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Here, I would like to make some suggestions. First of all, what I want to encourage is that the author's writing style is relatively good, at least there is no common problem of the author repeatedly describing the author's own psychology. However, the author's plot is too slow. I think the author should be committed to advancing the plot. The heroine may not even write. In my eyes, the emotional line of many novels is just to water down the word count (and disgusting readers -_-||), at least for new authors. So my suggestion is to write down the parents, preferably less about the heroine. Because the protagonist should be his own boss, rather than simply protecting the heroine and having the strength to do so. In short, I don't want to interfere with the author's big settings, I just want to make some suggestions on the protagonist's background. I am still very optimistic about this book. Believe me, without these obvious poisonous points (the low combat power level may count), it is still possible to make it popular with the author's great writing style.

I have been busy recently and will catch up on it during the holidays. The author is here to wish you a happy new year