The Lost Puppet Master

， ， 1000， Writing itself is a very complicated and boring thing, and it requires people to really concentrate on it before it can be completed. If a novice writer does not have enough support, he may quit the literary world! I really think this author's writing is great!

I'll invest 😁, author, come on

The investment has been pursued! Read 20 chapters. The fighting writing is good, better than many authors on the list! The writing is good, I can update it! The plot is remarkable and the quality is guaranteed! However, overall, the description of the background and environment is not sufficient. Readers can bring in the behavior, language, and demeanor of the characters, but they cannot clearly feel the surrounding environment. Therefore, more descriptions of these two parts should be added, including: weather conditions, environmental atmosphere, placement of items, surrounding environment, and the impact of combat on the environment. For example: at the beginning of the book, there is no description of the internal structure of the laboratory, placement of objects, indoor air quality, etc. Even later, when the Messiah upgrades at the end of the competition, there is no description. So there is always a lack of sense of substitution. Much better than another new book I submitted. Remember to find more experts to recommend your works. {"NickName":"Love to drink Vitasoy","UserId":344029684}

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I would like to ask, I want to open a book club. Are any of you interested?

Come on, author, all future recommendation votes will be sent to you

Sorry everyone, I updated it late 😭😭😭 Chapter 29 is yesterday's 11th, I'm sorry😭😭😭

The book is good, I'll read it again after I gain some weight.

The setting is very interesting, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

In Chapters 28-29, they were directly persuaded to retreat. Character is an issue. How dare a commoner dare to attack a noble at will? There are compatriots around, regardless of what kind of past this civilian has, but what about his brain? Even if he brazenly attacks the nobles, the protagonist is not angry at all? That's nobility.

Suddenly I discovered that there are only seven of the eight principles of introduction. ,.

Unexpectedly discovered novel knowledge

Read a few chapters. It feels like the dolls here are too ordinary. No weird abilities, no special value.