Emperor's Other World

The characters are stereotyped and stereotyped, and the first three chapters do not give people a sense of freshness or surprise. Moreover, the theme is not clear, and several funny scenes are a bit forced. The advantage is that the structure of the words is condensed, giving people a refreshing reading feeling, which is quite rare among newcomers who are full of bad sentences. The chapter number needs to be typed in! Looking forward to the author's next updates.

Received, come on, let's make progress together

You become famous first. When you become famous, don't forget to write a preface to my book.

Language is interesting! Looking forward to content updates.

The second chapter is good, just starting out, I look forward to the follow-up plot, it will be blinding.

{"NickName":"Claw Hook","UserId":343442547}👍Come to Q group 628100,515=Stories become stories because of conflicts. Various set forces collide in a specific environment, resulting in a wonderful story.

{"NickName":"Claw Hook","UserId":343442547}👍Come to Q group 628100,515=Stories become stories because of conflicts. Various set forces collide in a specific environment, resulting in a wonderful story.

Very well written, keep up the good work!

The introduction gives people the same feeling, the writing is okay, the writing style is average, the plot is not grasped enough, and the characterization of the characters is lacking. Make the characters feel lifeless, without flesh and blood. Try to arrange the dialogue and expressions of the characters in more detail, and you may have unexpected gains. Let's work together and encourage each other!