The Book Tells the Story of the Little Cannon Fodder's Counterattack

The author's water injection is too serious, which makes the article verbose and even difficult to read.

A very nice novel. Easy and no brainer. The heroine's IQ is on the line. She doesn't give in to the original heroine, and she doesn't lose her wits when it comes to the male protagonist. She doesn't tell the male protagonist about her golden finger (portable space). This is something I haven't seen in other novels with female protagonists. In the past, I saw in novels that the male and female protagonists told the male protagonist every secret after they had a heart-to-heart relationship. Fortunately, most of the authors were the female protagonist's biological mothers. In the end, the male protagonist was not attracted to Gold Finger and was infatuated with the female protagonist. Those who become greedy are male partners (husbands in previous lives). After the death of the heroine, she was reborn with all kinds of regrets, and then abused her ex-husband, but then told the current male protagonist (or accidentally let the current male protagonist find out. Of course, the current male protagonist has noble sentiments, is dedicated to the heroine, and doesn't care about gold fingers, so people don't know what to say.

I watched it for so long that I couldn't bear it anymore! Too wordy! ! When I first read it, I almost gave up on the first few chapters, but I thought that this was a new author, so I endured it. Then after more than ten chapters, the author also discovered his own problem (confusion, verbosity, and illogical logic), and then said he would correct it! At that time, I felt that I could continue watching. But I have seen more than 100 pictures now! It's still verbose and hasn't changed at all. Obviously I can express it clearly in more concise words, but I have to be wordy! Can we understand it well? Then today, taking advantage of the limited exemption, I took a look at the back. I skipped the middle part without reading it, and then this new chapter is still so long-winded.

I don't know why I read this book. I looked for the plot from the narration and thought it was because there was no male protagonist. It turns out that the heroine, the Holy Mother, gave herself to the former male protagonist. It's poisonous, so be careful!

This book is so extraordinary The entire Versailles literature, no matter what the heroine does, the author has to write several chapters from the psychological description of various characters to show the heroine's nobility. For example, I remember that the heroine was invited back for dinner by her grandfather in public, so he wrote several long chapters based on the psychological description of the heroine's master, the heroine's sister, the heroine's family elders, and the heroine's family descendants. I thought it would be on the best-seller list, but it turned out that this junk article was all a psychological drama. There is no action description, scene description, and too little language description. Emotions, this story of yours is all based on your imagination.

Except for the fact that the heroine does not get married, other romances are no different from those in which the heroine is stronger and the hero is stronger. The heroine is still weak when encountering the hero, she will still complain "uncompliance", and she will be weak and weak.

The introduction to this book is fake. There is a male protagonist, and every day, he has children.

It's really not easy. It can be said that it took a lot of effort to finish reading these 21 chapters. I can't even feel at ease after reading it. First of all, I don't know if the author is a novice, or if the author's writing style is like this. Basically 99% of it is a long paragraph of narrative, and many of them are repeated over and over again, over and over again. My brain is spinning. Secondly, the author uses many words very casually. For example, does the heroine not have clairvoyance and clairvoyance? ? For example, the heroine wants to sing about Jerusalem? ? (Both examples appear in the same big paragraph in Chapter 21) There are many more that I won't give examples one by one. Although we can understand them, it's really not good to be so casual. Finally, I won't talk about other sentences, word order, typos, and logical irrationality. What I want to say is, author, do you only read the comments that brag about you, and don't read the comments from readers who corrected their mistakes? I read 21 chapters, and in each chapter there are a lot of complaints about your typos and sentence mistakes. I don't complain about them, but the mistakes are still wrong. The only one who made more comments was the flatterer. I just want to say that people still need to be modest in order to grow.

Oh, it turns out that not marrying someone in the introduction doesn't mean there is no male protagonist. I'm off. 😥

The heroine doesn't get married but just has the hero's child? I looked at the introduction and then commented on me...😅

Why are you so long-winded? ? Wouldn't it be action description, environment description, and character description? Can you only write narration and explanatory text? This is so long-winded that I actually downloaded the app just to comment! I'm really impressed! !

