Why Are All My Heavens Filled with Monsters?

Author, can you take a look? I'm the one on QQ Reading who asked you to write a Game of Thrones fanfic. Really, can you save the ending of Dragon Mother's death? , Or redeem the tragedy of Mother Long (╥ω╥`) Here is a suggestion for the author. Can you also write about creatures from other worlds? Let the protagonist become him instead of letting him come out. I think I already know how to write it at the beginning. The protagonist becomes the big cousin of World of Warcraft, just in an egg form. Put them together with the protagonist, but the main character The egg in the corner is quite special. After all, Game of Thrones is very long. Of course, you can also write only the Dragon Mother part. I really hope the author will write about it (what about that, because Game of Thrones is very long, I think the author can make a splash)

You did it on purpose, you did it on purpose. Other authors know that when writing a story, you need to use language that fits the context. For example, you cannot say during the Qin Dynasty: Liu Bei borrowed money from Jingzhou and never returned it. But what about you? Idioms have always been used in the Western world, and people talk about luck and the like. Does it show that you are literate? Just like in a fantasy setting, princes, generals and prime ministers would rather have the seed. Then there was an uprising. You are rubbing the reader's sense of empathy to the ground. It's still the kind of friction that won't give up until death.

Based on my experience in the past few years, this book will become popular if it is well written! Come on, author! ! !

I promised to quit, but I couldn't help but turn on my phone, eh. . . So delicious. . .

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Judging from the description, the protagonist has watched Spider-Man. Why not just follow the original version and just bite Peter in the laboratory to complete the task? Why follow Peter home and bite again. The mission is obviously to create Spider-Man, but it is not for the protagonist to teach Spider-Man. He only thinks about some sexy operations, but it turns out to be a sandbox. I feel like the protagonist's intelligence is lacking.

Don't you think the more you write, the worse you get? Others write better and better, but you are different from other authors who write better and better Let me tell you how I read it. I was very excited when I read the third chapter and then I skipped Spider-Man. After that, I could finish Jurassic and then it was boring.

Let the heroine call her daddy at the beginning? ? ? ? Find a friend to show you whether your book is good, ask him to evaluate it, and write it yourself

The book is okay. Basically, those who don't like it will skip reading it. The key is that it doesn't affect the plot 😁. In the plot of werewolves and vampires, I feel that werewolves and vampires should not be considered monsters. The meaning of monsters should be defined. For example, intelligent races should not be counted. After all, if there are too many monsters, they are not monsters. It is recommended to avoid vampires, demons, devils, and other races. This kind of monster is best not to become the protagonist of a movie. For example, Jurassic Park would be great, otherwise it would just be the Indominus, which would look boring.

No wonder your book is not popular. The bad taste in the third chapter directly persuades you to quit. It's disgusting.

It's a self-pleasure article that presses the reader's brain to the ground and rubs it crazily. The author just wants to be happy when he writes it. He doesn't care if anyone reads it. Anyway, I don't think so.

The World of the Dragon Emperor has the most disgusting heroine I have ever read. Is there any novel that kills Shion and her daughter? Please recommend! ! ! !

Mentioned Digimon. I suddenly remembered a novel I read many years ago. The protagonist travels through the digital world. Falling in love with Celestial Beast. When he chases the girl so that Amimon also likes the protagonist. . At the most critical time, the beast's blood boiled vigorously. The protagonist discovers that the place where Tiannumon should have seams is flat ª

Are you talking about opportunities with Americans? It's so fascinating. I can't bear this plot and leave first.

The low rating is not without reason. The color of Gwen's uniform is black and red. This is the author's own aesthetics. What kind of aesthetics is this forcibly added? I disagree. The female Spider-Man doesn't look good at all in black and red. Either all black or all white, the temptation of black, the purity of white. It looks cool on men, but not suitable on women.

Author, don't you plan to change the first three chapters? Is there anyone who just meets a stranger and asks them to call him daddy? The first three chapters are directly disgusting. It will lose many readers.

That child of fate shocked me. Bye-Bye

A fundamental problem is that if the protagonist turns into a spider and beeps a lot with a stranger, a mere arthropod, and then talks a lot, and is not afraid of being slapped to death, a spider of unknown origin, and talks so much nonsense, most people will be resentful by others, do something for her, and then say that God has chosen her. This is her fate, and if she doesn't save the world, wouldn't it be nice to cause a lot of trouble?

Could it be that the author discovered the pain in the vaginal core and therefore had it cut?

Why isn't it updated? ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

It's been 8 days, eunuch, there's no need to wait.

Where is the author? You don't know how to be a eunuch! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The protagonist who became stronger by killing his fiancée and brother is such a fucking loser.

Where has the author gone? Is this a eunuch? The writing is quite good, what about the people?

Is this book out of date? No update for a month

Alas╯╰, incense, incense

I think if a normal person sees an animal suddenly talking to you, tempting you to do something, and telling you that you may die, he wouldn't even think about trying it, right? And he still calls me dad every now and then. Those who are more irritable will be killed directly. In addition, Spider-Gwen originally had her own costume, but she ended up doing some tricks on her own, creating a red and black male version...

Is it a eunuch? There has been no update for many days.

Where are people? Why isn't it updated?

It's been a month, has something happened or is it an eunuch?