Online Game: Lord of All the People

I've read more than seventy chapters and can't stand it anymore. There is no plot tension at all, and the narrative skills are not good either. It is plain, weak, and boring. The dialogue is pale, the structure is confusing, the characters are not well developed, and there are many places where the details are not described

The protagonist can send lobbyists to promise a few thrones to princes like Tang Yangjuro who have no chance of unifying the world. They don't have to be emperors. This battle is inexplicable. Some people say that they are modern people and counterintuitive tactics are not easy to use, but there is no huge hatred between the protagonist and them. Do they have ambitions to be emperors? Wouldn't it be better to consolidate the strength as soon as possible and then start a large-scale national war? It must be the kind of complete unification of the Han Empire. The beautiful country next door has unified its capital and started fighting against other empires. So many modern people's vision is limited to China. Isn't it good to attack Southeast Asia, Japan, and South Asia? Could it be that the author is not familiar with foreign military generals and is preparing to provide figures for the civil war in the Han Empire. Rome could rule by three emperors, but the Han Empire could not. Liu Biao knew about the surrender, but Yang Shilang didn't know about Tang Dynasty. They were planning to use half of the state to dominate the world? Sun Jian said that Tang didn't know that as long as he surrendered and helped the protagonist to open up the situation, he could ask for a throne from the protagonist. He would live and die against the protagonist for a less than one percent chance and make wedding clothes for others. The male protagonist didn't know how to send people to use his high position to lobby them. The Thirteen Prefectures of the Han Dynasty, even the best nine prefectures can't win against the three prefectures? One Mobei Legion in South Korea can pacify it. Even if it cannot be pacified, it would be fine if one Mobei Legion suppresses it. Wang Jian and Xu Fengnian suppressed Liu Bei in Hanzhong, Yue Fei and Zhang Liao suppressed Bronze Bird, and then Wu Qi, Leyi, Cao Cao, the heroine, led the army and directly destroyed the Tang Dynasty. How about building hundreds of large Xiangyang cannons and throwing rocks wildly? Is a Xiangyang several times stronger than the ancient pass? How long did it take for Temujin to defeat Yumen Pass? This really means tying up the protagonist's hands, taking 200 less cavalry, and 200 craftsmen to fight an epic battle. Wouldn't it be better to build a Xiangyang cannon on the spot?

The Battle of the Sea Kings Sea King I Chutian PK Sea King II Chu Wu Sea King I Chutian Grand Harem Chief Harem: Xia Liang Second Harem: Ekaterina Direct Harem: Hua Mulan, French legendary heroine Joan of Arc, Chuo Xiao, Huo Qing The strongest helper in the harem: Emperor Roufu   Harem reserves:   The legendary King Arthur of England [King of Knights] Artoria (high achievements in hard work)   Queen of Yamatai Kingdom Himiko (the trump card of Emperor Wu in controlling Japan)       Queen Isabella I of Spain  Cleopatra VII Qin Liangyu (Hua Mulan's best friend, Huo Qing's help) Xue Yue (Director of the Intelligence Department, Emperor Wu's eyes and ears) Li Xiuning (Xia Liang, deputy general, became full officer) Ryazan Grand Duke Sophia (deputy general Yekaterina became full officer) Liang Hongyu, Fan Lihua, Mu Guiying (Mulan's strongest supporter) Wei Qing's sister Wei Zifu Sea King II Chuwu Grand Harem Chief Harem: Sun Shangxiang of Jiangdong Sun Family Second seats in the harem: Ma Yunlu of the Ma family of Xiliang, Lu Lingqi of the Wenhou Lu family, Chichiyo of the Tachibana family Direct harem connections: Zhang Xingcai, Guan Yinping The strongest supporter in the harem: Mi Zhu's daughter Non-existent harem: Yue Yinping, the daughter of Yue Fei Cao Cao's daughters Cao Xian, Cao Jie, Cao Hua The daughter of Mingguan tomorrow Li Baitian Huo Qubing's niece Huo Chengjun Huo Anmuke's daughter Huo×× Sea King III Chu× Wang Yuanji Zhuge Liang's daughter Zupide's Wife: Christina

