The Legend of the Hegemonic Body of the Heavens

I suggest the author change the introduction! Otherwise, a lot of people will be discouraged!

Come on, author, it's all settled. I like that the protagonist is a big muscled guy 😏

It's not unreasonable that this book is so popular

From the protagonist's words and actions, it can be seen that the protagonist is not a strong person. It feels that it is not very consistent with the title. It should be called... All Heavens... It would be better to survive.

This introduction must be poisonous, it's so bad, it's not as good as the previous one! Including the opening chapter, I have revised it three times. It takes only once a week, and I have to revise it next week!

The story is interesting, but a little watery. The characters change frequently and the writing is poor. It's tasteless and a pity to discard.

I was shocked. Objectively speaking, this novel is not amazing, but there are no logical errors, no bugs, the writing style is not naive, and the writing is not a running account. It is meaningful and has no poisonous points. But why is it not popular?

What a bad start! It's better to just cross over!

It's okay to write, but it's frustrating to read.

Damn it, I clicked in and looked at the table of contents. Datang has written 260 chapters and it's not finished yet? ? ?

Well written, why didn't anyone vote?

Author, the background of your wish is the first industrial revolution? But I have a sniper rifle after watching the animation! What you wrote is too contradictory. It makes me extremely uncomfortable and awkward 😰

Come on ✊💪💪💪

The reason why this book is not popular is because the first world is a comic. The writing is very good, but the first world is too niche.

After much thought, I decided to book it all. If the eunuch scolded me, he would feel more confident.

When it comes to money, I really don't have much, but I will try my best to support it and not let good books bury it. To say that this book is a masterpiece is not necessarily true, but it is still very good. The protagonist is not a stallion, not a virgin, not as witty as a demon, nor is he brainless and reckless. In my opinion, the protagonist may have a superhuman body, but his mind or personality is that of an ordinary person who occasionally has flashes of inspiration, has extraordinary perseverance, can have random thoughts, and has his own clear values. Some people say that the protagonist is not decisive enough, and the character is always changing. As mentioned above, the protagonist is an ordinary person in terms of personality, and he is also Chinese, and he is also a Chinese who has attended nine years of compulsory education. I am curious. If a miserable woman who has taken care of you for several weeks was tortured and killed in front of you because she was close to you, I think you are at least angry and sad. Would you smile lightly, not take it seriously, or clap your hands, and join in? I think the answer is no. I said that the protagonist is a human being, not a god. He will be afraid, have troubles, and will also grow. . . . Let me, let us wait and see, follow the protagonist and the author to witness their growth

It's good that the author has writing style and heart, but the first two worlds are failures. In the third world, he wanted to write about a person with feelings and righteousness, a flesh-and-blood machine who is not controlled by the gods. Unfortunately, the length is too long. Zhutianliu is more suitable for a lone wolf. The family should be downplayed as much as possible. It's too boring. Although it wants to be enjoyable, it is not completely satisfying. There are too many gringo names in the first two worlds. If you can't remember, it's better to add a code name to distinguish them.

Everyone, I want to know if the protagonist is a tyrant?

To be honest, the author's writing is really good. The battles are exciting, and the life is also exciting. There are things he does and things he doesn't do. I just saw the 1v10 arena match ended

The author needs to understand the magnetic field rotation system, the system prepared for macho style

The Monks and Nine Swordsmen in DND are also the Chopper Team and can defeat demons.

I read the reviews and they all said it was okay. Come and try it out.

Chapter 7 There is no need to completely crush the Scorpion King to death. If I remember correctly, the Scorpion King is not a big role. You can completely change it to another one. It is too dangerous to work with such a psychopath. The author portrays the Scorpion King too much, and it feels like a clown. This is too awkward and I can't stand it. The above are purely my own suggestions. I'm sorry if you don't like it.

More than 400 chapters and 30 comments, how did you do it?

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