It's really long-winded, I can't stand it anymore, I keep explaining...

Is the author afraid that we won't be able to survive in your book? The introduction is so detailed, so detailed, or wordy, like a talkative person who can explain something clearly in a few sentences, but insists on making it complicated to make up for the word count?

This book looks so tiring, like a long composition, even more tiring than reading a composition! The characters' stories are all narrated, there is no dialogue or confrontation between the characters, it's like reading a white text from the first person perspective! So disappointed! !

I didn't sleep all night and read Chapter 71. There are too many flaws. Almost every chapter has several, dozens of low-level mistakes. There are even some typos that shouldn't appear. It seems that you are reading a pirated article and the typos are only made by automatic recognition software. There are too many explanatory texts, and many communicative conversations are like reading instructions. There are also some logical errors. The most serious thing is that the author seems to have a short-term memory loss. Many attributes are inconsistent. Not to mention how many chapters apart, some even have different values ​​for the same attribute of the same thing/character in the same chapter, on the previous and next pages (the app I use), which is really shameful. Many readers have left messages pointing out that the author did not make many corrections. It seems that the free plot reaches chapter 80, and I will not watch it after reading it. The poison test is over.

According to this update rate, I think it is more cost-effective to save for a year and read it again. There are only 52 weeks in a year, and it is okay to have about 50 chapters, but I am afraid that I will forget it after reading the new book! Author, you have to work hard! The book is very interesting, don't give up! Don't mess up! Don't be anticlimactic! Try to fight for it, you have to finish the book if you delay. Look how much we're looking forward to it!

Why is everyone saying that the author is nagging to death? I think it's okay, except for the psychological description and incident description of the rescue part, and the rest is quite gradual. On the contrary, there are some other books that are obviously cool and full of plots. I wish I could just skip all the elaboration, which makes people feel anxious. . . I think the author's pacing is pretty good~

Su Ruoji,,, we can't change this name, Su Ruoxue is already a bad person,

Well... I want to know if there is a male protagonist? Haven't seen it yet. (*^ω^*) I heard that you don't know how to get married, and you don't know how to have a harem, right? (๑•॒̀ ູ॒•́๑) La la la

The author feels that the plot of a novel is interlocking. If you don't finish reading it or skip reading it, it is easy to misinterpret it because you don't see or miss important clues. Moreover, the characters in the novel are constantly growing. After experiencing some things, their thoughts will always change. Except for robots, people cannot remain unchanged.

When I entered the secret realm, I thought about bringing the ginseng essence to Ancestor Su, but I didn't mention it after I came out and gave it to others.

It's too shabby. That's not the way to expand the article. It keeps repeating and repeating. If I want to modify it, I have to delete 2/3 of the article.

When I read the introduction, I wanted to say, what does being a strong woman have to do with whether or not you marry? If I understand it wrong, just pretend I didn't say it.

It was agreed that there would be no male lead, and he would sleep as soon as he said so. Wouldn't it hurt to be slapped in the face like this?

I saw her on the free bookshelf today, but I couldn't read the paid section. What the hell?

After reading Chapter 17, the narration takes up thirteen chapters. Luo Libasuo keeps introducing and explaining. The reader is not stupid. Is there any need to explain and explain all the time before he can understand it by just passing by? It's really crazy to look for plot in the commentary. Is the author trying to make up for the word count? This novel is really hard to read.

I'm so tired from reading this novel... It's written in vernacular, and it's a dialogue with one's inner self...

The verbose heroine here has traveled through time for two years. You know someone is going to kill you today, so you still go obediently. Even if it's freezing to death, you say you want to return the indifference others have towards you, but you still don't. There's no counterattack, and you keep following the path arranged by others. Why are you so pushy?

Goodbye. I feel sick when I think that Zi Ao is Ye Chongshan and Ye Chongshan may be the male lead. I decided to wait until the male lead comes out or there is no male lead before watching. I am fattening up.

I seem to remember... This was originally meant for quick wear?