The Portable Space Can Summon

After reading about twenty chapters, I feel that the writing is dull and there are some logical inconsistencies. Although a child of thirteen or fourteen is considered an adult in ancient times, it is okay to borrow some money from others, but it is a bit unrealistic to take so much gold from the village treasury. Moreover, as mentioned before, the image of the protagonist in the eyes of others is a bit stupid. Even the elders in the village can see that the children of thirteen or fourteen are mainly protagonists and do not perform well when suppressing bandits. Wrong, but there is no good reason why it is difficult to get so much gold from the village. After all, so much gold is not a small amount of money for the village. No matter how capable a person is, if he lacks experience when he is thirteen or fourteen years old, he will have to pay for it. After all, ability and talent are important, and experience is even more important. Although the protagonist is capable, it can be said that he has no experience (in the eyes of the villagers), and it is not worth the village spending a lot of money to buy a lesson for the protagonist. This makes me feel uncomfortable. There are some parts that I don't blame. They are really illogical. Also, the author's writing style is not very good. I really can't let me ignore the illogical parts. Also, I feel that the writing is a bit simplistic. The descriptions could be richer. It is very fast to read a novel. If it is too simplistic, it is easy for people to overlook some things. After all, it is not a reading comprehension question. It requires people to read word for word (purely a personal opinion).

Five taels of gold per soldier is really expensive, and I don't know what the combat effectiveness is. You have to know that in ancient times, soldiers had to prepare their own weapons and food to join the army. Five taels of gold can arm a cavalry. His summons are really expensive. Of course, the author has gold in this world. If there are enough, then forget about it, otherwise he would have enough gold in the world to summon 10,000 people. The efficiency of digging holes in ancient times is really impressive and prospecting is even more difficult. I hope the author will not summon tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands taels in the future. Modern society cannot afford your consumption.

There are too many new book updates but too little. . Many people ran away after just one look. I can't keep people.

The plot is too watery and the utilization rate of Goldfinger is too low. The protagonist can enter the space and be basically invincible. Just push it. For example, if you enter the palace and directly summon tens of thousands of people to directly destroy a country, it is enough to support the war. As long as there is a golden protagonist, the loyalty of the soldiers will be full. The foundation of the protagonist is to summon the space rather than the territory.

Yes, if it continues, it should be a good book. I prefer reading this kind of book.

I saw that a county was looted, and there were nearly ten thousand taels of gold. Can a county be so poor?

The space size did not increase much during the two upgrades. The first time I added an expansion warehouse, the second time I added a summoning altar site, and there is no third expansion. In other words, you can feed more than 300 people on two acres of land and still sell food. Change the settings. Your current food is eight times less than the real world.

After reading dozens of chapters, it was as dull as water and I couldn't stand it anymore.

It's just random writing. Chapter 56 It was obviously the black-faced dragon that escaped. When attacking later, the black fox ran away again, and the black-faced dragon was caught. I just scribbled without reading the previous chapters when I was writing. There are also a lot of typos. It's really the plot that requires the previous management to ignore it.

Poor writing style, verbal account

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง,

Don't talk about typos or anything like that, or whether the plot is reasonable or not, just a wool coat? ? ? What did ancient people like? And pure white? To be honest, unless people in ancient times wore filial piety, who would wear white clothes? Don't let the TV fool you! And the setting of Zhang Yu, don't you think it's weird? Like to develop loli? And the protagonist knows that he is extraordinary and has a golden finger! In the future, I want to make a contribution and break into the world, but I actually agreed to a girl from the village as my wife? ? ? It's not that the girls in the village are bad, but that they don't deserve it. From the introduction, I know that the protagonist becomes the emperor in the end, so the queen will be a village girl in the future? A village girl who knows nothing? ? ? She needs to be courageous, but the key is that she doesn't know anything. Quite confusing

In the early stage of reading history, most of my thoughts were about fighting and iron horses You gave him his entire fiancée as soon as he came, and there was a lot written about it There was also the section of Menghu Village, which I didn't think about until I got to the end of the field. It seemed nonsense. There are more than 100 others, and they have the first mover advantage, as well as bows and arrows. You have no armor, no horses, and two of you were injured, which is even more nonsense. To give a simple example, everyone knows that there is a place where cars often roll over and landslides kill people. You happen to be passing by that place and can't you remember it for a while? Not much more to say

Author, I would like to ask you whether you should change the settings. You have five acres of land and you speed it up four times. How can you feed more than 300 people? Where does the rice come from? Is it one grain per person? A hundred times acceleration may not be enough, and no one can achieve your four times acceleration.

I can't watch it. The main character is too vague. I feel like I'm a modern time traveler, so I feel like I'm amazing.

After reading the book review, I didn't even dare to go in!

Bland, boring

Some soldiers dare not recruit because they are afraid of starving to death? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Recruit them for 10 million and conquer the world directly. Every time you go to a place, recruit an army and take down it for money. If you stay behind, the speed of conquering the world depends on how fast you run away. The Central Plains will be mine in less than a year. What do you want, Shun, Chu, Qi? I ran around and knocked them all down.

There were no problems with the characters, worldview, and plot. I originally thought it would be great, but I gave up after reading about it at chapter 50. It was missing a lot, and I couldn't connect to many of them. I just lost it after reading it (the whole process of writing the beginning was gone), so I changed to other things. It hurts to watch it.