The Sword Master Is Crazy

Author, do you really intend to write this? Or do you have a mine at home and writing books is just a hobby? The way you write it reminds me of the time when gangster writing was popular. Tell me what's wrong, it's my personal opinion. You have just traveled through time, and your personality is too out-of-touch. How can you be like a person who gets up to practice morning exercises no matter the severe cold or scorching heat? Second, who is this Mr. Ye? No matter who he is, don't you think his character is very stupid? There is also the male protagonist's uncle, the head of the family, the eldest brother! Not to mention that my sister is still not sure to be dead, but even if my sister is really dead, will you rashly start a war with others? Does this family belong to your family? Third, what kind of egg is this pan? Did he finish his family's swordsmanship just after traveling through time? I've been practicing it since I was a kid! The main character is a goldfish? Seven seconds of memory? (I know it's a rumor) Fourth! Are you a modern person who doesn't have access to the Internet? I even have to ask to exchange tasks in the mall, kindergarten diploma? Author, how about forgetting it. It's good to be a reader, and it can enrich yourself. Writing novels also requires learning, and most of what I write will be thrown away by the street! Anyone who can write good things with just a slap on the forehead is a great person. Wouldn't it be better to accumulate more and then write again?

The storyline is delicate and the pace is brisk, very good!

The routine from a few years ago, and the gun

Congratulations on the launch, first order support!

This world is too stable, let's have a big battle and make Kaido and I happy!

The time-travel plot at the beginning is so cliche that it's now a mess. After reading two chapters, I traveled to a different world. So far, the naming of continents such as Golden Dragon, Azure Dragon, and Black Dragon is too casual! When he wakes up, it's like the second wife takes over the legitimate son, and he calls an old servant grandpa😅😅😅

Thank you boss, the boss is very generous!

Here you go, brother. It's a good write-up. I'll take it.

I haven't read it yet, but I'm halfway through the first chapter and I can't help but complain. Nine of the top ten ancient martial arts families have given up on practicing martial arts, and those who are good at doing business, being good at politics, and those who are cooperating with pig's feet are all idiots? Can you train yourself to the slums? I would like to ask how their family could survive in the era before the end of the Dharma and become one of the top ten families by robbing? Or just eat dirt? Which big family doesn't do business? Let's learn about it if we are poor in culture and rich in martial arts

I can't do it anymore. I read one chapter of poison and one chapter. I call myself Mr. Ye 😥. Brother, can you read a few more books? People call themselves by their first name. I belong to such and such family, or I report my position as a housekeeper or something like that. Call me, Mr. Ye. This kind of title is an honorific for others, can it be used as a self-proclaimed title?

I almost got addicted after reading the first one. After reading the next two, I couldn't stand it because the first one was so uncomfortable.

What an old routine, and now there are still stories about the ancient martial arts family

My grades are so bad, but I am still writing. I admire my perseverance.

The plot is smooth, the characters are obvious, and I look forward to it!

Can you please change this grandpa? Is the pig's foot a bad idea? They said they were servants, and they were even closer to each other than their own grandfather. You just traveled through time, so how could you have such deep feelings?

You should delete the first chapter. If this time-travel routine was okay 12 years ago Now this time-travel routine is really not working. It's like it was written by a junior high school student, I really can't stand it I started reading it directly from the second chapter

Bijiang~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply