Call the General Spirit

It is well written, and you can see that you have your own ideas, but you must think carefully about the later structure.

I feel that the writing is okay, but there are a few battle scenes. I don't know if it's the kind of invincibility at the beginning. The main reason is that I have a realm above dragons at the beginning. I'm a little confused. Isn't it possible that I encountered someone with a low realm at the beginning, and then slowly regained the powerful spirit/manual dog head as I progressed through the main plot? In fact, the author's writing is pretty good. The above is just my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. ✌️

Grateful! Come on! Such a good book, don't be a eunuch!

Interesting 😊

Come here because of the attraction, don't be a eunuch

I'll read a little more and see you, so I made a special starting point to support you. It's very interesting to write, keep up the good work.

It's interesting, please come on the author 😊

It's interesting to see. It's a good article.

It's interesting, and I felt good after reading the first chapter. Collect it first. Come on brother!

Come here because of the attractions, the "starting point" for downloading

It's interesting, I don't want a eunuch.

It's interesting, I also wrote a book...

What you see is fate. If you were a eunuch, you would be doomed.

Come on, come on, you can still write well. Since you are here, it is fate. I look forward to you!

The author, please be patient and don't stop updating.

I'll just talk about my thoughts on this book here First of all, the current situation in this book is that the spirit king's side (let's call it the "evil spirit") is at war with the human side. You can understand this as a battle with a larger scale and larger formation than the battles between countries like World War I and World War II. This is a battle between two worlds and two races. The evil spirits currently want to resurrect the God of Death, but their ultimate goal is to defeat humans. Humanity only needs to ensure that the God of Death is not resurrected. So what is the reason why this war started? A simple summary is that a group of employees want to be their own bosses in a company, and more and more people are joining them. Then the boss of the company has to solve the situation. But the boss loses and can only leave the company and start a new company. Originally, the company has already been opened, but the boss is not convinced. He does not want to hand over his industry to others, so he starts to fight back. The above is my personal understanding So in the current situation, as a child who has just entered college and started to enjoy college life, what can the male protagonist do? All he can do is deal with the details, avoid causing trouble, and let himself grow as much as possible. He is the real player in this game of chess. In the previous generation, the male protagonist had a body of ten thousand spirits. It was not a system or anything like that. It just said that his upper limit was high and his variability was high. It did not mean that the starting point was high. That is to say, the male protagonist could only ensure that he could develop now. So if you want to read Long Aotian's pretense and cool novel, I guess it may not meet your expectations at the moment. The male protagonist is still very inexperienced and can't do many big things.         ，，，The characters here are too real, such as the nagging teacher, the money-worshiping senior, the opponent who runs away if he can't be beaten, the elders who do one thing in front of others and the other behind, etc. They won't make special appearances to show off people with particularly high status🦐bb, they are all real people in real life.         🐂🍺，30，，🌶️ The shortcomings are also obvious. The author himself said that he is not good at writing emotional dramas. I have also experienced this. Personally, I think the relationship between the male and female protagonists in this story is as dull as water. In other cool articles, at least you know what the female protagonist is conquered. The level is different here (it's only about thirty chapters, which level do you want). The female protagonist meets the male protagonist, invites him to help move, prepares to take the exam to the same school, and agrees to sleep in the same room. Anyway, I personally looked at it with a confused face (after all, I don't have any brains). That's all I have in mind at the moment, I'm done talking.