Sigh... After watching it for so long, I have to say that the story of Chutian is really exciting. Now there are generals from the former Qin Dynasty guarding the border, and there are no one from the Tang Dynasty in their arms. There are celebrities from the Three Kingdoms helping to govern, and there are players outside to help conquer the world. The situation has changed, and the protagonist and players have replaced the original princes and each has their own destiny. Who could have expected the alliance and the alliance back then? Friendship turned into conquests and wars, the death of Lao Qin, the escape of Mingguan, the surrender of Prince Yan and the stubborn resistance of Tongque. Now it seems really sad~~~This different kind of Three Kingdoms has a different kind of charm. After seeing it now, I only feel a touch of melancholy. Du Fu's poem: The boundless falling trees are rustling, and the endless Yangtze River is rolling in. It seems very suitable for the scene. I love this book!

The writing is very good. Although it is a new author, it has few poisonous points and is highly readable. It combines lords, battle writing and games, plus the release of game battles and various rankings, and combines some characteristics of online games. Overall, it is very good. I hope the author can work hard and continue writing. If the writing improves greatly, the plot can have ups and downs, and some of it may become a fire with the potential to become a god. I feel that the author can amplify the role of free players. With so many people stuck in the game world, there must be highly intelligent people such as players like Xiang Xia Liang in the early stage, and there must also be characters who are good at strategy and fall into this world. There are some free players who choose civil servants, generals and counselors, and there are definitely some with high IQ or high martial arts. With the growth of player templates, they should have greater growth value than the civil servants and generals in the original game world. I do not deny the high awareness of ancient civil servants and military commanders, but if there is a collision between free players with high intelligence and ancient counselors with high intelligence, the competition between modern wisdom and ancient wisdom, the competition between modern fighting and ancient fighting techniques, the mutual correspondence will make this book more readable. From the current point of view, if you are writing a simple lord article, it is completely fine to write like this. But there are other free players included, and as mentioned at the beginning, the number of free players is greater than the number of people who choose the lord profession, so we cannot blindly reduce the appearance of other free players. This is a waste of such a good background structure and content settings. I can write well while sitting and add more interesting content. Come on, I will wait for you to become a god.

It is true that it looked good in the early stage, but it fell apart a bit in the middle stage. Why do we have to deliberately weaken the previous settings or directly add a little plot to reduce intelligence for the sake of balance? This is an online game hegemony type article, not all online games are equal. Don't deliberately weaken the protagonist, and don't deliberately strengthen other lords. It's best to let the plot develop naturally. Although I know that the protagonist will definitely win in the end, the victory process should be smoother at least, and stop artificially adding some trouble to the protagonist. Having said all this, I just want to make this work a little better. I will still keep chasing, come on, Emperor.

The logic of the plot is unreasonable and the plot is forced to pass through in one go, which is a bit stiff. It lacks enough sparkle and is still the same old thing.

The character descriptions in this novel are so rubbish, it gives me a headache.

Extra update, where is it? ? ?

I thought it was the fifth update, but when I looked carefully, it was the third update.

The recent plot has been so draggy that I have nothing to say. Updates are made every day. A MG has been playing for such a long time without any ups and downs. In this way, you can just wait and see the results later. Skip everything in the middle and continue directly to the next part of the story. There is no need to watch this part of the story.

The book is a fine book that can be read. I hope the author will write more and more. The author's writing style is very good, and he is relatively high-end in this category, but he can also learn from Shu Jia Dada's book. I personally think Shu Jia Dada's book can be used as a reference. For example, he can write about the authenticity that players underestimate. Also, this book has not been put on the shelves, but it has released five or six historical generals. The progress may be a bit fast.

Well, I have a question, which is why Mongolia needs to be strengthened. I understand it is to create a world background of the rise of barbarians, but there are Saxons and Goths in the west, why does it have to be the four major khanates. And how did the four great khanates appear? Did they exist themselves, or did they appear later during the war. If Mongolia can be strengthened because of Mongolia's Western Expedition, then can the rise of Rome strengthen Rome, and can the rise of the Latins strengthen the Latins. And if the boss of the national war could be a force from the main world, wouldn't it be very unbalanced? Of course, if you say that Mongolia can do it in history, I have nothing to say.

