The Counterattack of Zhujiazhuang in Water Margin

It felt a bit embarrassing to watch, and while calling me brother, I lamented that I accepted this scumbag.

The Destruction of Liangshan has gone from a book about grudges and grievances to a book about traditional farming and development of rebellion.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I will criticize you with reason and evidence. Although there are many other flaws, it can still be seen. But when it comes to women, I really don't know what the author is writing about? Hu Sanniang is included in basically every book but not included. This is understandable, as he is dressed as the eldest uncle. But if you don't dress like Zhu Biao, you basically have no female characters. Then why don't you write about Wu Nu properly? First is Li Ying's wife, playing ambiguously. Do you know what you are writing? That's okay, you can find a way to kill Li Yingyin, but you are having an affair with his wife and saving people at the same time. Or be domineering and recruit people to kill their husbands. Either control yourself and send other people's wives away to avoid suspicion. The result is really a holy mother. She is ambiguous with the wife and does her best to save people. She is extremely stupid. Come down again, Miss Cheng and Cheng Wanli's concubine. I saw a woman unable to walk again, and it was another act of stupidity. Since I want to find a woman, I just accept Miss Cheng. The result is good, go drink Dong Ping's foot washing water, I really have you. In the end, he was so nice that he sent Miss Cheng back and sent someone to protect her, including Lu Zhishen. Miss Cheng thought Lu Zhishen was ugly. Not only was the protagonist not angry, but she chose a handsome man named Hua Rong. How mean are you? The enemy's daughter, reaching for the stars and the moon? My father wanted to kill your whole family earlier. There is also the foreshadowing laid here. Depending on the situation, it has been arranged again. Dong Ping raped Hua Rong's wife, and now Hua Rong is allowed to rape Dong Ping's fiancée. Do you think Hua Rong is such a person? Haha, what's more, a bandit and rebel took great pains to send a corrupt lady back. What a really thoughtful idea. Not to mention other things in this author's novel, he can't walk when he sees a woman. Everything written about women is full of poison. The more I watched, the more I felt something was wrong. The protagonist was no different from Song Jiang. Maybe not as good as Song Jiang. Summary: He kills people and sets fires to be a virgin, and when he sees a woman, he kneels down and becomes an official slave. His loyalty is unparalleled in the world, but secretly men are thieves and women are prostitutes.

Everything else is fine, but if you don't know how to write about a female protagonist, just don't write about it, okay? I would rather the main character be a eunuch than someone who likes to pick up tattered shoes. Those who come from an innocent background do not accept anything, but only pick up rags. That Mrs. Li wants to marry her for her second marriage. In the future, the protagonist is the one who wants to be the emperor. Does that woman still want to be the queen? A queen who was fucked by someone else? And that Li Ying is not dead yet, and has become the emperor's brother-in-law unknowingly. If he writes "The Story The Queen and I Have to Tell" it will definitely be a hit. It is a miracle that the founding emperor's empress was a second-hand item, and she made history. (I'm not discriminating against divorced women. Ancient times and modern times are completely different. People who will be emperors in the future, not to mention the Three Palaces and Six Courts, are simply unreasonable)

If you catch the Liangshan bandits, don't you kill them? Still licking it? Also, why should we leave a good impression even if we can't conquer it? What are you talking about? You Zhujiazhuang and Liangshan bandits have arrived and will fight to the death! They just want to destroy your family and steal your food! You even licked it! Is this your virtue? Whatever you can conquer today will definitely be bribed by others!

People like Sun Erniang and his wife are no longer a test of the boss's ambition, they are simply anti-human.

It's boring. Those who write about Water Margin should kill Song Jiang and his gang like "The Son-in-law" did. Those like Yan Qing and Lu Junyi should reform if they can. If they are stubborn, they should kill them without any nonsense.

A rare masterpiece among Water Margin themes

I would like to ask if the author Wu Yong is your ancestor? This is the first time I've heard someone say that Wu Yong is resourceful and has a deep understanding of strategy, and is no less good than Crouching Dragon and Phoenix. Does Wu Yong have an overall view? Or are you strategically aware? Can you still govern the country and bring peace to the people?

The protagonist of the novel is the reflection of the author, which can reflect the author's thoughts and character to a certain extent. In many popular novels, when the author creates the protagonist, people will not be disgusted because those authors know how to exercise self-discipline.

