Martial Arts Adventure

Thoughts on watching Farewell My Concubine As the saying goes, most people who are righteous are butchers of dogs, and those who are unfaithful are all scholars. This opera by the author has sung all kinds of emotions in the world, including the unpredictability of people's hearts. I originally thought that Master Ma, as the imperial eagle dog, was a ruthless and merciless character. But here it is written that eagles and dogs are also chivalrous, tender, and loyal. I originally thought that the little leper would be different from the original drama. Although he could not become a famous actor, he could still make ends meet and not worry about food and drink as long as he practiced hard. However, the author's reasonable modification makes us understand that people's hearts are unpredictable and their desires are endless. The protagonist's temporary kindness and soft-heartedness not only harmed him, but also harmed himself. It is precisely because of this little leprosy incident that the protagonist understands: When people live in this world, they must have their own reasons for doing things. This is probably the reason why the protagonist was able to bear the heart to kill people and finally merged into ancient times as a modern person. When I felt something, I didn't know what to say, so I just made a few random sentences, hoping that the author wouldn't make a joke.

The fairy begins, and the more he writes, the more he boasts. The opening is simply a masterpiece. I think this opening can be compared with Cuckoo Bird. From acting to martial arts, the warmth and warmth of human relationships, and the changing situation. Although the plot develops with the rhythm of the movie, the characters are very full. Later, he avenged his master and fought against Jin Lou alone, which truly expressed the world in his heart. Even though there is a lot of blank space, the flaws are still intact. Later, the writing was too complicated, and the protagonist completely became a symbol, a person who pursues becoming stronger and loses himself, a person who cannot empathize, and a person who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goal. What is Jianghu? Jianghu is a story, Jianghu is wine. Jianghu is not just the best in the world. There are two reasons for this. First, the protagonist's force expands too fast. After experiencing several worlds, there is no limit to the force. As a result, the plot cannot be developed well, and the goal is achieved by pushing sideways. In the following world, the protagonists are either the best in the world, or they are pursuing the best in the world. They have completely lost the fun of traveling around the world, and they no longer make new friends. The story and wine end here, and the struggle for hegemony begins. But it's always cold at high places, so Jianghu has really become the backdrop for completing the mission. The martial arts adventure has become the martial arts upgrade. Second, the author follows the same pace when writing books and writes too little about the parts not covered in the original work. Take New Dragon Gate Inn for example. The author boldly changed the world line and changed the fate of many people. The writing is actually very good, and it is also very close to the character's personality and very real. But I only wrote about a few scenes that happened in the movie, so the article will be very short. If you write a story that takes 10 years, you can write 50 chapters, and if you write a story of one day, you can write 50 chapters. Personally, the author still cannot escape from the original work. I read this book over the past few days and felt it was such a pity.

You guys, please stop being so arrogant. As a posture bookworm, I understand better than anyone else what is literary youth disease and true talent. I also understand those who say that the author is young and recommend Xiaobai's novels. There are many details in the book that some people cannot understand. But again, this book is very good, very good, very good. It's so good that I bought a foreshadowing for more than a hundred chapters, and it was revealed after more than a hundred chapters (defeating Shangguan Jinhong's blood drop trick). The world in the book is about human relationships, grudges, and no one can tell the right and wrong. Definitely more than twice as good as Wen Chao Gong and "Martial Arts World Adventure". The fact that the protagonist is still a human being is the best proof! ! ! ! ! What is martial arts? ? ? ? It's Jianghu! ! ! ! ! What we see is a world of flesh and blood! ! ! Men love beauties, and heroes cherish heroes. Some compete for fame, some for profit, some for love, and some for insincerity. But no matter when, the young master's sleeves are always attached to beauty! ! ! ! "There are no flowers that the eyes don't want to bloom, and there are no bright moons that the heart doesn't want to yearn for." It's still the same sentence. I support this book and this world that the "great gods" have never written about! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Some suggestions. The author's writing skills are definitely at the top of the current Internet literature. I haven't seen an Internet author with such skills in a long time, and it is probably rare even in traditional literary circles. But after reading more than 100 chapters, I felt that there were some flaws and the plot advanced too fast. I think that for a martial arts novel to be called a masterpiece, it must not only rely on martial arts to dominate the world. The relationship between people, the portrayal of characters, and even the spirit of the martial arts world revealed are the core of a novel. Otherwise, it will eventually fall into the kimchi literary routine of fighting monsters and upgrading. For example, Mr. Jin Yong's novels, if Guo Jing, Linghu Chong, and Zhang Wuji had learned peerless martial arts all the way, and then defeated so and so, and finally became invincible, I think these works would not be able to become masterpieces handed down from generation to generation. The real core is the first layer of the novel, the portrayal of various characters, the second layer is the embodiment of the emotional interaction between people, and the third layer is the display of world view and values ​​​​in the world of martial arts, what is martial arts and what is a knight. The author's first plot, Farewell My Concubine, can be seen to have put a lot of thought into portraying the characters and emotional exchanges. It can be described as a first-rate novel. However, the subsequent plots have basically become a running story and have basically started to follow the routine of pickle novels. I hope the author can write each plot in more depth. I really don't want to see such a masterpiece end up falling into a cliché.

