Fight Through the Stars

Dear uncles, a funny fantasy is online. Although it only has 10,000 words, it is an absolute masterpiece. Li Ritian said, if the sky wants to suppress me, I will do it. When the setting sun bullies me, I will follow the sun and the stars. When the universe wants to block me, I will follow the universe. Looking at one sentence: Young Zhiyuan, when I return, I will step on the stars and shatter the setting sun.

Has anyone read it? Is my writing so... Bad?

Dear gentlemen! I wish you good fortune and prosperity every year. Congratulations on getting rich, I recommend you to get it.

Awesome, I agree and vote for it. Elder brother.

It's better not to write it 😅

The writing is still very good. As for the jokes, they can only make new readers laugh at most. The reason why no one gives you a recommendation vote is mainly because your plot is too cliché. If you want to write jokes, you shouldn't come to fantasy.

What do you want to do while writing four books at the same time?

This book is very problematic. 1. The name of the work is good. Needless to say, although it imitates Dou Po Cang Qiong, it cannot imitate Dou Po Cang Qiong at its best. 2. Another thing is that your article is not marked with words. For example - "I'm so angry!" The old man said angrily. You did not add the punctuation mark "". 3. It's the title of the article. Don't make it a "fantasy chapter" and just make it "Prologue: Ordinary Boy" and "Chapter One: Mysterious Power". 4. The content of the article is too old-fashioned. Don't start with some mysterious strong man. Grandpa, it's very boring. 5. You must persevere, otherwise you will be like me, writing several books without signing a contract, but I will definitely sign a contract next. Come on, too!