God's Game Company

My standards for reading books: 1. No heroine 2. There is a heroine but not a **** 3. No harem, not a stallion 4. The above points must not violate Article 1 Is this book suitable for me?

After the first world, I felt like I was writing a composition for an elementary school student.

Seeing Nalan Yanran decisively abandon the book, did Nalan Yanran go too far? Who would like you without even meeting each other? The corners of Xiao Yan's mouth are extremely foul-smelling, and he has spent thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi. Qi Qi came up to help Xiao Yan?

BUG in the first world: It was said at the beginning that souls travel through time. After death, you lose some energy at most, but I looked at some people who died many times and did not show any signs of mental fatigue and became more and more energetic The first half of the first world was very well written, but there were some loopholes. Suddenly a seafood family appeared in the back, and the taste changed. It started to be very rushed. You said you are a sudden It was okay when the incident happened, but there was no movement after the pvp was suddenly started. The second world was not written at all. It was like rushing to reincarnate throughout the whole process. It was gone in less than 30 chapters. The span was too big. I'm sorry to see several sci-fi mechas suddenly appeared in the second world. I knew I should give up the book (the whole process was like rushing to reincarnate) and there was no use for a transition period in the middle.

? ? ? I don't understand why there must be a female protagonist? A game article has to include some irrelevant content and then the whole article is written in a weird way. Either there is too much content about the female protagonist, or a random heroine suddenly appears until the end, which makes people look like a question mark. I wonder if it is because Qidian authors are single per capita. The character descriptions of most female protagonists are super weird (did you know that it is easy to lose female readers in this way~). This is my summary of my experience in reading Qidian male readers.

It's such a mess, I even stayed up late watching 😭😭 and felt like I was vomiting blood.

Ghostwriting, I definitely hired someone to ghostwrite it. The plot of Faerun to Dou Po is just lighthearted and enjoyable. I don't want to complain about it. What's the matter with the third prince of the empire appearing in the back? After the 23rd century, has communism turned into imperialism again? I reluctantly accept the parallel world explanation. But the protagonist is the aboriginal of the total world! Where did he know about star transformation? Did someone predict the future world more than two hundred years ago? It is best to change the first one and add a time-travel setting for the protagonist. Otherwise, the plot will be very uncomfortable to watch.

Although the first world has many flaws, at least it is good overall. From the time I fought the old king, it was miserable. When the fighting spirit turned into a horse, I felt like a primary school student's composition... It's a pity, it seems that the author has completely let himself go and started to have fun... Gone...😅😅

I feel like I'm letting myself go when I write about Douma Dalu.

If this game really existed, would you be like the players in the book?

The female tool worker in the protagonist's company becomes soft-hearted when she asks the protagonist 😡

It feels very weird. The player is directly sent to the battlefield without explaining anything, and then the NPC dies inexplicably. The main line fails and there is no description of the battlefield.

Author, are you about to finish writing?

I couldn't stand it anymore from the beginning of Dou Po, and I let myself go in all kinds of ways.

How to say it? The protagonist's desire to participate is so strong that every copy looks boring. Since it is a behind-the-scenes stream, downplay the protagonist's existence and let the supporting characters shine and play freely. It will probably look very interesting.

I don't understand what this player used as a carrier in the past! There is no loss after dying so many times? Although it doesn't need to be rigorous as an entertainment article! But this is too exaggerated!

I let myself go as I write, and I can't stand it anymore as I read.

It feels pretty good, come on!

I couldn't stand it any longer and slipped away. This main god is too weak.

This book feels like a bad book. Is there any loss when the player dies? Not cooled? ? In this way, the record of 1++++ deaths can be set in one day? ? Without this setting, the novel about the game's other world would be a cool novel.

Updates are so slow! Can we update it twice a day?

After reading Chapter 29, the main character is so weak. Abandoned, couldn't stand it anymore, the writing was messy. The protagonist just needs to establish a mode for players to defeat monsters and upgrade. But the protagonist of this novel recruits a large group of people to open a game company and becomes a lord in another world to establish territory. What kind of mentally retarded protagonist is this?

? I'm just curious. Did Nalan Yanran go too far?

If you write and cultivate your mind all day long, there will come a day when you can't see it anymore! It's always going to be a boring day

Are you evolving or degenerating?

After watching the first few pictures, I can't stand it anymore. They are too casual and have no rigorous settings. They often give out private fields without collecting taxes for three years. Believe it or not, you will starve to death next month. The population has increased by so many people from other worlds. It's like eating air. The Lord God's loan is as if you don't have to pay it back. The reality is also poorly written.

Your writing is too boring. There are only thirty or so chapters in the main plot of the mainland. Obviously, the mainland can continue to be written. Is the mainland just a country? Why are there all the orcs?

It was very interesting at first, and I even gave it a full subscription. But then I felt that it was getting worse and worse with the writing, and I had no intention of reading any more! I feel like I'm losing blood!

No wonder I have saved it several times but deleted it before reading 2 chapters... It's really... *****

It's better to read about Lord God Reincarnation. There are so few Lord God Infinite articles like this. Jiangzhi can't stand it anymore.