Winning Life in the New World

The biggest failure is the protagonist and the senior management. The protagonist is simply the best representative of lawlessness and retardation. A place with high security is just like your own home. You can come and go at will, and take things out when you want. It is a place controlled by the military and has the highest level of confidentiality. Just like my own home, as the key point connecting the two worlds, the most important existence, casually strolling on the street, followed by a wounded person, okay, I barely gave myself a reason, there is no leakage, there is no danger, the top management are all sbs, their ancestors never taught them to take precautions before they happen. What else has the protagonist done? When bragging, you can show off confidential things, and your words and deeds are unsupervised? ? A few people dared to interfere with the national energy strategy with a slap on the head. The protagonist is also a god, and agreed on behalf of the country with a slap on the butt. . . .

The writing style and setting are all OK, but the setting of the protagonist has to comply with basic logic... As a core character who can open doors, he actually acts as a single soldier... This is a country where the elites have their heads kicked by donkeys...

The setting of the protagonist is too confusing. An ordinary person always tries to commit suicide for no apparent reason. To put it nicely, he is naive, but to be honest, he is mentally retarded. There is also a plot that is passionate for blood. A team goes to complete the task of catching dangerous ants. You, the two protagonists and the biologist who fight against the five scum follow to increase the difficulty of the task. What the hell, the army mission was filmed as a hot-blooded army. There is also a top-secret mission that soon became known to the whole world. What the hell, I signed a confidentiality agreement and agreed to the strictest Z review. Since this book wants to write a group plot, the protagonist's stupid behavior will be less, and it will mainly describe the overall situation, just like when we play a strategy battle game, who is interested in caring about the blood and grudges of the soldiers. We only care about goals and achievements.

I feel like this pig's feet is the biggest flaw of this book.

To be honest, after reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist is just a kindergarten kid. His way of thinking is really too poisonous and he slipped away

From the perspective of human behavior, Pig's Knuckle is not a salted fish, but a brainless person.

After reading Chapter 52, I couldn't stand it any longer. Except for the main character, it's a first-rate plot. It's this main character. He's stupid and brain-dead. He can't even be called mentally retarded. He's completely brainless and extremely poisonous. In the end, it was withdrawn. 88

The protagonist is not a salted fish, he is mentally retarded.

How can I put it this way? I have read more than seventy chapters and I died of poison. I am a noob on the plot and the dialogue. Let alone the description. The author's writing style still has a lot of room for improvement. Farewell!

Except for the protagonist, everything else is quite interesting. This protagonist is too poisonous and I can't stand it. I'll say goodbye.

The setting is okay, but the protagonist was forcibly reduced to intelligence, and his attitude towards the United States is a bit too high. I really can't stand it anymore, please go ahead, author.

. . . . I'm afraid not all the book review section is newbies, the dialogue is really awkward. . . . . Slipping away

This is a spy novel, right? I want to read Develop a New World, and half of you are talking about various assassinations, kidnappings, and rescues.

I want to ask how I can become a sailor. I also want to be a sailor.

In the previous kidnapping, both the senior management and the protagonist were 250

There are so many people trying to make money, why don't you send them out in groups to make money together?

The writing idea is more interesting, but the protagonist's character seems to be ignorant, frivolous and casual, and some of his behaviors are even unpleasant. And for obvious reasons, in actual work life, colleagues would be angry and afraid to speak out. If this is not intentional, it is recommended to make adjustments and not confuse the atmosphere of private organizations with certain research and "action" institutions. As for the protagonist, if he didn't have a good father, he would be scolded to death by his colleagues and managers at all levels every day. If he could be fired, he would be fired as soon as possible, and if he couldn't be fired, he would rush to the corner to stay there... The actions of the protagonist are actually the kind of stupid, ignorant, embarrassing, and unnecessary "tool man" in some movies who will die soon but will advance the plot... But here is the protagonist who cannot and will not die! This contradiction is really uncomfortable!

Let's just talk about one thing. The protagonist has always been obsessed with it, and then he said that he can get the astral body by himself. He has said before that the trial records must be strictly recorded, accurate to the gram, but the protagonist also said that he can get it. Isn't this because there is no silver in this place? After such a strict ZS, there are traitors, let alone classmates.

I've tricked everyone in the dormitory, haha, please give me a little red flower!

Well written, keep it up!

Update as soon as possible. The author writes too slowly. What about the rest of the story?