[]       ， In fact, the Han Empire's Fubo Corps versus the Tongque Navy Corps was not a real naval battle in principle. After all, Dahan also explained the difference between admiral and admiral of the navy in his writing. The Great Han Dynasty therefore frequently added fourteen generals to Tongque during the North-South battle and simultaneously opened up five battlefields: Guangling, Xihai County, Junan, Junbei, and Chenjiadao. On the one hand, it was to increase the fullness of the novel's story and the tension of the plot. At present, the battle of Chenjiadao has ended. It seems to be a draw, but the Tongque Jiangdong Navy soldiers are not enough for the time being. Tongque and Ben did not expect that in order to deal with Tian, ​​Chutian asked Zheng He to expand his army to 300,000, and after the first battle of Qingxu, he expanded his army to 400,000. The Youzhou Army has already moved south, and the Zhangdao Army has already launched an attack. The battle is about to end in Nanyang, north of Jing, and Xiangfan. The generals of Tang Dynasty and Yang Shilang are about to be captured. As the first wave of tasks in the great conquest plan, the remaining tasks are to destroy Hanzhong and Chengdu. Previously, Chutian had mobilized the Xiliang Army to leave Yangping Pass, conquer Jiange, descend to Zitong, and encircle Chengdu. The Battle of Chengdu and the Battle of Hanzhong have also come to an end. The defensive battle of Langya Kingdom will appear a little tight for the time being. Among them, Jubei Shandao, Li Mu, and Xiao Chuo defeated Wei Rui. Women, the Jeanne d'Arc Army also has the intelligence of Fang Du, and coupled with the special characteristics of the servant army's leader Jeanne d'Arc, it also has a chance of winning. On the Guangling battlefield, Yue Fei's intrusion blocked Xiang Yan, and the dragon was not a problem. The biggest trouble at the moment is that the Beifu Army is besieging Xihai County. The tense situation has not been resolved, and I don't know if Brother Zhuge has any clever plans. But no matter how you look at it, the three major battlefields of Bashu, Jingbei and Qingxu are about to come to an end, and the eight lords of Lu Bu, Fu Jian, Yang Su, Liu Bei, Suotang, Yang Shilang, Sun Jian, and Song Jiang will either surrender to Chutian, or die, or rely on Tongque to establish a new group of two and five. With the capture of some generals of Jingzhou Navy and Tongque Jiangdong Navy and the surrender of Sun Jian's army, the second wave of Chutian's great conquest will also begin. I personally think that the battle across the Yangtze River in Huainan, the sweep of Yizhou and Jingzhou, and the battle of Japan's Kyushu Island will also start. In the Battle of Kyushu Island, Toyotomi Hideyoshi teamed up with the Tachibana family, Shimakawa family, and several generals from the Noryang Sea Battle and the Uryang Sea Battle, and a Japanese naval battle regiment was formed to compete for Kyushu Island. On the Chutian side, Fubo Army absorbed Sun Jian's Army, the main force of Tongque Jiangdong Navy, and the main force of Jingzhou Navy enriched Fubo Army. Bei Mihu, Han Shizong, Zong Ze, Sun Jian, Sun Ce, Zhou Tai, Jiang Qin, Zhou Yu, Lu Meng, Xie Xuan, Liu Laozhi joined. A golden age of Han Changguo naval generals coordinating naval generals is about to appear in the battle of Kyushu Island in Japan. It would be best if Wang Defa could borrow Navy Admiral Zheng Chenggong, and the national war reward Qi Jiguang would be even more perfect. With the completion of the first wave of the Great Conquest, the Han Dynasty accelerated its conquest plan on the southern front, and the real era of national war in the main world will come. The Battle of Yizhou ended, the Guanzhong Army and the Nanzhong Army swept Yizhou, and the Liangzhou Army was transferred to Central Asia. The Battle of Nanyang ended, the Central Plains Army and Zhang Dao Army swept Jingzhou, and the Youzhou Army was transferred to Central Asia. Qingxu, the Battle of Huainan ended. Fubo Army, Sun Jian Army, Qidi Army, Huainan Army, and Hebei Army participated in the cross-river battle, and Mobei Army was transferred to Central Asia. The Youzhou Army, the Western Region Army, the Monan Army, the Mobei Army, and the Liangzhou Army assembled. Wei Qing, Huo Qubing, Li Mu, Ma Yuan, and Ma Chao were in place. After the cross-river battle was over, the naval corps was reorganized and the war started on Kyushu Island in Goryeo, Liaodong, and Dongrai at the same time. The Huainan Army, the Hebei Army, the Guanzhong Army, the Central Plains Army, the Nanzhong Army, and Zhang Daoyi's army swept Yangzhou and Jingzhou with all their might. The era of national war in the main world is coming Let's have a game where Sun Ce, the little overlord of Jiangdong, beats Muneshige Tachibana, the incomparable enemy of the West. Since it has been strengthened, let's beat him hard. Let's start with Tachibana Munege of the Tachibana family. Who asked him to participate in the Battle of Nouriyo, and directly rushed into the Tachibana family to snatch Tachibana Chiyo?

