Xuanqing Immortality Tribulation

The writing is very good, I hope you can continue to write more! 😊

This book is a trap that I have always been interested in learning about some mythological stories. It mainly focuses on the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists, supplemented by the background. Because I wanted to write a long book, I thought about the outline for a week, and then I dared to write it after covering everything. Sorry for the immature writing style. We will work hard to improve it and adjust the plot. This book is expected to be very long. From the introduction, you should be able to guess that the first part is about the plot between the heroine and the hero. I am a real stepmother. Please don't send razor blades in the future. Nowadays, favored writers are in power. It is difficult to write and easy to write. But since I have opened a trap, I will insist on writing because I don't want to give up my dream. I will work hard, please give me some encouragement, thank you very much! !

I got some advice from a colleague today. Because I put the plot of the tribulation between the hero and heroine at the front, some fairy friends may feel that I am selling romance on the basis of the fairy tale after reading the first few chapters. So I scratched my head and wrote a chapter prologue at the front. Fairy friends can take a look. Thanks. If you have any suggestions, I will definitely listen.

When no one reads it, I always wonder if my writing is too rubbish... Ugh.

I read "Everyone Is My Classmate". I feel that the style of this book is somewhat similar to that one. They are both genres that I like. It's pretty good. I'm following it! And this one is much faster than the one next door, come on!

The writing is relatively elegant, the story is clear, and the plot is pretty good. Although the rest are relatively few, the character switching in some parts is not particularly smooth. In addition, the character names are not very different and sometimes it is not clear who is doing what. My advice is to use the central character as the main perspective when writing character interactions, and the other characters as secondary perspectives. This is not easy to talk about. There is an online article up owner (Daah Mao Jun) at Station B who also talked about this point. If you have time, you can learn from the writing method. Overall, it's a very good article. I'll accept it. Come on.

The boss hasn't voted for me for two days, which makes me sadder than the editor failing to approve my application... I'm about to cry. Please don't give up on me, I'm working really hard to update the article.

The prologue is a foreshadowing of love, and the description of the beautiful man is good. Come on!

It can be seen that the author writes very seriously! Come on! This book was accidentally discovered when I was browsing the novice circle! Although, I don't usually read fairy tale novels! But we are all newbies, so we should take care of each other! For a novice, it is already very good to be able to write like this, at least much better than me! I hope the work can be signed as soon as possible! Persistence is victory!

The author strongly recommends "Ask the Immortal" to you. It is a signed fairy tale work and it is also written by a newcomer!

I'm really sorry for everyone, Xuanqing may have to stop updating for two days. During this period of time, I have been busy with my own affairs. Although I am annoyed, I still insist on updating every day. But maybe after finishing writing the human story, I haven't caught up with the inspiration when entering the next plot, or maybe I've been feeling a little low these past few days, and I feel uncomfortable reading a book with poor results. I feel like my writing these past few days has been very poor, so I decided to take a pause, collect my thoughts, and revise my outline. I'm also planning on writing another book. I'm really sorry, but don't worry, everyone, I won't give up on the book, and I have to keep writing it slowly.

Looking forward to more exciting chapters from the author in the future

Jingsu, after the author described it like this, I instantly felt that my peerless appearance, which had no place to be placed, was not worth mentioning. Secret love is the saddest feeling, hiding a lot of helplessness and pain. I am reminded of the song "Secretly Obsessed", the lyrics all explain the various aspects of this secret love...