Breath of Sword

First of all, deal with the segmentation and combine it properly, otherwise the reading experience will be poor. As long as the plot logic is not jumping up and down, the author should not write too much and cause problems. Everything else is fine.

Very well written! The plot is smooth and the writing is beautiful, but there are too few 😟 explosive updates! Come on!

A conscientious work worth seeing.

Yeah, yeah, I can finally speak out in my own book 😭

The book is good, the writing is vivid and the plot ideas are clear. Come on

I wrote a little less 🙂

Actually, it's okay😁😁