Legend of the Stars

I've read ten chapters and will read the remaining ten to twenty tomorrow. The first is the advantage, 😃😃 First, the language is concise, the topic is straightforward, and the story is told. Second, the introduction is really well written. There's not much to say about this. I've read a lot of detective novels, and this introduction is really well written. Third, there is no unnecessary words in the first chapter, just go straight into the story. And the first chapter is indeed well written. Fourth, the ideas are really good, especially the one about the monsters speaking Japanese. I haven't seen the back yet, but it's really good Some suggestions: 1. Slightly improve the scenario concept. Although I don't know your subsequent plans, I only remember that General Long went to fight the monsters, then Zhu had an accident, then Du went to rescue the siege, and then Kui was his subordinate. 2. Long Aotian is too dramatic (the name is also very dramatic). Although the article talks about how majestic he is, I don't think it is very profound. Maybe it's because I only read Chapter 10. It's all about how he got along with Du Min and the others, and how he arranged his younger brother with Li Feng, and then he had to explain for a long time. 3. Segmentation, I won't talk about other segments, I can't distinguish them well myself. But if many people are speaking, just break it into paragraphs after one person has finished speaking. In the camp, many people are talking, but they are not divided into paragraphs, so you can see quotation marks everywhere. That's about it. Maybe some of it is foreshadowing by you. I didn't realize it. I'll read chapters 10-20 tomorrow before continuing.

Perhaps Feng Youwei's prejudice this time will become an opportunity for the protagonist to rise?

Persistence is victory😡😡

I thought it was a common star, but it was actually the Earth a few years later?

After reading Chapters 10 to 20, before making any comments, ask, when will Ultraman come out? Eiji Tsuburaya has come out, so it's time for Ultraman to come out. The advantages are: the narrative is better and clearer than before. The disadvantages are: after filling the water at the beginning, after going to Long's house, he left without saying a few words. Maybe it's to lure Long Jing out, I guess. Continue reading chapters 20 to 30 tomorrow

Nuan In order to upgrade, I will risk everything! Prepare... (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ --put the author (╯>д<)╯⁽˙³˙ ⁾Throw it out (˘•ω•˘)ง⁽˙³˙⁾ Pick it up (╯>д<)╯⁽˙³˙⁾Throw it out (˘•ω• ˘)ง⁽˙³˙⁾Pick it up (╯>д<)╯⁽˙³˙⁾Throw it out (˘•ω•˘)ง⁽˙³˙⁾Pick it up (╯>д<)╯⁽˙³˙⁾Throw it out (˘•ω•˘)งPick it up... ∑(っ°Д°;)っOh shit it's gone! Everyone, look for it! Where is the author ╮(╯▽╰)╭Forget it! Don't pick it up anymore! It's not worth much money anyway! Next, you can go to the author's house>w< （╯* - *)╯( ┻━┻ (Turn over the author's table) ┬—┬ ノ( * - *ノ) (Place it properly) (╯°O°)╯( ┻━┻ (Turn it over again) ┬—┬ ( ●ω●) ｜つ／(＿＿＿ ／└-(＿＿＿_／ ￣￣￣￣￣￣ I was beaten again, I'd better sleep!! ＜⌒／ヽ-_＿ ／＜_/＿＿_／ ￣￣￣￣￣￣ Climb back strong 0w0! We are still waiting to continue throwing around! Come to the author today! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ --Don't be careless, look for it carefully⊙_⊙ ( ´▽` )ﾉOkay! (˘•ω•˘)ง⁽˙³˙⁾Is this it? ╮(╯_╰)╭No (╯>д<)╯ ⁽˙³˙⁾Lost (˘•ω•˘)ง⁽˙³˙⁾Is this it? ╮(╯_╰)╭No either (╯>д< )╯⁽˙³˙⁾Throw it away (˘•ω•˘)ง⁽˙³˙⁾Is this it? ⊙_⊙No... (╯>д<) ╯⁽˙³˙⁾Throw it out (˘•ω•˘)ง⁽˙³˙⁾Is this it? (≥∇≤)This is it! (╯>д<)╯⁽˙³˙ What did I just throw away⊙_⊙ Nothing╮(╯_╰)╭I have already thrown it out ∑(っ°Д°;)っHoly shit, that must be the author!!!!!!

Did you see the recommendation vote I made today? (Doga. Jpg)

Big hug, give yourself more time to write better works, it's good! It can be seen that Da Da is really trying to write well 😳😳 The weather is changing rapidly recently. Remember to pay more attention to your health.

I have no recommendation votes today 🥺 I can only leave comments and brag more rainbow farts The world view is grand and complex√ The supporting roles also have many roles, flesh and blood and realism√ The protagonist does have many shortcomings, he is a stupid young man and a pig teammate😂But, he has an innocent heart√Great potential in the later stage√Looking forward to his growth Looking forward to solving the mystery of the common star

I feel that Danus should be the most charismatic person in chapters 50 to 80. God, this chapter really scared me today! I thought he would really take action against Li Qing

If you persist, you will definitely sign the contract.

Don't update intermittently 😡, the author should not update intermittently.

Brother, why haven't you signed a contract yet... It's already 200,000.

Daily Question: Is there a big update today?