All people

A little suggestion The force value can be multiplied by the corresponding attributes. Each time you upgrade to a level, you gain attributes, and then the obtained attributes are multiplied by the force value (because people have different talents, and they train the same but have different strengths) and use this as an interpolation. After all, this online game does not have a fantasy background, so it would be too strange to say that there are some extraordinary powers. I think the core gameplay, which is the battle of heroes, is not about climbing the technology tree.

It's all through 😌

Ha! The author doesn't check the data, but if the overall view of data can make up for it, it would still be a good book.

What time is the update now...

It's so funny that the author even wrote a separate chapter to explain what balance is 😅 If you keep balancing like this, what else do you want the protagonist to do? The rewards for the first place in the protagonist's national war are no different from those for the second and third places. Damn it, the rewards for the ninth and tenth places are all comparable to the protagonist, except that the protagonists are all Europeans? The protagonist recruited Wei Qing three times, good guy, Huo An and Huo Qubing. The protagonist, Guo Zhan, worked hard and recruited Yuchi Gong, but in the end, Qin Qiong directly added Cheng Yaojin. What are these operations? Do you have to balance it out to make it longer? The Jingkang disaster directly increased the Jin army's combat power by 100%? ? ? Otherwise, let the Jin Army win directly, so don't waste your efforts. There is also India. During the Western Han Dynasty, the Han Dynasty had a population of 60 million+ and India had a population of 34 million+. Presumably, at the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty, the population should be about the same. Good guy, after the national war, 1.3 Million+ people came to India. I was immediately confused? Is India a bunch of pigs? One litter a year, six cubs per litter? Also, Mu Guiying's force is 97? Golden Sword Yang Ye, Yang Wudi is only 95? What operation? Xue Rengui is 97, Zhao Yun is 97, and Li Guang is 95. The three of them can barely fight Lu Bu. At the back, Xue Rengui is 99. After one hundred rounds, Zhang Fei gives in? ? ? Is Lu Bu not worthy of 99 combat power? Or did Zhang Fei have a bad stomach? ? Dian Wei grabbed Yang Yanzhao with 95 combat power like a chicken? ? ? Zhang Liao is also a first-rate military general. Although he is mainly the commander-in-chief, he will not be intimidated by Xu Chu's two moves. The most outrageous thing is that everyone is a cold weapon. You fucking the United States just use matchlocks? ? ? Do you want me to give you a Gatling? ? Does the United States have a der history? Where do their heroes come from? Recruiting a Washington? Is it better to directly recruit special forces for special forces? Obai has come out, so the age of heroes should include the Qing Dynasty. Brother, the flintlock was invented in 1610. Do you want to just send a Spanish square? Just outrageous.

