I Wanted to Eat and Wait to Die as a Mortal

Recommendation tickets are ready! All for you

The sense of immersion is very strong! Update it soon

The first investment, a little nervous...

I have been working a lot of overtime recently, so I will definitely do more at night.

I like it so much! Please keep updating. I will support it to the end! Come on~ Here comes Ollie! ! !

This book is good, not a novice, and suits my taste!

Come on, come on, come on, come on^^

It's even later, this chapter is from yesterday.

The author's writing is really good! !

I've been working a lot of overtime lately, so I took some time off today.

The beginning is well written! Hope it doesn't collapse! Come on! !

The number of words is too small and not enough to read. . Collect it first

Not a bad start! Collect it first and keep it slowly

The concept is very good hahahaha, good luck to the author

It's a very nice work. I recommend it to more book friends and give the author some firepower.

Not bad, but the word "er" is missing a bit. . .

I almost want to call the police... I write too slowly and too little...

By the way, has the author gone to book circles to promote it?

Sorry, I was busy at work today and forgot to post it. I will post another chapter later. Those of you who have recommendations or investments, please support me. If you don't have any, you can leave a comment. Thank you!

It's porridge, it's really porridge! Just promise me to keep writing!

According to my outline, I feel that my first part will be 1 million words, and I have plans for three or four more parts. If I had known, I wouldn't have wanted so many. Use love to generate electricity.

This article is wonderfully written! ! ! !

It feels pretty good. I hope the writer doesn't give up….

Thank you all for your support and encouragement, collections, recommendation votes, investments, and comments, both good and bad. Everyone said good things, and I thought for a while that the commenter might be a robot. In the follow-up, I will revise the beginning part and write the complete story. After all, it is too emotional to write, so many authors have suggested cutting it, and I really can't bear it. I have been writing for a month, and I am constantly practicing and learning many things. Because I have had little contact with online articles before, I have no experience. I am writing now after work, and I am quite happy that some people are reading it. Finally, thank you all for your support!

Nice! Please take my knee off!

These chapters were so painful and frustrating to write.

Finish the book with flowers! ! ! Thank you to the author for your persistence

The introduction is well written. The opening one-shot paragraph is too long. It is recommended to divide it into more paragraphs. Otherwise it is easy to persuade them to give up, there is a visual pibei.

Just browse and click in. Come on, author! Great!

Ei It's strange, I obviously voted for 2 recommendations? ? Why does it show that it was not successful?