Except for the first map of Farewell My Concubine, all the subsequent ones are time-travel and time-travel, killing here and there. I don't know why, but the reading experience suddenly dropped a lot. It's a pity...

I saw people talking about this book everywhere, and I thought it was very good. Yes, the writing style is good, not a novice, but the literary youth syndrome is also real. In the first volume, I was tortured by the literary youth. The portrayal of the protagonist is really bad, and the time traveler... Has a mentality of eating grass. I wanted to blend in with the style of painting, but also had the identity of a time traveler, but the result was a piece of crap and boring.

The Lord of Mysteries is finished. After a few frequent eunuchs, this book has become the most popular one in the book list. I am surprised that there are so many differences in the comment area. The author writes very martial arts. Although it is based on some less "mainstream" novels, it does not affect the reading even if I have not read it. This shows my skills. Many plots that are familiar to the Infinite stream look okay, but when I have never seen them, my senses are very poor. It's refreshing but not mindless, the level is well controlled, and the writing is good. Some people say wenqing, but I think it's pretty good. It doesn't mean we are called wenqing if we are not selfish or anything like that. Where is the charlatanism? It's that quality, that persistence, that irrationality, that refreshingness, that kind of contradiction. In addition, there are two features of this article that I like very much. The first is fighting. Without those so-called levels, masters will capsize. Nowadays, the one-level and two-level combat system is popular, which is simple and brainless. The second protagonist himself is the most beautiful (ahem, sense of substitution). There is no relationship between men and women with intellectual disabilities that other novels focus on. Instead, there is a feeling that the protagonist is not being taken advantage of. Seriously speaking, the reason why the world is so charming is love. Love, family and friendship. What the protagonist is currently experiencing is that love disappears before it sprouts (Overlord), master-disciple relationship, and friendship. The level is all the way, and Lang'er doesn't feel sad, but leaves an aftertaste. However, this type of novel may not necessarily be popular on the Internet. I hope the author will work hard.

Farewell My Concubine is so immersive, it feels like debut and peak. If there is no subsequent plot, I think the Overlord chapter alone can be called a classic!

It's a pity that the first volume is so bad. The more I write in the future, the more times I write it.

There is no main plot line, no upgrading of the training system, only vegetarian food, no meat and no nutrition. For the time being, it is just a collection of traditional martial arts short novels with unlimited flow. It looks fresh but will not last long.

