Douluo's Sand Waterfall Douluo

I haven't read this book yet and I don't know what to do with it. I'll give you a few suggestions: 1. If you want to write, stick to it and don't be confused. 2. If you are not good at emotional scenes, you don't have to write them. Don't break up the original couple randomly. 3. I hope this is not a stud story, it is really disgusting. 4. Please be reasonable when configuring soul rings. I will add this book to my bookshelf first and will not read it for now.

The writing is good, the layers are clear, and the characters are well understood. It is a hundred and eighty thousand times better than those novels that always write the protagonist with a low word count and make the protagonist more powerful than a god.

After reading Chapter 25, I was shocked by Qu Hongxiao. Here I would like to share my personal views. First of all, it is okay for Zhuo Youran to be considered a gangster. After all, there is something wrong with a man squatting next to the women's dormitory, but it is very nonsense for the protagonist to be considered his accomplice. From the conversation between the protagonist and him, it is easy to conclude that they are not the same person, and Qu Hongxiao herself also said that she had been staring at Zhuo Youran in the tree for a long time. Didn't she hear the conversation between the two? Another point is that Qu Hongxiao was beaten when she first came up, which I won't say (maybe it's a character issue), but after that she refused to listen to the protagonist's explanation and became a bit unreasonable - do you think this is a Qiong Yao drama? This is not to say that it is unreasonable, but the effect of persuading people to retreat is outstanding. Author, you said that you basically don't lower your wits, and you basically did it before, and the readers also booed, so why is there such a clichéd plot here that disgusts people? I hope the author will change the dialogue or explain a few sentences. After reading the chapter reviews, many people have been disgusted. I really hope that the later chapters will be more exciting.

The main reason is that people in the Douluo World have soul skills. As long as they have full soul power and add a soul ring, they can have skills. People in the Martial Arts World have to work hard to cultivate their internal strength and spend time practicing martial arts. Some people are not talented enough or they are not suitable to practice successfully. But in Douluo Continent, as long as you have a soul ring, you will definitely have soul skills. Therefore, people in the martial arts world have created various internal skills, martial arts, and hidden weapons. Each world has its own merits. But in general, the overall environment of Douluo Continent is better, with natural resources, treasures, and even divine thrones waiting to be inherited.

There is no need to listen to them and not dismantle the original CP. Some people will read it if it is dismantled, and some people will read it if it is not dismantled. But you have written it like this. If Ning Rongrong is not the heroine, or is with Oscar again, then it is poisonous. Personally, I hope this book will dismantle the original CP.

The first time I watched it was Sha Pai Douluo, 😅😅 My glasses prescription is a bit high recently 😭😭

If you build a supporting building and want to play a supporting role in it, you can write it down according to the format. Name: (The words should be simple, not too uncommon) Gender: (Only male and female, no in-betweens are accepted) Age: (Even if it is written, I will change it) Character: (According to the personality, assign the power and work) Shortcomings: (No one is perfect, please mention at least one shortcoming) Martial spirit: (Long Aotian doesn't want it, it's better to be something strange) Soul skill: (Don't be too bt)

Looking for a supporting role Mao Wudi Level 94 Titled Douluo (this person has invincible defense but is too cautious) Martial Spirit: Obsidian Hobby: Collecting ores from the heart (the source of stones in the later stage of the protagonist) Soul Ring 1-4 Rock Hardening Five Earth Metamorphosis (obtaining soul power from the soil) Six Rock Spear Thrust Seven Obsidian body (the whole body is made of obsidian and is so hard that it cannot be hit) 8 Obsidian armor (absorbs soul power when attacked to strengthen the armor) 9 Obsidian space Character background: This person is too afraid of pain, so he adds all the defense points. He has basically no attack power. In terms of defense, 99-level Douluo cannot be hit. The attack power can only kill the Soul Douluo level. He likes to quarrel when he doesn't like it. He once had a fight with Tang Chen. Tang Chen can't be beaten

Based on the fact that it has been pirated for six years and has been published for two years, I think this book is okay. It does not blindly follow the group, nor kneels and licks. The battles are also realistic, and the hooks are not too high. That's it, you can read it if you like it, but forget it if you don't want to.

Be yourself, be willing to help others, come on, the starting point is that you are not so violent with others

Many people say that the plot develops slowly, which shows that the author writes with great expectations 🤓

It fits my impression of Shrek's teacher. He is so disgusting, just like when I met Canghui Academy outside the Star Dou Forest. Zhang Hui Academy is so arrogant. Did it offend Shrek? No, on the contrary, that pervert Ma Hongjun kept staring at that woman, and then he dueled her and beat her until she was almost crippled. I feel disgusted by the outlook of most Shrek people. I don't know why everyone who writes fan fiction has to hug Shrek's lap.

It would be disgusting if the heroine was not Ning Rongrong. We grew up together and Ning Rongrong already has feelings for the heroine. If we give him away as a daughter, then we can abandon it. The author, why don't you tell me in advance?

Shrek has treated the protagonist like this, and it is even more impossible for Ning Rongrong to be with Oscar. I hope it won't be bloody, and the original partner should be separated.

