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The progress of the plot is too slow, and I can't see where the interesting points are. It's like eating a meal. I wrote one chapter when I ate noodles, another chapter when I wiped my mouth, and another chapter when I drank soup. Maybe after seven or eight chapters, there will be an important plot about food poisoning, but I can't hold on to that moment.

I hope it contains Dou Po, Zhu Xian, Hua Qian Gu, Versatile Mage, and Doraemon World. Come on, author. Just a suggestion.

Harem? 😏 I suggest Xiao Xun'er, Yun Yun, Little Medical Fairy, Medusa, Yafei 😃 For others, it depends on the author. Of course, I just recommend 😄

The protagonist is diaosi, shengmubiao, he can't walk when he sees a woman, he is soft-hearted and extremely childish.

It feels like the protagonist's brain doesn't work very well. I feel like I'm mentally retarded. Dear author, I am not trying to damage this book, but I hope you will be more careful in shaping the characters. In my opinion, the protagonist's IQ is really low. But the plot in your book is still very interesting.

I always think of Tang Monk in Journey to the West. Every goblin wants to eat Tang Monk's flesh!

The psychotic protagonist! The Holy Mother protagonist! Helping people upgrade their martial arts for no reason! The kind that haven't benefited yet! Such a protagonist really can't survive the first chapter!

It turns out that the author likes beautiful women😍😍😍

When I see a good-looking woman, I can't move. I feel a little disgusted and retreat.

You dare to pretend to be a third-level alchemist before you even draw the memory of an alchemist 😥

When will the author follow up in a wave of ten?

Damn it, I can't stand it anymore. What the protagonist did makes no sense at all.