I'm Writing a Novel in Konoha

It's very interesting. As long as it doesn't collapse in the future, I'll finish it!

This subject matter is very good. Good luck to the author.

Force me to register every day, force me to play every day

Practicing Jin Yong's martial arts in the ninja world is a waste of time. After more than ten years of practicing martial arts, it is still not as good as a teenage chunin. Practicing martial arts also requires a lot of basic knowledge (Taoist scriptures and the like), and if you pass it on to others, can ninjas understand it?

[Disclaimer]: I did not delete the book review. I also saw the news about [The Cute Girl Who Fell into the Water] that a certain fan network only updated the book ten times after it was published. I just wanted to reply to the comment but it disappeared. (Strong desire to survive) Reply here, the hand speed of ten updates is not allowed, and it has not been recommended yet. No matter how many updates are added, the collection will not increase quickly, so I am saving the article now and I will have the opportunity to update it in the future. If you want to see the archived manuscript, you can look for the password in the introduction.

This author is okay, he just updated the number of chapters for ghosts to see. So little.

It's too watery. The first few chapters are almost all about the content of the book. The key is that we don't read the Swordsman World. It's useless if you write it. We just skip it. If a ninja gets angry and goes to trouble the protagonist because of a part of the novel, you can write about which part he is because of. It makes my eyes hurt.

I will inherit the five thousand years of China!

The few books I read in the past were very creative, such as Danzo's Inspirational Biography, which tells the story of Danzo's betrayal by his lover Koharu and his best friend Hiruzen. In the small H article, there are things like sleeping with Xiaochun's stockings. . Forget it, I think the protagonist will be beaten to death.

It's not exciting, the plot is flat, the new book is on sale, the readers' reactions are not written, the system popularity value is not summarized, and the redemption rules are not written. Swordsman has not sold much yet, and it can be redeemed for the next book, and it can be exchanged for a large amount of e-readers. Various redemptions seem to be endless. There are also those who are engaged in research, as if it is a matter of course that the research is successful. They do not ask for detailed research processes, but they must write down one or two failed plans.

It's good to write about Obito's potential as an idiot before he turned black, but why did you, Moonlight Hayate, enroll in school at the age of two and a half? Even a genius doesn't do it this way. I won't tell you if I don't know the situation of other people.

Originally, the writing in the early stage was pretty good, but when it came to the disgusting batch of extras written in the later stage, you just wrote about Sasuke as a playboy, and you used your hands and feet to touch all the people Naruto wanted to go on a blind date with! Is it okay to be so disgusting? It doesn't matter if you are too young! Did you write Hinata to be so nymphomaniac? In reality, you have such a playboy who touches and attracts all the girls around you. Aren't you disgusted? In the anime, Naruhina was dismantled and written like this, so that Naruhina's party won't scold you to death if they see it (I am). If you readers see it, please point me up and let the author take a look!

Martial arts go directly to the yellow type. In the middle stage, you still have to fight Kaguya like Feng Yun. In the later stage, you still have super martial arts, creating and breaking the universe at every turn.

Shinichi-kun.......

Writing novels, drawing comics and making movies in the world of Naruto is a good subject, but not everyone can handle it, especially when writing about Chinese subjects. What do you think ninjas like martial arts and the wild can understand? Forcibly promoting a heterogeneous culture in a civilization with a history of thousands of years? The sense of dissonance is overwhelming

Well, I would like to ask the author, can the original martial arts in Jin Yong's martial arts novels withstand a C-level ninjutsu? Of course, if it's a magically modified version, just pretend I didn't say anything?

No wonder it is not popular. What is the reaction of the indigenous people to this kind of cultural invasion? What about shock? Let's not talk about how fascinated we were when we were children by reading martial arts novels, right? What should be written here is not exciting at all. It is like an assembly line. After writing one book, the next one will follow. 6, Awesome.

In fact, the author is really tired. Writing this book is equivalent to writing two novels. I hope the author will update it more.

The most important point is that prehistoric myths and such are written in Naruto as legends. After all, his world itself is not enough. It's almost enough to raise your combat power to the level of a fairy. Otherwise, if you continue to write like this, are you planning to make everyone in the Hokage become immortals?

When I saw that the main character was from the Shimura clan, I wasn't very interested.

In fact, if you are writing a martial arts novel, the protagonist is basically about "martial arts". If you want to highlight the "xia", I suggest you write the book "Three Heroes and Five Righteousness". After all, it can be called the originator of Chinese martial arts novels. However, it is recommended to write later martial arts novels after they are integrated into the ninja world. Only then can chivalry be carried forward

I saw the author's introduction to Goldfinger. . . . emmmm, let's sort it out by ourselves System name:? ? ? Function: Provide real-world novels for the protagonist to be a copywriter Acquire popularity points based on the impact of the novels written (probably) System Mall: Can it be exchanged for everything in the novels written? Mission: Cultural Invasion (Fog)

The so-called Kai Xiao Zao's combat power has not improved significantly. You have spent more than 200,000 words talking about the preliminary level. It's time for you to start directly improving your combat power.

How is your internal strength set? Is it pure physical energy, or is it that the body and spirit are mixed with a small part of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth at home? If it is the latter, does that mean? In the middle and later stages, the chakra system can be completely abandoned!

As for the reason for abandoning the chakra system? Because it is mixed with a small amount of the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, it can increase lifespan. There is a lot of that in Naruto, the spiritual energy of heaven and earth!

What other novels are similar to this kind of cultural invasion?

You should also write in a more subtle way. Anyone who tries to do this so bluntly will kill you.