Holy Demonic Body

Hehehe, here comes your comment. First blow a wave of rainbow farts. The author's use of words is really superb, and the scenes he writes are particularly vivid. You must know that environmental description is one of the three major problems in novels ≖‿≖✧ Strong! The pace of the plot is also very good, if it is a long fantasy. The fantasy world is very clear and clear, so the world view is relatively grand. A little suggestion: Why don't you have quotation marks in the dialogue between the previous chapter and the two chapters? It seems very laborious. If the first chapter seems very laborious, I don't know how many readers will be scared away. Also, the creation of your character image only clearly states the abilities. But the character's personality, appearance, and inner turning events are the highlights of the novel. Finally, the name, plot and character settings are relatively traditional and lack novelty. Maybe you will improve it later, so I won't say more. I wish the author who will criticize me one day will make this article popular!             ≖‿≖✧

The author is still okay, zbc

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