Today You
今你
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 83k Words
- Genre
- Short Story
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Short Fiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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26Chapters
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The writing is pretty good, but I think it's a bit messy. I suggest you format it. It would be more perfect if you could describe it in more details, such as "location, language, demeanor, and movements." I wish you can sign the contract as soon as possible.
😁 The writing is good, but the time-travel plot seems very abrupt from the introduction. I don't know whether the author is writing about youth, the city, or a time-travel novel, but I hope the author can focus on writing youth plots. The plot is so good now, don't suddenly travel through time, it will become very strange! (Personal suggestion is that I hope the author can refer to it.)
The work has been released. Thank you friends for your support. We are working hard on new works. Thank you.
The author's thinking is wild and unconstrained! Admire! Collected, please update! Welcome to visit us again!
The novel has just been updated, thank you friends for supporting me. I hope to learn from more friends when it comes to writing. Please forgive my speed. I hope "Today You" will get better and better as I write it. Thank you.
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The whole article is very vivid and the story is very touching. Work hard and look forward to new works 🤭🤭🤭🤭
The novel "Today You" has been updated with Chapter 13. The content will soon enter the alien part. Friends are welcome to read and collect. Thank you.
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Great writing, keep up the good work!
Three chapters are not enough. Just wait for the update. Come on💪
The pace is fast and the language is very vivid. It's pretty good.
The plot is okay, but there are a lot of dialogues. It would be better to reduce the dialogues and add more descriptions, so that it looks more perfect and vivid. Another point is that some sentences are missing some words, which makes the sentences not smooth. After each writing, it is best to check each paragraph again and again, and finally confirm that there are no flaws in the sentences, and it is not too late to publish it.