Midsummer Record of the Emperor's Son

This roll of yours is really awesome! Rare. The writing is pretty good though.

1. The writing is good, okay. Chapters 23 and 3 are all quite ancient. 2. The imagination and the opening plot are also innovative. 3. The segmentation is not very good, and the introduction is a bit discouraging. 4. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

1. The writing style is acceptable, and the aftertaste is lingering 2. The chapters and paragraphs are a bit... "Ugly"! 3. Chapter 1 The accident reminded me of Joker Xue (´ω｀) Chapter 6 The first lesson of school It's still Joker Xue (we're in school) plus TFboys 4. The sentences are not fluent, the punctuation marks are not marked well, and I look at the diaphragm 5. The story is quite interesting, if I change what I said above, it will be better 6. No, this comment is quite venomous, but every sentence is heartfelt, don't blame me. 7. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Big brain, haha, come on!

The writing is good and the idea is novel. I look forward to the update.

Very well written 😢

Come on, come on, it has been accepted, please accept each other

The writing is fine, so I'll close it now, come on!

I like this idea! Keep updating! Come on!

It is recommended to divide the chapters into a text volume. The writing is good, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I feel like typos are rare. 😁 Maybe it's because I don't like this genre, but I still read it carefully. There should be typos in the first chapter (human beings will fight back). I hope the author can work hard. It's not easy for beginners, so work hard, 🌹🌹🌹

Come on, let's do it. You have to write well.

The writing is very good, this is the first time I have seen this setting, please give it a try. .

Such a refreshing setting, waiting for updates|ω)

Back and forth, not bad, just a little short... Come on! Continue!