I'm Really Not a Big Hero

Ding, your comment is here! The author writes very well! The plot and character settings are very novel (of course, I think the name of the Zulong is not very novel... Zulong Jue and other things, I have become numb). The language is very relaxed, and although it is suspenseful, it does not seem that scary. Haha (although in the first chapter, it is written in large words that Su Hu's heart exploded, and I was still trembling as a timid person. ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅) A few suggestions. I feel like the character creation is not very complete yet. It seems that after watching it for a long time, I still don't have a clear idea of ​​what kind of person the protagonist is (except for his identity, of course). Okay, come on! Wish you a great success!               ≖‿≖✧

I have read the first four chapters. The writing is good and fluent, and the story setting is interesting, but the introduction is still a bit unappealing. In fact, it looks a bit like fantasy at the beginning... It can be eaten, raised, and harvested. I'm very optimistic about it, just stay steady and work hard, becoming a god is just around the corner.

Well, it's quite a creative plot and a good mix. Congratulations on signing the contract. I don't have many comments. It's overall good. I don't know what pitfalls there will be in the future. I'm looking forward to it.

The world background is well set up, the world view is large, and the plot is interesting. The setting of the protagonist is very good, cruel and real, with a little warmth. It is intended for a relatively large reading group. In addition, it can be seen between the lines that the author has a good literary background. It supports that he can fully express what he wants to express to the readers, which is great. Clear and guided reading, this article is great and is better than new ideas. I read the beginning, my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. Come on, author, keep at it!

I gave tickets every day and also gave rewards. It's not too much to be precise. Also, the author is so handsome.

To collect a set of characters, you can have a simple name or a detailed setting of hundreds of words. The author will write your ideas into the book. The author is a loser in naming, please save the children! ! !

A famous person once said: A person's imagination is limited, but the imagination of book lovers is infinite! Collect good ideas. Various settings, plots, and characters can be submitted here! Use your brains Let the author happily learn from it (chaoxi) and add it to the book! Final thanks (❁´ω`❁)

It's been almost a day! Update quickly🌚🌚🌚

Brother, are you wearing a vest? Your writing style is like a demon coming to you, you must be perfect before it collapses. Think about it, why do I feel so sad when I think about it at the same time as you?

The word "identity" is very strange. Whether it's good recognition or bad recognition. Can the protagonist become stronger? I always feel that special abilities come from the good and bad recognition of others. What recognition is the greatest? Good people don't live long, bad people live ten thousand years. Do more shocking things. Your title seems to have nothing to do with the article.

The book review has been posted, and the author went to the article scanning circle to post it. By the way, this book is a fairy tale. The author should work hard to write it. If the quality is guaranteed, some big things may happen in the future. Finally... Please improve.

Already invested in favorites and comments. Work hard and hope to visit again⊙ω⊙

Receive it, it's really well written!

Very good, absolutely high-quality, the setting and plot description are very good, you must invest in it

I want to ask you, have you tested the waters?😃

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Come on! Great writing!

I am coming! Well, I just tried the wave poison Fortunately, I have deep inner strength, otherwise I would have to stay here and not be able to write words In a word, let's work hard together! 😁

The protagonist is really weaker than a chicken, has no strength to restrain a chicken, and encounters such a monster. How does the author plan to write it?

Very attractive, give it a try first

It's a pity that no one reads this good book. I read it in one afternoon

Enter the pit and wait for my return to comment

I don't know if it's because it's short or what, but it's just very impressive. A pit that suits my taste. 😭

Although it is not my area of ​​expertise, it looks quite interesting. Cheers, author💪

Before reading it, I was quite happy to find out that it was finished. I thought I could read it in one go without having to catch up on updates, but I never expected that it turned out to be a trap. Wow, I thought it was so well written, why did I just jump in?

The protagonist It's like living in the apocalypse for many years. When you meet Bai Qi Xu Fu, who is obviously beyond your ability, shouldn't you be asked to promise whatever you want? Why reject it directly? There is this awareness in the later chapters where Qin Baiying appears, but not in the previous chapters? Bai Qi 1. I don't know if there are any settings that have not been written. The lack of respect for the protagonist may be due to too many reincarnations and I feel that he was not Qin Shihuang before awakening 2. After staying in the present world, I couldn't bear the pain Xu Fu suffered and did not kill the protagonist directly. I should let the protagonist grow up as soon as possible, but I didn't see it 3. Bai Qi, Lord Wuan, Qin Shihuang should not have thousands of people who are more powerful than him, but there may be special settings here, but it is not easy to explain.