This book should be regarded as a masterpiece in the same genre I have read a lot of this type of writing, but there are only a few that are good and a lot of them are poisonous. Either the villains are brainless or the emotional lines are poisonous. Those good-looking ones can only be said to be taller among the short ones (maybe I haven't read it yet, welcome to recommend) The author of this book doesn't seem to be a novice. The number of chapters is not very large yet, and there is nothing serious about it. If possible, can you write some daily life in the plot, not too many, just a few chapters in hundreds of chapters (if you are not good at it, don't write it, I don't want to be a sinner hahaha)

After reading a little bit, the author can't talk about the harem. I want to say that it would be weird if the protagonist of this kind of novel about hegemony forcibly gets a monogamous wife. Like the early Three Kingdoms Call of the Heroes, I think it is normal for the protagonist to have many historical beauties.

This book is very well written, please vote for it.

Damn it, here's a map for accurate comparison.

Good guy, this is one of the few remaining online games on the list, and I couldn't even last six chapters.

After reading more than 400 chapters, I really want to say something. I don't know if the author prefers Bai Qi or something. The number one among the four famous generals of the Warring States Period is always Wang Jian. The father and son have an unparalleled record of destroying the Six Kingdoms. In addition, Wang Jian, Bai Qi, Lian Po, and Li Mu are not the strongest generals in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. The top three are always Sun Wu, Wu Qi, and Le Yi. These three He is a true representative figure of the military strategist, and both Sun Wu and Wu Qi can be called sons. Bai Qi was not ranked high among the Ten Philosophers of the Martial Temple at first, and in the end he was not even among the Ten Philosophers. He was not as good as Li Mu. Good guy, the author elevated him to the Bai Han Li Yue written by some online historians. To put it bluntly, is Bai Qi worthy? In addition, those who have been ranked first in the past three thousand years (nationwide, including ethnic minority governments) should be Sun Wu, Wu Qi, Wang Jian and his son, Xiang Yu, Han Xin, Wei Qing, Huo Qubing, Ban Chao, Xie Xuan, Wei Rui, Li Jing, Wang Xuance, Guo Ziyi, Yelu Xiu Ge, Di Qing , Yue Fei, Wanyan Zongbi, Kublai Khan, Xu Da, Chang Yuchun, there are more in the second bracket, of course there is one person in the only bracket, Jiang Shang, this is a god, we can't comment on the first bracket I ranked. If you are not convinced, go to Baidu to look at the records of these people, and see who you are looking for is better than these people.

1. Didn't the protagonist attack first in the civil war? Why was there no preparation at all and no troops were mobilized before the war? A large number of troops are in the hinterland, there are insufficient troops in Youzhou, there are soldiers and generals in southern and northern deserts, and they are stretched everywhere. Is this an initiative to start a war? It's not that bad to be attacked by someone. 2. Why is the strategy not first east and then west? Now the protagonist is desperately heading west to fight against the Jiancheng Pass. The chrysanthemum behind him is exposed by Mingguan and he continues to fight westward. Why not let Wu Qi defend the Central Plains, just like Zhang Liao's cavalry to defend Hefei, and the protagonist concentrates the main cavalry to clear the rear of Liaodong first? Luoyang, Guanzhong, and Chang'an fought slowly, but the cavalry battle in the Northeast was faster. They took advantage of hundreds of thousands of prairie cavalry and didn't have to play with others to attack the enemy. Where's their brains? 3. To be honest, the protagonist attacks Liaodong first and no one can help Mingguan. Tongque cannot help (naval blockade) and Lao Qin cannot help (grassland blockade), but the protagonist insists on fighting on two fronts and exposes the chrysanthemum to Mingguan. You see, in the future, the protagonist will finally gain the upper hand. Tongque will definitely join the battlefield and let the protagonist fight on three fronts. 4. In the past, the author emphasized that having more soldiers leads to victory (for example, Arslan, who had many soldiers but few soldiers, was violently beaten by Yelu Dashi of the same level; for example, a group of famous generals in the Western Region Protectorate were suppressed by Subotai). Now the protagonist has more soldiers and is suppressed by good generals (Li Mu of Monan was suppressed by the Jurchens). 5. The protagonist is basically Han Chinese in the Central Plains, and the Mongolian Huns have been taken over by the grasslands. They are all local aboriginal people + strengthened by the coming of the national war; the population of Mingguan is Han people in the two counties of Liaodong and Western Liaoning. The aboriginal Wuhuan and Goryeo are not reused. The Jurchens all came in the later period. The only aboriginal + Xianbei who came is still very ambitious. So no matter how you look at the military strength, the protagonist should crush Mingguan. After all, how many soldiers and horses can the Northeast raise? How many soldiers and horses can the Central Plains + Grassland raise? But the strength advantage is completely invisible. 6. On the battlefield in Youzhou, the superiority of the city was easily broken through by the cavalry, and they had to fight in the field with infantry and cavalry, but were suppressed by the troops; on the grassland battlefield, there were many superior troops, all of which were cavalry, but they were suppressed by a small group of elites... You have no advantage and always use your own shortcomings against others' strengths? 7. Mingguan only has a few people and a few soldiers. Even if the protagonist does not go in person, Li Mu + Cao Cao + Wei Qing + Yue Fei, coupled with hundreds of thousands of prairie cavalry and their respective elite legions. Do you think it's because of poor military strength, poor elites, or poor generals? They had to be divided into separate parts, and several small battlefields were suppressed. The author is quite good, and the hodgepodge of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign novels is very interesting. However, the shortcomings are also obvious, including many bugs, poor strategy, and lack of formal deduction capabilities. Finally ps, I am fully booked and qualified to speak.

