. When the prescription is sold to the restaurant, they are not discussed with the heroine, and the heroine is not given any money to prepare for the eldest son...

The heroine here is a complete tool! Her grandma is more like a heroine

It's really anticlimactic, and I wonder if the outline was just thrown in later. The back is just like a running account.

Good looking (*^▽^*)

And it feels like you don't have a specific goal. Even a book introducing food should have a theme, such as why the protagonist cooks, what is the purpose of cooking, whether it is to make money and get rich, or because of love. A book without a theme is like a bamboo without pandas, it has lost its soul, unless it is just writing recipes.

I just read the first chapter and thought the writing was good. The comments said that there are many roles for the heroine and the young grandmother. As long as they are all positive characters, I can do it. Watching female videos only requires girls to think they are outstanding, and she is also the heroine's grandmother.

I am Mapo Tofu Xuanshan, thank you for your first order, I love you mua

At this pace, are you ready to do ten thousand chapters?

Such a good article, why this comment?

What do you think of this book? It's almost twenty chapters, and I haven't finished writing a dish yet... Moji's grandma opened the door for Moji, and Moji was so damned drunk by you!

No cp? Then I'll chase you. It doesn't matter if it's watery, I really don't want to see generals, princes, princes, rich children, etc. In farming articles anymore 🔨