This article is well written, showing extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is a classic. It is a model that our generation should learn from. From the perspective of novel art, this statement may not be too successful, but its actual significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: "A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" I am truly worthy of being the founder of the new generation of Wuli World! After reading what you said sentence by sentence, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time, it was so shocking! Why is there such a good talk! I have been reading all the good articles for many years, and I thought that nothing would ever touch me again. I didn't expect to see such a wonderful piece of writing today. It was you who made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". Thank you! After reading this comment, I did not reply immediately because I was afraid that my vulgar reply would taint the rare comment in this space. But I still replied, because I felt that if I couldn't leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful talk, then I would never die in peace! How proud it is to be able to leave my own footprints behind such wonderful talk! Please forgive my selfishness! I know that no matter how gorgeous words you use to describe the brilliance of what you said are not enough and are hypocritical, so I just want to say one thing: your words are great! The concept of this talk is novel, the subject matter is original, the paragraphs are clear, the plot is strange, the ups and downs, the main line is clear, and it is fascinating. It is my first time to comment. I am so nervous. How should I say it? How many words can I type to show my literary talent? This is good. Not good, will it become a hit? Will my writing be too good? Will others not be able to understand it if I write it so profoundly? How can I write at an elegant and unrestrained level? Is it too fast to write so much in half an hour? I am so excited! I'm here, and since I'm here I have to say a few words! Just say a few words! If I don't say a few words! I'm sorry, since I want to say a few words! Then I definitely have to talk~ So I decided that a few words might change everything! Maybe these few words I said can't change anything! But! Even a few words I say can't change anything! But I still have to say what I want to say! If I don't say a few words that I want to say! Well, I came here without saying a few words that I wanted to say~~ First of all, if I didn't say a few words that I wanted to say, I would be sorry for myself! In fact, I don't say these words! It's just a waste of what I said above! At the end I summarized it! ! ! I'm just saying a few random things. After reading your story, my heart can't calm down for a long time! This story has novel conception, unique subject matter, clear paragraphs, strange plot, ups and downs, clear main line, fascinating, and shows extraordinary literary skills in the plain. It can be said that every word is a pearl, every sentence is a classic, and it is a model that our generation should learn from. From the perspective of the art of novels, it may not be too successful, but its experiment The meaning is far greater than the success itself. A galloping horse, a shooting eagle and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart! You are worthy of being the new generation of monstrous monsters in the nonsensical world! It is you who rekindled the fire of hope in my heart. This is a rare thing! The sky has eyes, allowing me to watch such a wonderful story in my lifetime! It is like "the sound of great sound sweeps away the shadows", like "clearing the clouds and seeing the blue sky", so that people like us can see it. Hope, a bolt from the blue, and enlightenment are not enough to describe the conception of the master's article; the clouds in Wushan and the flowing water of the Yangtze River are even more incomparable to the master's literary talent! You illuminate the world with your candle, and you can see thousands of miles; the rain and dew are all over the world! Through your profound words, I seem to see your majestic and majestic posture; I seem to see your wisdom and wisdom, holding a pen as big as a rafter, writing articles all over the world. It's as if I saw your heroic spirit as you looked around with your sword and saw countless people! How well you said it! I have been on the Internet for so many years, and I have read countless people, so I am not surprised. But when I look at your momentum, I feel that you are fundamentally different from those little bastards who are trolling the Internet. The melancholy tone, the familiar signature, and the high-level rhetoric are enough to prove your greatness. It is you who allow the spirit of the Chinese nation to be carried forward. I admire that this article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but touches the readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, and it can be called a model of modern storytelling!

This book was originally called "Calling the Spirits", but now it has been changed. It became "Calling Generals" It immerses the readers in it from the beginning and makes them want to read on. This is very commendable. Although the author Ba Claw Octopus is still a novice in online writing, it already makes people feel like "a little lotus is just showing its sharp corners". The author's writing style is also very good, and the language is humorous and interesting. Although it has just begun, I can already tell that this is a good book. As for why this book is not popular, I can only say that it is a hidden good book. Overall, I highly recommend everyone to read this book. At the same time, we sincerely hope that the author will not disappoint the expectations of our readers. Come on! ✊✊✊

The author will conduct a comprehensive collection in the group. Friends are welcome to come to the group to share their creations with the author⊙∀⊙!

This book is not bad. I started reading it when it first came out. I just read it casually out of boredom, but this book is really good and worth reading.

Let's talk about this book. It has a great idea and it can be seen that the author is filling in the world and the timeline. The foreshadowing is crazy. Many of the noisy plots can be found in the previous chapters. Only when I read it did I realize that I have said this before! !

Well, let me run out and get some water first. First of all, my speed of writing extras is really low, so I suggest not to read the extras too seriously. Secondly, my extras are mainly about writing dialogues, because my writing skills are not even as good as those of an octopus. Furthermore, I have actually thought of a world view that I think is relatively complete for this extra episode, but let's not talk about that for now. Luo Yun is outrageously strong in the extra chapter, but he is only strong and does not suppress him at the life level (this sentence also represents Luo Yun's future ending). I would like to emphasize again that Luo Yun is very strong, but he only started at a high level. In the long years after he stopped being a human being (laughing), he only improved in his state of mind, experience and creation, but the panel did not improve much. (That is to say, his upper limit is very low) In addition, Luo Yun's story is just a side story and will not overshadow the main role. I have already thought about his exit. Finally, what I want to express in the extra chapter is: 1. The world is more of vague gray; 2. Most people work hard to survive and live better; 3. Pain, like learning, can make people grow. 4. No matter how difficult life is and how desperate the world is, most of us still choose hope.

From the content point of view, the early writing was indeed a bit too exciting. But the writing became more serious later on. The jokes are okay, and many of the writings are quite humorous. Bring a car, not the kind that drives to kindergarten. It can be seen that the author has indeed advanced from a novice to a junior author. Every hundred chapters there is obvious progress. The content in the book is also more reasonable. There were indeed many bad points in the early stage, but they were all corrected in the later stage. It's a good thing to be successful, and I hope the author can continue to work hard and write better, so that more people can read this book. Many new readers, I highly recommend you to read on. As long as you persist through the previous poisonous points, the following content is indeed quite exciting.

The relationship line is still a bit messy, the kind of plot where a couple is at odds and a third party intervenes... I don't really understand love, but this kind of plot is still confusing.

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Actually, I can read the books of other big guys in the same genre and learn from them.

By the way, let me mention that the big guys in the group give out red envelopes every day.

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