A Magician Who Can't Operate a Mecha Is Not a Good Monk

Man, you shocked me as soon as you came up. Why should the protagonist be called that? Also, I don't like the system writing very much, the writing is quite funny. There are just too few words in one chapter. It is recommended that one chapter should be around 2,000 words.

Okay, it made me laugh from the beginning to the end. It's better to add more details, not just dialogue.

I voted for some recommendations and invested some money by the way. Come on!

Author, can you write a few more words in one chapter? Two thousand is fine!

Received! Big cheers for the author! Rush the duck!

Haha, the author is very talented and writes well, keep up the good work!

Because the background of your book is very large (as written in the introduction, it is at least very unique) and the subject matter is quite new. In addition, your writing style is not bad. If you think about it again, you can fill it up and make it bigger and more grand. But you stopped it abruptly. You said it was a short story but there were a lot of irrelevant words in the middle. You said it was a long story, but you felt that the main text could not match your introduction. If humor is mixed with literary content, it is actually very popular. It is actually a pity that such a good material is used. You can think about it again and refine it, and it will be very successful.

I've read it several times, but I'm still not used to this name (face covering)

I like mechas, let's support each other!

Seedlings are in the germination stage and grow up quickly.

Collected for you, let's see when you become a eunuch*^_^*

It feels like each of your chapters is quite short, and are you serious about the name of the protagonist? Well, if you sign the contract anyway, it will be better than mine.

It's too short. A book of 4,000 words would take half a day every day. Don't open it twice.

Is this the end of the book? The final chapter really scared me.

It feels like the acceptance of time travel is a bit stronger here. If he travels through time, will he not miss the people in the original world? Don't you have any psychological burden? This is actually a common problem in most time-travel novels. You can describe it a little bit, for example, the male protagonist has nothing worth remembering in the original world or he has weak emotions or something.

It's coming, it's coming, First of all, it's still small. I think other people think so too. It's not that there are few chapters, it's that there are few words in each chapter, only more than a thousand. Secondly, this problem is not obvious yet, but it will cause some headaches in the later stage. There are three worlds, which are sandy enough, bold enough, and imaginative enough. At present, there are few chapters and it is easy to sort them out. When there are more chapters, I think it will be a bit confusing. Readers are not afraid of confusion as long as you write well and write in an orderly manner. Third, I think it is also the reason for the small number of words, the lack of details. I think someone has pointed it out. Details are not the number of words, so don't be dismissive. Sometimes the details have many funny points that can be picked up by everyone, or the details can pave the way for non-stop sand sculptures. And sometimes if there are no details, the readers may be a little confused and feel that you will not be able to take on some parts. Fourth, I'd like to compliment you. Your writing style is very good. It's not as sluggish as some newbies' books. The sand sculpture writing is very suitable for the current market. The era of cool writing is passing. The popularity rate of the always cool articles has dropped a bit. The material selection is good, and the background story that stands out. If it can be done later, It would be good to stick to the writing style and allow readers to distinguish the system. That is, we all now know what these three worlds are like, and we also have some rankings of their martial arts. Carefully analyze what you usually think of the martial arts. For example, it would be wrong to write that AK is better than Forbidden Curse.

I envy my brother, this readership.

Already collected, please return it and give me more advice in the future 😄

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