Blood Eyed Hunter

I have roughly read six chapters and would like to share my somewhat immature views 1. First of all, the writing is very good and the writing is very fluent. It can be seen that there is a certain foundation of skills. The description of some scenes is very good and the characteristics are also very prominent 2. The setting seems to be steampunk? I don't quite understand the concept of punk, but I know a little bit about Steam Age. It's a semi-imaginary world. I saw the content of the Classic of Mountains and Seas in the front, and it felt very professional (laughs, and then it's also very unique, and there should be a lot of room for expansion later 3. A little personal suggestion, there is a little too much inner drama in the front, I understand that you want to highlight the protagonist The entanglement or the fearful mentality, but it may be a little repetitive with the subsequent plot, which is slightly more abundant 4. Finally, this is just a personal opinion. If there is anything that is not very good or offensive, please forgive me I wish you better and better grades.

The title of the book is uninteresting, but the content is inexplicably good.

After reading it, the writing is good and it is very comfortable to read. Come on~

The author's writing style is quite good, but the paragraphs are too long, making it a bit uncomfortable to read.

Oops, this book is so good, don't miss it if you pass by it~😏

The writing style is very attractive in my opinion, I accepted it, but sometimes the paragraphs are too long and make me lose my patience, Haha~

A cute little girl has entered the book review section! 😏

If you maintain this level and keep updating, signing a contract will be a matter of time. Personal opinion, haha, come on!

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Here is the author. This is a post to collect opinions. The theme of this book is steampunk + dream theme The monster design is mostly based on "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" The author is currently a freshman, and his writing power and coding time are limited (Online classes have started, and homework has piled up) There are not many manuscripts saved. Although there is a setting collection, I always have to check the information halfway through writing. To be honest, "The Classic of Mountains and Seas" is not an in-depth study. It is more used as a reference. Most of the "Birana" (monsters) in the book are products processed by me. Please do not use code names. There are bound to be errors related to knowledge in the book. If you find them, please correct them. The problem of long paragraphs mentioned so far has been modified and will be avoided as much as possible in the future. As for the slow heating problem, there is currently no way to correct it. If the first few chapters need to be significantly revised, basically all the following chapters will also need to be revised. Personally, I think it's better to rely on slow warming to maintain the update rate. If you have any questions, you can leave a message below the post. I will read it and modify the work based on your opinions. Best wishes for the above.

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I feel like the opening chapter is a bit long, and it explains a lot like me. It's very interesting to watch patiently, so come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

My suggestion is to revise the content of today's chapter first, ask for leave and keep the interruption time within seven days. You can handle the rest in secret and use your strengths to avoid weaknesses.

The book is very good. The level of this book by the author is no less than that of The Mysterious Lord of Squid. Also, I would like to thank you for your guidance. Thank you.