I Raised a Cub in the Game

After reading the first few chapters, I feel that the story is quite interesting, and the description of the environment and psychology are also very good, and it is easy to relieve stress ~ I feel that it will be a sweet story, and I will continue to follow it if there are no accidents ~ However, I still want to take the liberty to make 2 suggestions to the author, hoping that the book will be better (this chapter says that it requires fan value, so it can only be written in the book review area): 1. Be rigorous and careful. There are at least 10 typos in the first chapter, including "you" and "you", "" and "", and repeated descriptions in several sentences. If you are so careless, it will be difficult for readers to spend valuable money to buy articles 😆. 2. Make good use of periods. There are several paragraphs that are 8 or 9 lines long but only have a period. The author may feel that it is smooth when writing, but the reader will seem tired. It is recommended to add sentence pauses.

Boss, I came to read your book again.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh, finally met me, so excited! ! ! !

Chapter 1 Why is it like I raised a sickly prince? Isn't it plagiarism?

After reading the first three chapters, the story is novel and the writing is good. However, the three chapters are all systematic and have no attractive highlights. I hope more highlights can be added. Come on