This setting of innate soul power is weird. Anyone with an innate level of 7 or above has a chance to be banned. Now two innate souls are full of soul power, and the next one suddenly has an innate level 9. Can a genius who is a bad guy still be called a genius? After reading at least a dozen chapters, I know 5 of them who are level 8 or above.

You guys are so awesome, I can't express my excitement. At present, it has exceeded one thousand collections. Xiaosheng is very honored to be here. Although the contract is still being fulfilled, let's get excited and start updating three times a day. 🎁🎁🎁

I watched Naruto again today, and suddenly I thought that I could give the protagonist a gourd with a soul bone attached to it. This thing would not weigh much, and it could also summon sand with attributes from it, just like the qualitative change that occurred when Tang San obtained the bloodline of the Blue Silver Emperor. Of course, it is just an opinion. How to write it depends on the author.

I just want to know, author, what kind of people do you want to cater to? When I first opened the book, I said that I would not remove the CP, and now I am adding more details to the person who said [not to remove the CP], haha, I am speechless If the quarrel between removing the CP and not removing the CP in other people's books is a problem created by readers, then the quarrel about CP in your book is caused by the author yourself The most disgusting thing is an author like you who makes promises but fails to fulfill them, 😐

I don't understand why the protagonist didn't grab the Ice and Fire Eye. In terms of backing and strength, the protagonist is no worse than Dugu Bo. On the contrary, he is much stronger than the ancient sword. The two major Douluo are both super Douluo above level 95. If the protagonist is really for the good of the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect, then Ning Fengzhi should be told that there is a kind of fairy grass in the Ice and Fire Eyes that can turn the Seven Treasures Glazed into Nine Treasures Glazed. I think that when Ning Fengzhi knows this news, he will never let it go. Even if it is not for himself, a level 79 soul saint, he will consider it for Ning Rongrong.

It has to be said that Xiao Wu has many flaws, including brutality, violence, impulsiveness, quick talk, too self-centered, and no emotional principles. Although she is kind-hearted by nature, her EQ and IQ are still lacking. It took her a hundred thousand years to transform from a soul beast into a human being, but she didn't know how to be a human being. The way of human nature is to regulate yin and yang, vertically and horizontally. We need a kind heart, but we also need to add a defensive heart. We cannot suffer losses in vain, but we must also learn to bear the pain and give up love. We cannot allow others to dominate us, but we cannot bully the weak either. When dealing with people, you need to be cautious and flexible. It can't be solved by showing off one's courage and preferring death over surrender. If Xiao Wu had been born in a world where the strong preyed on the weak and people were unpredictable, Xiao Wu would have died countless times. In terms of emotions, it is even more unethical. Since she and Tang San were already brothers and sisters, how could they become lovers. To put it harshly, it's like an inhuman beast looking for someone she likes to mate with. Humanity's thousands of years of culture and countless ethical principles cannot be allowed to be destroyed by this rabbit. Although they are not related by blood, they already have ethics and morals. If this continues, what kind of friendship is needed? Tang San also had no principles. Xiao Wu was a spirit beast and didn't understand human ethics. How could he destroy the Great Wall by himself? Fortunately, he was still a human being in two lifetimes, but he didn't stop this ridiculous thing. Douluo Continent, this world is indeed wonderful, but the behavior and moral emotions in it are unacceptable.

This novel is simply extremely poisonous. This novel should not be unfinished, it should be about eunuchs. Fortunately, I read the last three chapters, and I feel better that I didn't write them down. When I read the outline, most of the Wuhun Palace was fought by the protagonists of the original novel, and the male protagonist managed to get Tang San to become a god, Ning Rongrong. I also got angry with the male protagonist for some ridiculous reasons, and ended up with Oscar. In the end, the male protagonist didn't know that he was alone. It's been a long time since I've seen such a bad fanfic. If I can hope that the author can write an original article in the next book, the author's writing style is still good.

Reading the introduction is great, I have always wanted to see a Douluo fan with this kind of start. After all, the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect is the sect that has been written about the most, and the characters in it are also very charming. I have always thought that if I could start from here, many scenes could be unfolded, including Ning Rongrong as a child and the daily life of Sword and Bone Douluo. The plot is also relatively easy to cut into, and it will not be as deliberate as other books that rush into Holy Soul Village and Notting City.

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The author greatly hopes that this book will not contain eunuchs. I have read many Douluo fandoms, which are either bad or good eunuchs, so I found this one with great difficulty. I sincerely hope that the author can continue writing it 🙏🙏

Sandstorm Douluo Sorry, I thought he was Sandstorm Douluo at first.

I think the sand martial spirit should develop into a defensive system, and it also has magnetism. You create a magnetic field, and without your magnetic field, there is no more powerful defense than this. And refer to deserts, quicksands, pits, etc., And then absorb hard metals such as diamonds. It is invincible in terms of control and restraint. If you are powerful, you can also understand the mystery of the earth element. Why do we have to attack by force? It's not suitable at all.

To be honest, I was poisoned by book reviews and comments. Bye-Bye

The most annoying thing is those people who don't want the heroine. Unless a time traveler is heartless, he won't want the heroine!