The Book Travels Through the Interstellar Era

The heroine has traveled through time and became a little transparent person who appeared in the original text for a while. She was a passerby who disappeared on the way to school in her previous life. In this life, the original heroine was tricked to death by the reborn poisonous female partner in advance, and the current heroine was reborn. She has no antagonistic relationship with the heroine of the original text. According to the current situation, it seems that she is very likely to become a fellow guardian of the planet together in the future. Because he is related to the male protagonist of the original text, his identity has become a mystery. The author's plot setting is quite good, which is more in line with my preferences! I haven't encountered any weird and mentally retarded male and female partners yet, and I hope this will continue. It's okay to be scheming, but don't be too brainless, otherwise the guardian theme of this article will be eclipsed. But now that I'm following the article, I still can't help but read it. Come on!

I feel sad for the original person. Dan Aoi killed the original person. It is understandable that the heroine was not able to avenge the original person at first, but later when she was able, she did not find a way to avenge the original person, but lived her own happy campus life. Also, the heroine said that she did not want to return to the Walter family, thinking that she was not the original person and should not go back to enjoy everything that belonged to the original person. However, because everyone in the original family was good to her, especially the original mother, she finally said according to her own understanding that the original person should not want her mother to be sad. In short, she justified her choice to return, and she wanted to save the world. I would like to give the author some advice, at least let the heroine kill her murderer for the original person, avenge that poor life, and then enjoy everything about her, instead of throwing the blame away just to protect herself from being exposed. This makes people feel that the heroine is really selfish in order to protect herself, and the original owner who was killed is really pitiful.

It is recommended that the author does not throw out all the settings at the beginning. It is better to read it step by step in large paragraphs. The subject matter of this article is one that I like very much and is also rare. Good luck to the author!

It's eight chapters in, and I'm still introducing the background, but I haven't gotten into the plot yet. . . How little does the author care about readers?

It's so hard for a female channel to have a good Star Wars book! ! I have no intention of doing anything these days, I just want to finish this book! The first 10 chapters are really long, especially about Dan Aoi, which took 3 chapters. Although I knew that I wanted to bring out the follow-up story of the first life, I still wrote too much, and then I got a head start at the beginning of school, and it was not an important supporting role... It took more than 300 chapters just to write about the heroine and the study of the elite class. The promotion of Star Wars is very fast, and there are not so many details. This makes me a little worried that this part will be ended in a hurry. In addition, the extra chapter is also good to read, it's great, the choice of Manny in the extra chapter is great, they are not really the same person, so they make decisions according to their own ideas, whether it is Manny in the main story or Manny in the extra chapter, they all make decisions according to their own ideas, which is great. Secondly, I have some regrets about the following points: 1. The apprenticeship has no other effect except giving money and being a bridge to the biological mother. You can at least reach level eight and play a supporting role. 2. When we were on earth, there were obviously 12 people there, but only this unmarried couple could have their names, and the others were not even mentioned. They also had their own stories, which could have been expanded as a copy. 3. The idea that viruses and other viruses are caused by aliens is very interesting, and I also propose to fight them back, which is awesome 👍. However, I also want to read the follow-up story of the fight back. There must be a lot of gains, but it is a pity that I have not written it. I guess the author mainly serves the main line and does not plan to write too much in the copy, so as not to distinguish between primary and secondary. But I really want to see these maps. I wonder if flashbacks will be considered later? Or should you consider opening a new book, a prequel, a sequel, etc.? 😃 Sometimes I feel that there is no need to think too much about serving the main line. For example, in Doomsday Paradise, what the heroine originally planned to do, it was so long ago that I don't remember it at all, but in the middle, she always wanted to save her friends, but she has written millions of words, and she has not completed her main task. She has been traveling in different dungeons. The author describes each dungeon in detail, and the dungeons are also very beautiful. So, madam, would you consider writing the main text of Manny's Earth Star Story in detail?

I feel like the writing is so long-winded, and the repeated and detailed descriptions are really unnecessary. I only read the third chapter. What supported my reading of the third chapter was that the comment section said that the writing at the end is beautiful + the setting of the interstellar heroine, but it is said that the setting was only completed in the tenth chapter 😭. The author should think about how to get rid of most of the various psychological descriptions and miscellaneous scene descriptions. The author is not a delicate literary type, so he should learn to use his strengths and avoid weaknesses. If he is not good at describing details, write less, and use his imagination to defeat the details.

The author got better and better as he wrote this book. The dozen or so chapters that introduce the background in the early stage may not convey the meaning, but after reading it, it will feel better. From the interstellar battle to the experience of traveling through the post-apocalyptic earth, the concept is really good, and the author's three views are also correct, so it is worth watching.

It's so long-winded that I don't know whether to continue reading 😅

I finally wrote about Star Wars. It was very exciting. It unfolded the story of the male and female protagonists protecting their homeland. Although there was not much time for sweetness, the plot was very good. Rebirth does not mean that everything is the same as before. It has to follow the plot of the previous life to reach the peak. This is full of too many uncertain factors. It is great!

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The idea is very good, but the foreshadowing is too long. Each subsequent chapter is the same as the Mango TV series. The last paragraph of the previous chapter is written again after the last chapter. Is the author trying to make up for the word count? It greatly affects the reading experience. Genuine readers said they couldn't stand it anymore

When the heroine entered the military academy, her appearance was adjusted to 75%. Isn't the military training realistic? How did she adjust her appearance?

Pay great attention to the rhythm of your writing. Some paragraphs are a bit slow. A few paragraphs can be used to introduce clearly, and try to reduce repetitive and useless descriptions. Also pay attention to the language logic of some sentences. Check if the sentences are not smooth. The big setting is still good, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

A very good new book. I am currently too thin and need to gain weight. I have a very positive outlook on life and it is very suitable for my liking!

The author's writing is quite nice, but sometimes the descriptions are a bit too wordy.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Oh! Watching it every day

Is the qualification level evaluation of this book different from others? It feels like doing it backwards. SABCDE... E is better than D here? !

Are you not going to update the original text? Is it considered finished? Maybe it's almost over, I'm so reluctant to leave (･∀･)

This book was originally quite enjoyable to read, but unfortunately the second prince was chosen as the male protagonist in the comments. To be honest, I have read a lot of female video books, and many of them were because the male protagonists abandoned them. The male protagonists in the female video books, except for the masters of the ancient romance section, the male protagonists chosen by the authors of other sections are really hard to describe. It can only be said that it does not conform to male thinking. This second prince, I don't know why the heroine can have feelings for him. The second prince's mother is the source of tragedy for the heroine's family. You borrowed someone else's body to have sex with the son of your enemy? The concept makes people feel unrealistic. Moreover, this person is just like that, he might as well be Hua Deli

Can that sister tell me who the male protagonist is? ! !

My favorite book It combines interstellar and apocalyptic elements, which I love so much, and the characters and storylines are so exciting. It's so beautiful and I love it.

Finished? I didn't understand the extra story later, is it time travel again?

Author, do you have any new novels in the works?

Does the author still update? There is no update so far.

Is the text finished? Why do you keep updating extra episodes?

Does the author have any new novels?

When I first read Chapter 13, I thought, wouldn't it be fifth after being promoted to Level 2? Why are there level 1 players in the top five on the leveling list?