I Am a God in the Heavens

When you take other people's favor for granted, there is unequal information, and unequal abilities, how can you have the confidence to destroy your humanity and no one will care about you? Do you really think Goldfinger is your father? The readers know that you are the protagonist and cannot die, but the people in the book don't know that. The disgusting character. The first chapter of the three golden chapters is enough to persuade 80% of them to quit.

The writing of the main world is really not that good, it can be as little as possible, or else don't forcefully push the plot, because the writing is really not as good as the copy.

Isn't it good for the main world to just be content? What are you doing with Lao Mo? ?

Wear it clean and don't rebel, chrysanthemum set for electric drill

This golden finger dish is delicious! He was pulled to a level by the protagonist and then defeated! As a demon, doesn't it even have the most basic mental confusion? Mental suggestion or influencing thinking! He has none of these, he is weaker than a ghost, and he may not be able to defeat a ghost!

Aren't you going to be a god? How did you become a devil?

Goldfinger has intelligence, which is a poisonous point for me

Wonderful! Come on, keep writing!

I think the name Healing Magic is very problematic and nondescript. Aren't things like rejuvenation and immortality more down-to-earth?

The writing in the dungeon world is really good, you can play tricks and package it. Your introduction is very unattractive. No wonder there is so little investment. The writing in the main world is very average. The cool operations in the dungeon world are very interesting. In short, it is a good book that is popular in the world, but the premise is that you are worried about being a eunuch. Collection, please update more. 😁

After reading Chapter 4, I got better.

The little fat guy is really nothing to watch. It doesn't matter if he doesn't have this character.

The author is making rapid progress! The next one must be a good book!

​ Personally, I think you should be gentler when commenting in the book review area. After all, what you are evaluating is the author's hard work and the author's job. If you really want to improve a certain defect in the book, you can also try to use a more tactful tone to explain the issue. There is no need to leave some excessive comments in book reviews. One of your comments may dissuade dozens of readers, which may be the author's living expenses. Finally, following the trend is too unreliable. My personal suggestion is to go in and have a look.

Wear it clean and don't rebel, use chrysanthemum to turn it on

You can only get a few skill negative reviews from the soul. In some novels, devouring souls can obtain memory, knowledge, and even everything. And the one who becomes one with you is the devil. In many novels and movies, the devil can obtain the memory of the object. Soul memory: There is a lot of room for manipulation here, such as 1: The mysterious knowledge of the cultists 2: The location of the treasure of wealth 3: Character relationships to develop branch lines Does it matter to you if you just have a skill? It gives the impression that he is working for nothing for a rich man who can take care of the protagonist at any time. For example, Immorton is a big treasure, a mysterious gift package, and a water-number gift package. Finished

I think there is a problem with Goldfinger's ability to acquire skills. If the time traveler Goldfinger directly extracts skills, fortunately, this ability itself belongs to the devil. It cannot acquire knowledge or memory, but it can refine skills, and some abilities are just like rules. If this devil really has such awesome abilities, he would have gone to heaven long ago. It is really full of a sense of violation. How about changing the setting? This ability belongs to the protagonist, and absorbing souls belongs to the devil. You have already explained this ability in the previous chapter, and it is easy to change.

The writing is very good to my taste, good luck to the author!

General system novels have a common problem - the protagonist believes in the system too much and doesn't even think about it without doubt. I don't understand such a simple truth as pie in the sky, so I feel a bit naive and stupid. It's always good to be cautious. The first few chapters of a novel are very important chapters. Poor writing will turn off most readers.

Your writing style is too awkward, and the sentences don't make sense in many places. Can you read it yourself after you finish writing? Can we use less words like "so", "even" and "then"?

First of all, there are still very few creative places in this book, so keep up the good work. But there are indeed some shortcomings in many places. For example, many book friends said that the real world is not well written. The real world plot advances too fast and is too chaotic.

The synopsis does not match the title of the book, it looks like a demon

You finally wrote the ending for us.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The cool night makes me miss you like a river,