Let me tell you my feelings. I don't mean that the author's writing is not good, but I personally feel that the author was a little hasty in writing and did not count the chapters in detail. However, The World of Farewell My Concubine is the best written. The beginning was so beautiful that I later felt that it was not enough. I felt that there was a lack of polish and lack of polish. Description, and it is increasingly lacking. The beauty of the first volume is not that it changes the plot, but that it follows the story of Su Qing written in the context of Farewell My Concubine. Every step of Su Qing's choices and every action are described in detail, letting me know what he encountered, naturally. I made a natural choice, but after arriving at Xiaoyu, I had a strange feeling. Compared with the previous ones, I always felt that there were suddenly a few chapters missing. Please allow me to take a guess. If I am wrong, I apologize in advance. The world of Farewell My Concubine must have been conceived for a long time. Relatively speaking, the following chapters are more important. It's shorter, so that I feel that there is no sense of inconsistency in dividing the first chapter and the rest of the Sword of Eternal Life into two books. I can understand that the world of Longmen Inn, for example, is indeed small and not spacious, but it is really different later on. Alas, I hope the author will work hard.

What is martial arts arena? There is martial arts, martial arts There is the bravery of pushing eight hundred people without any opponent, and the charm of a sword that gleams in the fourteen states. But that's not the most important thing. You also need to have chivalry and chivalry Have the courage to paint one's body and swallow charcoal in return for a close friend, have the responsibility to serve the country and the people as a great chivalrous person, and have the righteousness to draw a sword to help when there is injustice on the road. Then there is Jianghu. But where there are people, there are rivers and lakes, and where there are rivers and lakes, there are rules. Good rules, bad rules. It is a rule not to bring harm to your family, not to harm innocent people, and not to harm the world. There are also rules that say there is no need to talk about moral principles when dealing with evil spirits and heretics, only those with "virtue" should stay, and a hard fist is the truth. When people are in the arena, they can't help themselves. What you see in martial arts is that people uphold chivalry and rely on force to practice or resist the rules of the world. Martial arts is a breath, a breath that "the liver and gallbladder are pierced, and the hair is ridged. In the conversation, life and death are the same, and a promise is worth a thousand pieces of gold." If, like some so-called immortals nowadays, there are indifferent "immortals" and no "helping the danger and saving the world", then it is not martial arts. It's not what we, the remnants of the old martial arts era, want to see. I hope the author can maintain his standards and ignore the trolls. Describes the story of a martial arts adventure. There are also trolls. Those who like martial arts are all uncles. I don't know how good the skills of Yin and Yang are. If you don't like it, it's okay. It doesn't matter if you give opinions. Don't be disgusting, why don't we show you our writing skills.

It's hard to comment. The first dungeon is great, but the second dungeon feels like an old eunuch protagonist. Your so-called emphasis on love and justice is cool and hidden, right? You can clearly explain it, and it's really just a knife for the sake of the knife. I can understand the third dungeon where the little girl stabs the master in the back. First of all, the killer is not qualified to talk about loyalty. Secondly, loyalty can be divided into big and small righteousness.

It is well known that the author wrote the first volume very well, but I feel that the second volume can be written a little better. There are a few things that I personally feel bad about. I will complain about them. If you don't like them, don't criticize them. 1. The character issue. I just read the second volume and I don't know how the author arranges the emotional scenes. But the emotional scene of Jin Xiangyu is a bit not good. The protagonist himself blocked everything for Jin Xiangyu in order to repay his kindness. Don't ask for anything in return, leave coolly~your taste... 2. Diao Buyu's setting~seems very realistic. It can be seen that the protagonist has a very high IQ and a deep mind... But something feels wrong. There is also the issue of the protagonist's martial arts, which has increased very quickly in the second volume. It is as if he was Ip Man in the Republic of China one second, and became Cao Shaoqin the next second. There is a gap between the two of them, Gong Baosen. In fact, the second volume can really be written better. The characters of several supporting characters are more fully explained. It is not like killing or killing like now, in short, it is killing~

