The Graveyard of the Hunter World

To be honest, I didn't notice the protagonist's intelligence increasing at all. On the contrary, I felt it decreased.

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It is recommended to write a protagonist who is familiar with the plot world after time travel and rebirth, and write less about psychological growth and transformation. Readers do not need to see these, no one cares about these, and directly determine the character. A person who has died once was still a trained person in his previous life. He is still nervous and afraid of death at all times. He is still the kind of death-phobe who has not started a fight. He is extremely scared when others threaten him. Then you write Nima.

Speechless, the protagonist wants to be the dog of ten old men

Ten old men specialize in training people with telekinesis, so just practice it. But it's not easy to raise a telekinesis person every year for six years. If you don't give a little more instruction and just do the tasks, isn't that a gift? It's not worth it. At least teach him to develop his telekinesis ability.

The most disliked thing about this book is the ability of the protagonist. The ability of the kind guardian is too unremarkable. The protagonist should try to improve his temperament, and enter into the subtle control of the basic ability of Nian. He can use his invincible perfect physical body to directly push horizontally, and supplement it with various wonderful and small auxiliary Nian abilities. To achieve high IQ and high blood, sea, land and air mages, tank warriors and medical illusions, without any shortcomings.

I finally signed the contract today. Thank you for your support. I will work harder to update every day. I also hope that you will continue to support Little Thief Rabbit. In the end, I shamelessly asked for votes! [Vote for me in the recommendation vote, hee hee hee...]

Among hunters, the ability to read is indispensable and the most exciting part. I hope the author sets it well and never sets it casually. Wonderful settings will definitely attract more readers, come on, author! There are too few good hunter fanfics

I just started reading this book and got to more than twenty chapters. But some of the content feels like... I really want to complain about it. First of all, in Chapter 9, Banal has not trained a qualified telepathic user for several years. Assuming that it takes five years to train a telepathic person, Tarot will only have a dozen telepathic people at most. However, in Chapter 24, Tarot needs twenty telekinesis users to protect him when traveling, which shows that Tarot has far more telepathy users than this number. Where do so many people with telekinesis come from? Second, Tarot needs twenty telekinesis users to protect him during a trip, so if the ten old men gather together, there will definitely be no less than 200 telekinesis users to protect them. As a result, in Youkexin City, the two hundred telekinesis users did not play any role. How did Ilmid avoid or defeat so many telekinesis users? So I am more inclined to believe that people with telekinesis abilities are rare here. Otherwise, when the Phantom Troupe made a big fuss in Youkexin City, why only the Yin Beasts fought with them, and other telekinesis users didn't even see their shadows. Even using ordinary people to fight the Phantom Troupe at the beginning. Third, according to Tarot's method of cultivating people with telepathy ability, the training of martial arts in the early stage was very focused and eliminated a large number of people. Why not give notes on the subsequent cultivation of telepathy ability? Don't you need a teacher? Why not send experts to train them carefully? A lot of resources were spent in the early stage, but in the later stage... It was an anticlimax.      ,, When the red-eyed Kurapika uses the water view style, five kinds of reflections appear in the water at the same time. However, he is not a person with six telekinesis abilities, but a special telekinesis ability. The protagonist's situation belongs to the trait system. Although it has the effect of strengthening the system, it is still a trait system, not a dual system. If you want to write it as a dual system, you can follow Kurapika's example and set two states for the protagonist, each state has a different system of telekinesis abilities.

After reading Chapter 9, I don't understand something. I can still understand the person who was killed late and disobeyed orders, but I can't understand the person who was killed on the first day before he reached the level. Forget it if he is an ordinary person. Isn't a brainwashed telepathic person stronger than those gangsters? Why not decentralize? It would be fine if dozens of people awakened their mental abilities every year, but it would be a bit wrong to only have two qualified people in a year, right?