The Legendary Life of the Urban Martial King

Except for the punctuation, which is a bit messy, everything else is good. I don't really like watching male videos, but I really like this one. The writing is delicate and has a strong sense of substitution. You will regret it if you don't watch it, especially the male compatriots 😁

After reading it... Make sure you haven't read other people's books, and start writing as soon as your mind gets excited. The first is the problem of paragraphing. If you write down a long paragraph, the reader will not want to read it immediately. It will be too tiring. Multi-segmentation This is the most basic.

The punctuation marks are messed up. You don't know when to use which punctuation marks. There are too many wrong ones. The dialogues between the characters are also very messy.

I even doubt how your book passed the review process.

Brother, I dare not say that what you wrote is very good. I hope you can study more.