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Let me talk about my feelings. The beginning is very exciting. This is recognized by everyone. Why is it exciting? I think 1. It starts from a small person and eventually becomes a everyone. Let everyone understand the world of the Republic of China from the perspective of a small person. 2. The human touch of the protagonist makes readers feel that this is a living person. He has emotions, sorrows, joys and sorrows. In layman's terms, he is down-to-earth, has a sense of empathy, and makes people feel real. 3. The choice of theme, Farewell My Concubine, with Ip Man playing in the middle is a very good point to watch, and the connection in the middle is natural and reasonable. 4. The ending was clever, using the excuse of sending everyone off to Hong Kong to say goodbye. The ups and downs can be regarded as a complete life. After talking about the highlights, let's talk about the flaws. The fights in the subsequent stories are even better, and the level of excitement is not bad. Dragon Gate Inn made me feel that while the characters were flesh and blood, the pig's feet had a bit of a dusty taste. This was fine at first, but when it came to Jianyu, I felt that Pig's Feet was already incompatible with that world, except for the little girl. Moving on to the world of ancient dragons, the author describes this world with a lot of disputes in the world of rivers and lakes, but ignores pig's feet. Are pig's feet in this world of rivers and lakes? I don't think so. If you insist on saying so, I have nothing to say. It's just that I feel like Pig's Feet will leave as soon as it completes its mission, and I will love whoever it is, and I won't care about the flood after I leave. As a tree, if it wants to grow on the ground, it must take root. Pig's feet are so magical that they are a bit otherworldly. What is the main line? Why does Pig's Foot insist on completing the task? Or what does Pig's Foot want? Is it just following the system and drifting with the flow without a goal? Also, Jian Yu unified the entire organization, and Gu Long unified the entire world. Will the author still write about it in the future? This is already written to the heavens, and he changed to become an immortal? Change back to being a nobody? Can a man who has been an emperor beg for food again? The above is just a little bit of my experience in reading the book. I don't want to express my displeasure.

In the Jianghu, there is love and hate, affection and hatred, evil and good, heroes and bandits. It is both complex and pure.                                                                                                                                       The word "xia" is still a little short, but the Grandmaster does not contain much feelings about family and country. I hope the author will write about Jet Li's Once Upon a Time series 😁

Today is my 7th year of reading novels. Although I have never spent any money 🤤, this novel written by Piao Deng really made me addicted to it from the beginning. The pirates who never spend money are finally starting to support the author seriously. Come on, come on💪, I really like this book! Come on, author💪Come on⛽️, start subscribing for the next chapters!

Sir, can you write about the plots of movies like "The Master", "The Swordsman of Two Flags", "The Swordsman", etc.?

First of all, I have to say that I am a prostitute. The book is a really good martial arts masterpiece. There is no messy level setting like the so-called third-rate, second-rate, first-rate, innate, etc. That are common in online martial arts novels. From Farewell My Concubine to the current Hero, you have seen him become stronger and stronger bit by bit. The disregard for life has gone from Xiao Laizi's intolerance to his current decisiveness in killing. The master of Farewell My Concubine still has friends and feelings at Longmen Inn. Now the hero can see that Su Qing has no friends but still has feelings, but the last bond of Farewell My Concubine has also been thrown away. I guess I was too forgetful later! The Taoist priest is quite suitable for Su Qing. Three worlds have already been written about Jianghu Dynasty Hegemony, so you can consider changing the taste. Judging from the plot, Su Qing should also be tired of the Jianghu Dynasty Hegemony. After all, this world has been conquered from Jianghu to the imperial court. Come on, boss! ! ! !

I found this book in the book shortage. It is a rare good book. The more I read it, the more I become more immersed in it. As long as it doesn't collapse later, all my monthly tickets will be yours.

The first volume of the Pear Garden really shocked me. It was deserted and quiet, and with a glass of white wine, people have to fulfill themselves after all.

All I can say is that as long as this book doesn't collapse later, it will definitely become a god, otherwise the online novel will die.

It's been a long time since I've seen such an amazing book! I couldn't stop after seeing the first picture. The author is definitely a veteran. The writing style is really strong. It's a pity that there is no female protagonist! The gold inlaid jade is still gone in the second volume. The heroine will definitely be more attractive.

After reading so many books in recent years, I think your name is among the authors with good writing skills on the Internet. Sure enough, only if you have a hobby can you write a good book! !

