The Rise of the Corpse Refining Sect

It's true that I have never criticized a book in over ten years of reading. It's just not good, but I can't bear it. However, Nima can't bear it. Such a good subject matter and writing style, such a stupid plot, I will be cowardly when seeing an ordinary person, just like a loser, forcing myself to show off, it is really disgusting to read, a good book has completely ruined the main character.

Why did you create an uncontrollable zombie earlier? Why did you write this plot? Could it be that later on, the zombie will succeed in cultivation and then come back to find a love-hate relationship with the protagonist? Just a few words. I don't want to read it after reading this. I hate this kind of plot.

There are too many poisonous points. First of all, the protagonist turns into a corpse. The protagonist should change his mentality, be decisive, keep a distance from human beings, and write about living people if he wants to get close to humans. A dead person like you still maintains a human heart every day. Movies can be so afraid of correct three views. Do you understand that this is a novel? Later, they even sent it to people's homes for study, so they could see what they thought of it themselves. There are also the protagonist's skills, which have too many flaws. Are you writing about revealing the secret of corpse refining? Become the protagonist and explore the details of corpse refining? Show this kind of thing to readers? Is it necessary? There are no specific details about the inheritance? Don't be ridiculous. Is this still the monk's memory? It's also poisonous to cause trouble for yourself. The specific functions and training methods of corpse refining should be clearly stated from the beginning, instead of showing the readers that the protagonist is so stupid that he is doing experiments, and it is very irritating to see such a stupid protagonist in the apocalypse.

If you like this kind of subject, you may have never smelled the smell of corpses. Buy a pound of pork and put it on your bedside. If you can stick to it for two weeks, it will prove your true love for the zombies.

Don't watch it anymore, pig's feet are stupid, timid, and most importantly, it's boring.

The main reason is that the author himself did not make it clear. You are writing about non-human beings, not humans. People who are not my race must have different minds. Do you know that if you just call out the zombies who are trying to save their lives, what will you do in the future? The protagonist is a dead body and has no feelings. You still want to open a harem and mix with humans. You are afraid that the protagonist will not be dissected by others. Do research and have any grudges. You saw her and she looks good. Isn't that what it is

Overlooking the writing, the main character, the Virgin, is greedy for life and afraid of death. She always does things that are meaningless and not helpful to herself at all. She never fails to kill enemies when it is time to kill them, and she can still make friends with them by talking and laughing. People watching are confused and in a trance. The various settings are messy and bloody. It is really a vicious move.

There are so many poisonous points I just read more than twenty chapters. It's okay if the protagonist doesn't destroy the zombies he created. He doesn't kill the evil people he encounters, but lets them go. Those are evil people, not good people. What's your reason for not killing them? Instilling corpse energy without loss is not as good as upgrading strong zombies to fight wild monsters. After defeating it, is it better to forcibly improve your talent in the early stage? ! Forcibly training a female boss, the key is that she has actually met the protagonist. Doesn't the author know that this is a very dangerous way of writing? The smart way to write it is that the woman has never met the protagonist, open a single chapter and only talk about her plot, and then meet and oppose the protagonist in the middle and later stages. And there is actually another inheritance. Biochemistry directly changes into fantasy. It is a very dangerous writing method. The power system will easily collapse in the later stage. Also, today's readers don't like to see the protagonist being tortured, nor do they like to see the protagonist being too strong. Your writing is too unbalanced. Nowadays, all authors follow the trend and write apocalyptic novels where the protagonist is against the whole world. People with ability gather around the protagonist. No matter what he does, the protagonist will be slapped in the face. The villain will always have met the protagonist. I thought, this writing method is too stupid and vulgar. It doesn't have to be a constant intrigue. You can write that the end of the world is coming, the protagonist establishes a stronghold, kills those who should be killed, promotes those who should be killed, unites all the forces that can be combined, does not fight internally, only eliminates the rebels, and then fights the zombies. Because there is little pretentious content about internal fighting, wars must be carried out continuously to make readers want to read. It is a small-scale war at the beginning, and a large-scale war must be fought in the middle and later stages. It is best to have a zombie siege when there are 10,000 people, and then all the people are soldiers. The protagonist is courageous and far-sighted, kills many people to stabilize the morale of the army, and then almost annihilates the entire army and destroys the zombies. I will write a buffer period later, and then the war between strongholds and strongholds (humans and humans), forget about it

Very rubbish👍 I really like this subject matter. I originally thought that no matter how toxic it is, I can still read it. You are an awesome author. Little white text, plot paraquat.

1. The name of the spell is too tacky 2. Make your own father suffer 3. A motorcycle can kill people in the messy terrain of a wasteland city. This motorcycle comes with wall penetration and silence, right? If you want to send a skill, you might as well just click on it. What is the point of creating a poisonous spot? I was poisoned. Say goodbye.