Infinite Journey into the World of American Comics

It's too verbose. No matter what movie or character it is, the author writes it as a talkative, talking too much rubbish. It's also disgusting to watch the drama unfold.

Guardians of Humanity: Umbrella Corporation_(:з∠)_

The old problem, the sense of substitution, seems to have become popular in recent years. Many novel authors assign the protagonist the identity of a street writer. Maybe it is because when you write as the protagonist, you will feel a kind of immersive joy? However, there are very few online writers among your readers, which leaves readers with no sense of immersion.,,, Points are instantly reduced. Secondly, the first chapter at the beginning exposes common sense issues,,,, you have written a book, why can't you check the information,,,, you don't even know the common sense of inheritance tax,,,

Few and short, 😅

The greater the power, the greater the responsibility. The greater the ability, the more choices. Who dares to tell me that with greater ability comes greater responsibility? I will ask him about rights and obligations. I have fulfilled my obligations, where are the rights I should have?

If you have the power of telepathy, why don't you control things? Since the chairs can move, it shouldn't be difficult to make a few knives fly, right? Jia Wubai's method of using the immortal-killing flying knives in Under One Man is pretty good. It's impossible for the opponent to have a gun that can knock away dozens of flying knives. Moreover, if the protagonist goes to learn aerodynamics and physics, it shouldn't be a problem to destroy an army by one person.

A lot of random writing, the Marvel timeline is a mess, Steel 1 to 2 happened in a total of one month after being written by the author! As soon as I heard the news that Tony was going to Afghanistan, I went to the world of Octopussy. Marvel 24 Hours is back, written by the author himself! Then he and Daredevil went to block Obaday, and then went to Tony to fight Obadie in the company. Is it possible, and doesn't there need to be an excessive amount of time in between? When it was over, the author mentioned that he hadn't entered the mission world for a month. The back foot comes to Steel 2! ! The original book said that Tony was kidnapped for 3 months. After returning and holding a press conference, he upgraded his armor at home and it took at least 1 month to deal with Obadai! Then he held a press conference to admit that he was Iron Man! His father was so angry when he was whipped in Russia that he wanted to take revenge on Tony, so he started designing the reactor armor. He also wanted to check Tony's whereabouts, and then smuggled him from Russia to the United States! Now Tony has discovered that he has been poisoned! This period of time is at least more than half a year! ! Did the author himself eat during this time? Author: How much can you do in 24 hours a day? ? Why do so many plots in Marvel conflict with Iron Man and are so poorly written? Why do they have to do Iron Man, The Defenders, Daredevil, Superkiller, The Punisher, Purple Man, Kingpin, The Hand, Osborn, and Blade! These plots are enough for you to pass the time! ! Remember Marvel is your main world! ! The author has some snacks! According to the way you write it, from Iron 1 to Avengers 4, will it be done in one year? Please improve! !

The setting is a bit strange. Body and lifespan. According to the book, physique is divided into two parts: body and lifespan. Body refers to the hardware, which means whether it is strong or not. Lifespan refers to the software, which is the recovery ability and resistance to negative effects. The setting is not a big problem, but calling lifespan is a bit embarrassing. It is better to divide it into strength and constitution. Strength represents the strength of the body, and constitution represents the activity of the body.

What does it mean to directly add lifespan with attribute points? Did you forget to bring it back when you traveled through time? When traveling through the world, force is the first element. There are many things that can increase your lifespan. You have a better chance of getting it if you have force. If you don't add force, you should increase your lifespan first. When others kill you, they won't compare the remaining time of your lifespan with you.

I counted with my fingers and found that you are currently lying in Tokisaki Kurumi's arms playing with your phone and using Misaka Mikoto's battery to charge your phone. Maybe there is a jealous Rem next to you, but you are seriously visiting the starting point, and you saw my comment and clicked "Like".

Why do you want to lick S. H. I. E. L. D. At the beginning of the first chapter? I don't want to think about it. I am an Asian, and I was not born and raised in the United States. I was still Chinese a few months ago and I just changed my nationality. Can I be trusted by Director Lu Dan? Maybe the person who sold his liver and kidney would be resold in the end. Could it be that he met Director Lu Dan and told him that both Asians and African Americans are racially discriminated against in the United States, and we must unite as one?

Just a fan of Transformers, right? ! Can we change the world? ! ! It's been two months and you're still in the Transformers world! ! ! Anyway, I'll wait until the Transformers chapter is over before I read it again! ! ! If the Transformers chapter is still not finished this month, I will delete the book! ! !

Don't write about Transformers. It's really broken. The more you write about it, the more embarrassing it becomes.

One time traveler is enough. If there are more, the difference in perception will be magnified wirelessly.

The three golden chapters were written too much, resulting in no sense of immersion. The author is also very good. I just read one chapter, and one-sixth of it is dialogue. This way, the long dialogue without names makes me even more dizzy. Generally speaking, there is no need to rely on detailed dialogue to express the relationship between the characters. The suspense can only be guessed by the protagonist's behavior. These words are said clearly, and it is like a spoiler. If you can't see from the front, then you'll be blind from the back.

I read the first three chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. The setting is abstract and gives a sense of immersion? The author talks to himself.

Who is the Pirate King😥Why should I be his man🌹🤤

What do you think about the trend that the aging of authors leads to the aging of protagonists in works?

I was going to read it, but I found out that it took a few days to update one chapter.

What the hell is that operation at the beginning that adds attributes and lifespan? After explaining the uses of the three attributes in detail...

I took a good look at the various comments. Thank you book friends. I won't read this book 🤓