Become an Immortal in One Step

This is my first fantasy book. If there is anything poorly written, please take care of it and give me some advice. I will work hard to improve it!

The writing is good, the plot is smooth, and you can eat it with confidence. Come on, I think you have what it takes to be a great god.

Everyone who has tried the drug and saw that I am still alive and kicking should know that this is a good book.

Nice! Like! Come on, author!

Daily bubbling, come on!

The writing is OK, but there are too few updates. Please update more 😭

Are there any readers who have read this book? Some individual chapters are very important, be sure to read them! Also, the bad points must be pointed out! I will correct it! For example, my character setting doesn't feel very good to me personally! These will be rectified and improved🌹🌹🌹

Just within these two days! Will start from the wedge rectification! There will also be more plots! Remember to look back!

Wedge has been modified! Welcome to give advice! 🌹🌹🌹

It's cleverly conceived and reasonable, but I'm a little tired of being reborn all the time lately.

This is my first time writing and I have no experience, but I still support you. I have accepted it. Come on.

Received, come on, keep working hard

Not bad, very good, I feel good after reading it

The writing is great and the plot setting is also good. Come on

The author writes well, although there are obvious traces of cliché at the beginning. But the reason why there are routines is because they win people's hearts. Come on, write more, the number of words will increase, and naturally more people will read it.