World-Defying Dragon Tribulation

The opening setting is very good, there is no traditional pretentious slap in the face, no loser is humiliated, everything in the beginning is written around the protagonist. At the same time, it also explains the background of the world and the current situation of the protagonist. The writing is very good and it is a good book. The only bad thing may be the title. The title makes people think that this is a traditional book about coins. However, the title cannot be changed and the introduction can be changed to make it more attractive. Return review of "Starting a Football Club", come on.

Thanks to {"NickName":"Light of Yinxiang","UserId":230143363} for your strong support🤭 You can say whatever name you want Ryuuko will appear soon, and the story will officially begin.

I've written so much, keep up the good work

It's very interesting. Kudos to the author (ﾉ｀⊿´)ﾉ

The spiritual awakening in the year of the foreign master - the realm of the beginning of the spirit - the realm of returning to the yuan - the realm of metamorphosis - the realm of distraction - the realm of merging gods - the realm of the source of the gods - will not be revealed for the time being (leaving some suspense) If anyone wants to write their names into the book, just leave a message below. I will follow my orders.

Thanks to {"NickName":"Fighting Golden Bear","UserId":338495521} for providing valuable opinions. The first chapter has been added to the wedge. Thank you again. 🌹🌹🌹

Thanks to {"NickName":"Yinxiangzhiguang","UserId":230143363} for sending the recommendation ticket Some things happened during the day today Two updates in the evening

Waiting for the signing of the contract, the author is cheering.

I saw it, it was very good, really. I would like to suggest that when you write a book, don't have an introduction or a wedge, just go straight to the first chapter. I don't know why, it's mentioned in the official account. I have two remaining suggestions. One is the character image. If the protagonist is not a funny type, then there must be supporting characters to make jokes, otherwise the whole book will be too serious. Humorous content is more popular. The second is to update the word count. If you have 8,000 words per day, then four updates at 2,000 per chapter is better than two updates at 4,000 per chapter. Readers will not be tired.

I've read four chapters, now let's talk about my feelings. Looking at the first two pages, the writing style is really good and delicate, much better than mine. But looking back, it was too slow. Seeing this, I suddenly laughed. There is no need to ask others the author's question. I know it clearly in my heart, but I am reluctant to change it. Your story is very good. Judging from the setting, it took a long time to prepare, right? Mine too. But it's useless, readers don't recognize this. Few people read online articles to improve their literary literacy. Most of them read online articles to have a laugh or to have unlimited YY. Let's talk about something useful. If you write novels as a hobby, then keep writing. I think what you write is really good. That world is slow but very real. Keep writing it down, it will be a great way to commemorate it in the future. But if you want to become popular, I think you have to change it. I have been writing for five months, and I understand a truth. For online articles, rhythm is more important than writing style. To put it bluntly, you have to create conflict points. Only with conflict can there be ups and downs, climaxes, and tides Although I can't write to your level, if I were to write it, the first chapter would tell how talented and powerful the protagonist is. He was dueling with someone, and he was sure to win, but he fainted in the end Then in the second chapter, the family invited a doctor, and various swindlers came to trick him, and he was beaten by his uncle. At the end, Cang Meng came and slapped his uncle in the face Then in the third chapter, tell the story, use your writing to describe the Jiulong heir, and at the end tell the protagonist that if he doesn't want to be killed. . . What I said is a routine, the purpose is to speed up the pace, increase the interest, and make people want to read on. But your writing is more literary. That's it, I tried my best in the middle of the night

Dear readers, welcome to book reviews. If the author has the perseverance to finish writing, feel free to invest. The core concept of this book mainly revolves around the development of the Nine Dragon Sons and the broader world. Fan Yuan has been reading fantasy novels for more than ten years. He will try his best to abandon the commonplace routines and strive to write a slightly different story. The writing style is a bit immature, I hope readers will understand it The final book will cost between two and three million according to the outline.

Thanks to {"NickName":"Ginxiangzhiguang","UserId":230143363}@20170701110715882 for the recommendation vote ありがとうございます

What's going on? Don't write anymore? Keep it up!

Well done, keep up the good work! (ง •̀_•́)ง

I'm taking a day off from updating today. My thoughts are a bit stuck. I need to think more.

Where have you been? ('-' )ノ)`-' )

Brother, I saw your first three pictures and Chapter 4 Birds, and I feel like what you said is wrong... I didn't see the coolness or conflict either, you're fooling me.