Bensen

I wrote down some thoughts. I feel that this book is divided into two parts. I define these two parts as Ah Fei before his rebirth and after his rebirth. Before his rebirth, Ah Fei gave me a good feeling. Although there was not much dialogue most of the time, it gave me just the right feeling. It was full of turmoil and warmth, but after rebirth, it felt a bit sudden to me. The changes in the protagonist's personality were different for me. It was a bit unexpected. The first impression was that the protagonist became more vicious and the dialogues became more numerous. Some dialogue actions gave me a feeling that they were not suitable for the situation. I felt that Ah Fei was getting further and further away. The pace of the plot was also a bit fast. There was no rendering atmosphere of the scene and it was a bit boring. I hope the author can portray the details more vividly. Come on, author!

There's nothing to criticize, it's a scam, if you stick to it you'll definitely get popular!

To be honest, the name Nannan is really embarrassing to me. Nowadays, whenever there is a little loli, I will definitely call it this name, at least choose it carefully! ! 😥

Vote for recommendation. Didn't so many people vote? I have already voted more than 30, and now the total is more than 360. Please contribute your votes, otherwise no one will see it, it will be really easy! ! 😥

Happy Dragon Boat Festival to the author. The book is very interesting. Come on, you will definitely be popular💪

Well, the author should add an update as soon as possible. The post I posted this morning recommended Jingran and deleted it because there was no link 😥😥, so I will add an update and put it on the shelves as soon as possible! Support you🤓🤓

So well written! ! ! ! ! ! Explain! ! ! You are the boss and drive the vest! ! ! The character of the mission is immediately established at the beginning, and each person's character is fully described with words and actions! Very true! Very humane! The setting of the world is that of a fairy tale, and the background of the world is well written and fascinating. To be honest, I almost couldn't help reading it just now. If I hadn't remembered that I had to write a book review, I wouldn't have stopped reading chapter by chapter. The setting and description of the world are very touching! To be honest, what else are you going to criticize about this book? Just work hard on it and keep the quality. When the editor gives you a recommendation, it will definitely be up faster than your advertising now. Collected, come on! But as I continue to follow you, I find that the next few chapters are not as exciting as the first five. You have to maintain your standards! But the strange thing is, why didn't I sign a contract?

The plot at the beginning is very attractive and will definitely attract many readers. You won't have time to read it later, so hurry up! The dialogue description in the article can be less. Too much will make people feel verbose, but the key dialogue description cannot be less. The plot must not deviate from the main line. Come on, I wish you a hit!

Come on, come on (✪▽✪) The writing is very good, the introduction is very interesting, and the ideas are also very good, so come on

After reading the title and introduction, I thought the content would be interesting. But the author's foreshadowing to get to the point seems a bit long? This wears down the reader's patience. And the author is classified in Classical Xianxia? But throughout the whole article, it can only be seen that the location is [rural], and the language is more urban style. Classical immortals don't necessarily have to be immortals, but they must at least have some ancient charm. But it is a pity that this is not achieved in the author's book.

I admire you for being so busy and still being able to work hard. I will subscribe again when I have some free time. The recommendation ticket is ready!

Read and collected! Remember to recycle! "The Phantom of the Tang Dynasty"

I will become a long-time fan after the author becomes popular haha ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

The more I read, the more I feared that I would be too timid to slip away.

Numb, fresh. Nice

This writing style made me dumbfounded, and in the end I could only say "Fuck!"

Keep it up, I'm following you. There is also a book called "Chemical Industry Research Institute" that few people have read, but it is well written and I have signed a contract. Those like me who got in early have earned points. I hope you will not let down my love.

The writing is so good, why isn't it popular!!

Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