Mingyuan Ji

Chapter Zero is the first time I've heard of it. . To be honest, I have only seen the first chapter or the prologue at the beginning of online articles Don't talk about old sayings at the beginning, and get to the topic as quickly as possible is the mainstream of online articles. (There are also advantages, but I won't talk about them)

Since this book was classified in the wrong category due to the negligence of the Hanhan author, in order to avoid the strange feeling of rejection when readers first read the book, I added the deleted prologue to the book and changed the title at the same time. The first book, even if it starts with a twist, I still don't want to give up. Thank you to every book friend who supports me. ❤️

The author's segmentation is accurate and his writing style is excellent. I am very happy to give you five collections. Please share "Heart to the Peak"

I just watched it carefully and it is really excellent. I give you a vote 😁😁

The concept is very good, the language is fluent and delicate, and it is a pleasure to watch you enjoy it. It shows that you are well prepared, so if you are serious, you will succeed one day! Hmm - I am also a newbie, so I am not qualified enough to make suggestions for your masterpiece (this is rarely the case in the novels I review, which shows that your novel really captured my heart)

It comes from the author's self-recommendation posted in the circle. How can I say that the classification was Eastern fantasy at first, but from the first chapter, I thought it was about ancient times, but I saw that it is full of modern ones later. Seeing that I still can't fully understand what kind of world the author wants to write about, I hope the author will continue writing. At least the paragraph you wrote is very interesting and true. Already collected, come on, don't be a eunuch.

Very well written! Come on, author

Come on, let's comment on Afeng's fate.

It's too slobbery, the beginning is unattractive, and the background of the world is a bit blurry.

Why was it suddenly finished? ?

The writing is quite good, but the words are a bit short. Please try to write more.

Although it is classified as fantasy, it feels like an urban fantasy. You don't need to thank me for the first half of the first chapter. Just briefly explain the background and highlight the protagonist.

It seems weird, how you combine modernity and ancient times.

Only after you join the circle do you know it's not easy. Two words, come on.

When I saw the title of the first chapter, I thought it was an ancient historical novel!