The Light Seeker in the Story

I quite like the story. The science fiction I also write is also suspenseful, and the writing is not bad. However, I think this kind of writing needs to be updated faster, and the doubtful points should be properly dissected and told. All the pitfalls cannot be buried in the front, and some dates should be given to readers as soon as possible o(∩_∩)o

You have a story and I have wine, come on, get high!

I've been working on those eighteen chapters for more than ten days, but I still can't unblock them. If you want to read them, please forgive me. I'll see if they can be read elsewhere.

I sometimes modify some details and smoothness of previous chapters. If you are interested, you can reread it and maybe you will have a new experience 😁

After reading the previous point, it feels quite immersive.

How should I put it? I think if this is your first time writing a book, you will definitely get better in the future based on your level. Just pay attention to the plot. At first I thought you were borrowing from Identity Six, Come on＾0＾~

Please read back the novel I wrote, thank you! ! Squirt hard and show no mercy!

The story is good, the layout looks so comfortable, but the plot makes me a little scared 😭

The writing is good and has been collected. You can read "Jiang Xiaotian" 🤝🤝