City ​​Of Love

The pace of the first few chapters of this work will be a bit slow and the writing style will be a bit poor. I will continue to work hard and I believe everything will be fine (﹡ˆoˆ﹡)

Already read them all! I have collected it! There are too few words at present, and the strength has already been shown. I hope the author can update it every day. Come on!

It took about four minutes to read this short story. Intuition tells me that this must be a cute and lazy young lady who chases stars, hehehehe😁, so I must support the young lady first! I'll give you a ticket later using the trumpet. If the young lady is a little more diligent, hee hee hee, then it will probably be a lot more comfortable. Then, I would like to give you a suggestion, you can describe the scene more. Of course, maybe you prefer this way of expression 😌😌😌 Then just go on in your own way. After all, the story is your own. Keep up the good work, little sister! I quite like the story and hope to see more updates.

The writing is good. I have followed it and will comment on it.