Damn, write about the situation, the background is grand and the protagonist's strength is nothing 🌹🌹🌹

Finally, I saw a real martial arts novel. In recent years, the martial arts from Qidian have all been written as game novels, with levels marked on each head... I personally think that the most exciting thing about martial arts is that no one knows the strength of the other before fighting, and can only judge through their own eyesight, the other's reputation, and experience in the world. It's useless to tell you how high your realm is and how deep your skills are... Kung Fu, two words, one horizontal and one vertical. Those who lose, lie down. Only those who win are qualified to talk about realm. For martial arts such as the traditional Jin Gu Huang Liang Wen, let alone the difference in martial arts between the Middle Earth and the Western Regions - the Middle Earth practices the eight meridians of the Qijing, while the Western Region monks practice the three meridians and seven chakras. Let's just say that they are all from the Central Plains martial arts: some people take it step by step and accumulate experience; Some practice the Yang meridians among the eight meridians, and some practice the Yin meridians. For example, Xuan Ming Shen first practices the heart acupoints when he comes up with his palm, and like the Immortality Secret, he opens up the Rendu and Du meridians from the beginning... Without help, who dares to say which one is stronger and which one is weaker? The realm of each family is different. Can you say which realm is considered first-rate and which realm is second-rate? At what level can one be considered a master? Third rate, but still a master... Not to mention that the title itself is ridiculous. . Just saying "first-class master" can only be regarded as an adjective. Only in the same world and in the same arena can there be recognized first-class masters. Like the Eight Tribes of the Dragon, it is recognized by the world that "Beiqiao Fengnan Murong" is a first-rate master. In The Deer and the Cauldron, the world recognized Chen Jinnan as a first-rate master. Besides, Grandmaster and Grandmaster are just honorific titles. Grandmaster is a state, but it refers more to the state of martial arts thought rather than martial arts cultivation. Ning Daoqi in "The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty" or Zhang Sanfeng in "The Legend of Heaven and Dragon Sword", who has better martial arts? But can you say that Zhang Sanfeng is not a master? Besides, there is a saying that is often said in martial arts, [You should not underestimate three kinds of people when traveling in the world: women, children, and monks]. Everyone knows the reason for this, so I won't repeat it. But why do you have this kind of Jianghu experience? Isn't it because it's not easy to see through a person? So everyone can only guess logically which identity is generally not easy to mess with. If a random person can immediately and accurately judge that he is a "second-rate master" by watching others play against each other, then why does he need this kind of experience? What is the use of those old martial artists and their half-life accumulated martial arts experience? Not to mention, the level of some novels can be seen at a glance...

After reading this volume, I felt a touch of sadness. Cheng Dieyi and the others were struggling to survive in troubled times, and Su Qing was also struggling in reincarnation, all seeking a living. The past experiences will eventually be lost in the long river of time. No one will remember it. Only Su Qing will remember it all.                                             I hope the author will give more words to the supporting characters to make the characters more outstanding. The one who left the deepest impression on me in "Farewell My Concubine" was Xiao Lezi, and so did this one, but they are different after all. In the original work, an optimistic and tough-tongued child ultimately chose to commit suicide. The sentence "How did they get into trouble? How many beatings did they have to take?" I still remember it fresh. The little leper in this article reminds people of madness and madness, but it does not break away from the color of the character itself. I hope the author can give them more spirituality, rather than a movie symbol, which originates from movies but is different from movies.         ，，，，， If you ask me what I'm missing, I don't know either🤔

To be honest, the author of this book is simply not suitable to write such an ordinary book about changing the world. The first dungeon is really well written. Except for the first chapter, there is no clue that the protagonist is a time traveler. Even so, the story is interesting and adequate. I won't talk about the author's writing style, I can't fault it. If the author has another book to talk about, I suggest the author write a single world novel. I feel that the author's writing is more than steady, but not flexible enough. What I mean by agility is that in different worlds, different backgrounds, and different social environments, the protagonist is a bit static and lacks agility.

The actor has many years of life, but the love is deep in the place, and there is only one old man left in the house. The story of hell is endless, and the play is hard to control. After a change, it starts again, and the only thing is that the most important thing cannot be left in this world.