The most poisonous point of this book is that in every national war, if you win first place, the total quality and quantity of military commanders is greater than that of other princes combined, and there are more special talents, accounting for half of the geographical area and population, as well as allies, plus the benefits given by plug-ins. It is so much that it is difficult to defeat both princes. What is even more frightening is that the northern princes, Liaodong, and the protagonist of the rebel stick area are all beaten to death. I just want to ask what is the logic of this?

It puts too much pressure on the protagonist. While writing about how awesome and powerful the protagonist's subordinates are, the result is that every time he fights with the surrounding lords, he becomes so anxious that he can't tell how powerful he is at all. Every time you think about getting the opponent's military commander to surrender to you, you don't think about how much harm the opponent has caused you. Especially when Le Yi suffered such heavy losses and wanted to surrender, what would his subordinates think? So many people died, but then the other commander turned around and became one of his own, and still leads you. What would you think if it were you?

The following content is copied by me~~I have Prince Liu Chan. Empress Dowager Cixi, Empress Wu Zetian. Noble Concubine Lu Pheasant Su Daji. His virtuous brother Zhao Guangyi and his virtuous nephew Liu Zong. The adopted son Lu Bu, Yang Guang Sima Zhong. My beloved daughter, Princess Anle. Uncles Yang Jian and Li Yuan. An Lushan, the great marshal of the world's soldiers and horses. Piao Banner General Zhao Kuangyin, Chariot General Cao Cao. The national teacher Shen Gongbao Zhang Jiao. Taishi Cai Jing and Taiwei Gao Qiu. Taifu Sima Yi, Taibao Yang Guozhong. Shaobao Huangchao. Prime Minister Dong Zhuo on the left, Prime Minister Qin Hui on the right. Governor Yuan Chonghuan. He Shen, the Minister of Hubu. Wang Mang, the Minister of War, and Jiang Qian, the Minister of Rites. Zhao Gao, the general manager of Ouchi. The palm eunuch Wei Zhongxian. Zhang Rang, the eunuch with a pen. Liu Jin, the official of Dongchang Factory, Wu Sangui, Mi Fang, and Dr. Ren, the border guards. The vanguard generals Xia Houjie and Xia Houen. Logistics guard Chunyu Qiong. Gou An, the speedy grain transport officer, and Fan Jiang and Zhang Da, the imperial guards. Five Tiger Generals Pan Feng, Xing Daorong, Liu Sandao, Fang Yue, and Cai Yang. Zheng Hechou The world is uncertain