Martial Arts Simulation Space

It is similar to the rebirth version of aura recovery type. The protagonist travels to a parallel world and resists the Zerg invasion with his friends in the current world. For the first time I write, it is very good and makes people feel interesting. But let's talk about the shortcomings. The author's detailed description is not perfect. In many places, just a little more detail would be nice. For example, the meal period in the dormitory. I don't understand, why don't you write it longer? Isn't this a great way to express your roommate's personality? Isn't this foreshadowing the competition between you and him later? Can't you understand his habits? Of course, as I said before, the first time I write, I won't be so picky. Right now, from what I'm watching, there's no female protagonist yet. I think if the author can grasp the issue of scale between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. It is still a very good novel. A certain pen is left.

For brothers, if you have read this novel and think it is good, please leave a comment and let me know how I wrote it 🙂🙂🙂

Not bad, there are endless compliments! ! ! It was fine the first time.

Yes, the tone is relaxed and the writing is smooth! Come on!

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After reading a little bit, I feel that if the martial arts is not strengthened, Hong Qi who appeared earlier, if he has the combat power in the TV novel, and modern thermal weapons, the search will be far away.

Yes, you can, one of the 333 old songs: almost

Brother, I've seen it. I don't want to go into details, come on.

I finally got the chapter recommendation vote 😭😭 but I won't let you vote if I haven't reached 500 experience points 😭😭

Write well and read more after you finish! It will be better in the future! Rigorous