The Road to All Realms Starting from Douluo Continent

Just tell me some of your own opinions. Are you a new writer? The three golden chapters at the beginning: You were writing too hastily. You should slow down the pace a bit. The writing is still good, not too bad! Summary: It's just a bit too self-indulgent.

Thanks to Luo Tianyi ovo for voting for recommendation

What level of artifact are the infinite gems in Marvel considered in Douluo Continent? Are they quasi-super artifacts or super artifacts? I think they should be quasi-super artifacts. After all, they don't have the same infinite energy as in the original universe.

Okay, I take back what I just said. You really went too far with yourself. There's no outline, so I just write whatever comes to mind. It's too confusing.

The author gives you a suggestion. Your book should not be put on the shelves. If you like to write, just use it as a practice. You can write whatever you want to write in this book, and write whatever comes to mind. Just treat it as practice. It's really too much of a self-pleasure. Is it really okay to perform so outstandingly until this period when I came back to the Spirit Cage and re-enrolled? And with Douluo San's background, he's not very good either. The Tang family is still watching in the sky.

Create a complaint thread. All the details about settings and writing are in this picture. I will reply if you comment.