It's normal for this book not to be popular. In the original book, Song Jiang killed his whole family, and he was able to play a trick on Song Jiang to capture Meng Huo seven times. This is no one else.

Author, it would be better to marry a widow than to wear out your shoes.

It's pretty cool haha, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

What does it mean to steal corn as a child? Did corn already exist in the Song Dynasty? 😥

When I saw the Liangshan prisoners being collected, I felt something was wrong. When was this, it was war time, what was the quality of these prisoners, were they robbers, and what did they like most, they were women with money. Why does the protagonist think that giving them something to eat will make them work hard, so he is not afraid of these people betraying him. After all, they have everything they need to break Zhujiazhuang!

I can write about wars and everything, but I just can't figure out how to marry a second-hand guy. Not to mention modern times and ancient times. Now you are a cucumber boy marrying a second-hand man. Don't your relatives and friends look down on you? You, a protagonist who wants to dominate the world, marry a second-hand guy regardless of the overall situation. I am really convinced. I don't want to continue reading after reading this. Your subordinates will probably laugh at you to death.

The writing is not good, it makes it seem like the people on Liangshan Mountain are all talented people, one is tolerant and the other is tolerant. There are many talented people outside Liangshan. The people on Liangshan are not heroes. Most of them are bandits who kill innocent people indiscriminately. Are you going to rebel? Is it okay to be able to fight?

After reading the post posted by General Zhonglang, I now have an understanding of your book. No one really read this kind of novel when it was first published. I advise you to cut it off and start writing a new one again. Learn the lessons from this book and don't make the same mistake again.

It was because Cao Cao only valued talent and not moral character, the world of Cao Wei was occupied by the Sima family, and there were not many subordinates to protect Cao! !

Other than the writing style of this book, the rest is pretty good. However, I think Zhang Qing and Sun Erniang are pretty good when it comes to their treatment of Zhang Qing and Sun Erniang. They don't offend those who can't afford it, poor people, farmers, and scholars. They treat heroes like Wu Song, Yang Zhi, and Lu Zhishen with utmost sincerity. Lu Zhishen is willing to let the weeds fall on Erlong Mountain but is unwilling to do so with Li Zhong, Zhou Tong, and others. It can be seen that Zhang Qing and Sun Erniang are good people. Otherwise, Zhang Qing and Sun Erniang and the others would wander around in front of them every day. Lu Zhishen really felt that they were not good enough. He would either drive them away or leave by himself. And Wu Song agreed with them very much. They both took care of protecting Wu Song for a murderer like Wu Song who could be exposed at any time. It can also be seen that he was a good person. Otherwise, after I fooled you into drunkenness today, why not kill you tomorrow in exchange for money? They killed a lot of people. Therefore, although they run a black shop, they are very bad to innocent people, but in that kind of society, if you are not black, you will be bullied. Just like the proprietress of Longmen Inn. And pity the weak help heroes. This shows that they are pretty good. There is also Shi Wengong, who is a hothead in the original work. It can be said that he was half responsible for the destruction of the Zeng family. He killed Chao Gai and provoked Zeng to rob the camp, but he was defeated. As well as ambushing Song Jiang and so on, most of these were Shi Wengong's ideas, and he was very impatient. But in this book, I am too lonely and seeking defeat. I feel that I am the best in the world and everything is stable. This attitude is actually placed on Guan Sheng by the author in the original work. When he was conquering Fangla or the Liao Kingdom, he fought with one person for more than 50 rounds. When he couldn't win, Guan Sheng retreated. It shows that Guan Sheng can still draw even at the worst. Other times, often merging opponents with others. Guan Sheng is so stable that others think he is very powerful, but he doesn't care about other people's opinions and often cooperates with others to kill his opponents. And dueling is no problem. I often fight with people for more than 50 rounds. Therefore, Guan Sheng, like Lin Chong, is actually very balanced in both offense and defense, with very few shortcomings. It is rare to see him and Lin Chong lose a duel, and Lin Chong even merged with Qin Ming to win. This was probably Lin Chong's biggest defeat.

The writing is okay, but the author likes to break shoes and can't bear it. Cao Cao likes wives, but you are just a pervert. He must have a woman who will be fucked by his subordinates every day. I don't understand what the author is thinking. It's a pity that this good book will be good bye.